Edmund Frost‭

I suggest a popular literary technique called 'indirect characterisation' If your writing in first person; write about her thoughts and reasons and actions. If she is approached by someone who spe...

posted 8y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

As a habit I read some educational General Literature and Factual/Referance on Google Books (previews are free) booksgoogle.com www.writersdigest.com

posted 8y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

One of my characters, Mallory is a 37-year old mother who is willingly strict with her son, as repulsive as that sounds it turns out she is remorseful over her parenting decisions and her son is de...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

He sounds like a social character who has got all the attention a teenager (I'm not assuming he is one) could want - it’s good if he has some goals but too many would get tedious - what is the most...

posted 6y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Dream twists just spoil our senses of disbelief. I can see how that can be excetuted carelessly, but if done for the need of showing what the main character wants or fears most then maybe it would ...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

You have finished most of your novella, but need two more chapters If you are struggling when you are about to end the book, you should give yourself a pat on the back, and also give yourself more...

posted 5y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I am writing a realistic-fiction novel set in the USA during the Great Depression. I intend to use some stock characters to make the story colorful and to flesh out the culture of the period. Stoc...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

My character has a habit (or running gag) of pointing out plot holes in conversations with her friends who lie a lot. She is quick to tell them what fragment of their st...

1 answer  ·  posted 8y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I’ve written a plot for a long story. But it’s not easy for anybody to review because my characters’ dialogue and goals are all over the place, it’s often usually mixed up and I struggle to structu...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I introduced a young person (called Raven) who the main character was friends with in my story; Raven is an excellent student who the main character is also teaching music to. The story is the resu...

5 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I briefly read ‘Investigations Of A Dog And Other Creatures’ by Franz Kafka; I think that he was demonstrating satire by exaggerating a point that his canine protagonist was making about the availa...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

My story begins with a woman minding her own business and is forced to fight for her life; against a grotesque (but unseen) creature. The creature is too strong for her, she isn’t strong enough to ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I read that it’s approved of to have the protagonist to have deep relationships which I mean as friend-related bonds between people - because it makes the character stand out I’m asking this based...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

The more distractions you have in your narrative, the fresher the plot/character twist. They were used in ‘The Da Vinci Code’ and the Harry Potter series, to keep the audiences focussed on a differ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Characters in movies ‘28 Days Later’, ‘Jurassic Park’ and ‘The Day After Tomorrow’ made terrible impulsive choices that cost other characters their lives, but if it weren’t for any of those choices...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭