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If I had to play out this scene from the POV of the protagonist, it would be hard to transition from "redshirt" to "heroine" in a first person narrative. She - as a person - is the heroine from the...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T12:07:08Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/45764 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
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Oren_C
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2019-12-08T12:07:08Z (almost 5 years ago)
If I had to play out this scene from the POV of the protagonist, it would be hard to transition from "redshirt" to "heroine" in a first person narrative. She - as a person - is the heroine from the start no matter what the reader thinks. Her personality doesn't change. That's why I would play this scene out from the _monster_'s point of view. For the monster this is just another night and another prey. It could follow its prey and come to (false) conclusions about how she is just the same as every other prey. then, the monster will be surprised by the magical girl and the chapter ends with its death.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2019-06-05T13:06:20Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 110