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Here is what I mean. My character- Violet- started the play with a lofty attitude, but now her pride has been broken by her mother's death and betrayal of a friend. The scene begins with her reunit...
#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T11:52:23Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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Ariel
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2019-12-08T11:52:23Z (almost 5 years ago)
Here is what I mean. My character- Violet- started the play with a lofty attitude, but now her pride has been broken by her mother's death and betrayal of a friend. The scene begins with her reuniting with her brother- and she needs to tell him what has happened. I want the brother to become angry at their mother's killer. And I want Violet to come across more polite and empathetic. But how do I do that? At the end of the scene, both characters should be determined to fight the one who killed their mother.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-05-10T02:00:13Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 1