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Q&A Can I use spoken English at some places over 'technically accurate English' in a general fiction?

I have written my novel as a 'first person singular' and in past tense. There are lot of times in it where I have written it as I will say it while speaking. I have used phrases which have implied ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T12:19:42Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/46303
License name: CC BY-SA 3.0
License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision by user avatar codeNewbie‭ · 2019-12-08T12:19:42Z (almost 5 years ago)
I have written my novel as a 'first person singular' and in past tense. There are lot of times in it where I have written it as I will say it while speaking. I have used phrases which have implied meaning but it's not technically accurate. Following is an example:

> "Ahh **don’t worry,** it means nothing, all it means as far as practical applicability goes is that you should not generate secondary emotions, **you know** like emotions about emotions" Susan said..

Especially the phrase ' **you know**' is some thing I use while talking which means I am asking the listener '_are you following what I am saying?_'

Is this acceptable?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-06-27T08:54:55Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 3