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My story begins with a woman minding her own business and is forced to fight for her life; against a grotesque (but unseen) creature. The creature is too strong for her, she isn’t strong enough to ...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T09:17:51Z (over 4 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/37403 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Edmund Frost
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2019-12-08T09:17:51Z (over 4 years ago)
My story begins with a woman minding her own business and is forced to fight for her life; against a grotesque (but unseen) creature. The creature is too strong for her, she isn’t strong enough to defeat the creature but she starts hitting it without tiredness; until she is forced to flee ( I thought that this would make the character stand out more ) I have read that to write a fight scenes the words have to be simple and must be carefully written - the rest of the story never seems to refer back to this very scene even though I think it could prove that the character has got courage and survival instincts - if I weren’t to write a fight scene at all would my character/victim seem less insightful?
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2018-07-03T15:16:00Z (almost 6 years ago)
Original score: 5