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Example: Jane digs in the flowerbed for her ring. Moves to the yard. I’ve seen this a bunch of times, but it still feels sort of wrong when I do it. I just want to know if this is “normal”. Th...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T08:28:59Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/34827 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Marcus Meier
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2019-12-08T08:28:59Z (almost 5 years ago)
Example: Jane digs in the flowerbed for her ring. Moves to the yard. I’ve seen this a bunch of times, but it still feels sort of wrong when I do it. I just want to know if this is “normal”. Thanks! Bonus question: are adverbs really so bad in screenplays?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-04-04T15:17:58Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 3