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If it's important to character or plot, liven it up a bit. Dress it with stage business. Add some thoughts or descriptions of the setting. I don't find it particularly dull in context. Not every c...
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#4: Attribution notice removed
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2019-12-13T12:00:14Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T02:43:05Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/a/7218 License name: CC BY-SA 3.0 License URL: https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0/
#2: Initial revision
If it's important to character or plot, liven it up a bit. Dress it with stage business. Add some thoughts or descriptions of the setting. I don't find it particularly dull in context. Not every conversation has to have fireworks going off. Sometimes you just have a quiet moment between two people.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2013-02-04T14:17:06Z (over 11 years ago)
Original score: 4