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If you want that in deep detail, provide a tour. If you want to cut on detail a little, make a scene of pre-heist briefing (or security briefing if that's the narrator's side). The leader describe...
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#3: Attribution notice added
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System
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2019-12-08T03:14:50Z (about 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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SF.
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2019-12-08T03:14:50Z (about 5 years ago)
If you want that in deep detail, provide a tour. If you want to cut on detail a little, make a scene of pre-heist briefing (or security briefing if that's the narrator's side). The leader describes key elements, may show footage - photos or video of more important elements, may show images - that way you can fine-tune the amount of detail you convey as you like - filtered through three layers of narration (1. preparing materials for the briefing, 2. actual briefing, 3. your own narration) the amount of detail conveyed to the reader can be as fine-grained as you only desire.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2013-12-09T12:45:10Z (about 11 years ago)
Original score: 3