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Q&A Static Scenes that still Move the Story Forward

I've just read a tutorial about scenic techniques in novel-writing that recommends that a story should have a rhythm of static scenes and dramatic scenes. Here's an excerpt: Dramatic scenes are...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by robertcday‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T09:17:41Z (over 4 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar robertcday‭ · 2019-12-08T09:17:41Z (over 4 years ago)
I've just read a tutorial about _scenic techniques_ in novel-writing that recommends that a story should have a _rhythm_ of static scenes and dramatic scenes. Here's an excerpt:

> Dramatic scenes are tense and often eventful; something happens – a murder, a car chase, a demand for divorce. But dramatic scenes are not always sensational. They may explore subtle conflict or muted emotion, so that nothing ‘happens’ but everything is highly charged.
> 
> Static scenes contain more ordinary and restful moments, the lulls that occur before or after tension. But static scenes are not frozen like paintings. They should never stall the story or just fill in the moments between events. Their function is to provide verisimilitude and tension release.

The gist is that a novel writer should alternate between dramatic and static scenes to protect the wider story from being either too melodramatic or too dull/cosy.

On an intellectual level (and as a reader), this makes sense, but it leaves me unsure about how to write a static scene that still moves a story forward. So there's my question: **what are the ways of writing a static scene that provides _tension release_ for the reader but still moves the story forward?**

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-07-03T12:20:30Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 13