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Q&A How can I make an in-universe random event feel like it was really random instead of just RNJesus' will?

Some stories feature random events that bring about drastic change either to the characters or to the setting. A lottery draw, some gotcha that grants a special skill. Most of the times I find on...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Mindwin‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T09:33:25Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/38066
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Mindwin‭ · 2019-12-08T09:33:25Z (almost 5 years ago)
Some stories feature random events that bring about drastic change either to the characters or to the setting.

A lottery draw, some gotcha that grants a special skill.

Most of the times I find one of these in a story, they seem fake. Instead of feeling random, it feels tailored for the story: The random ability was just right to solve problem X, etc.

I am not talking about stories where the outcome of the event is the driving force of the plot as in a story about a lottery winner's life after they won the prize.

**How can I weave a random event into the story and make the reader feel like it was really random, instead of just some convenient manipulation for the sake of plot?**

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RNJesus (or RNGod) are terms coined from the computation acronym RNG (Random Number Generator) is when randomness feels fake and convenient. More on that: [https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RNGesus](https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/RNGesus)

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-08-03T14:12:43Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 16