How would I improve the language and structure of this farewell email? [closed]
Closed by System†on Jul 28, 2019 at 10:50
This question was closed; new answers can no longer be added. Users with the reopen privilege may vote to reopen this question if it has been improved or closed incorrectly.
I will shortly be moving to another a role within the same organisation and was wondering if you could advise on how I could improve the language and structure of this farewell email. It seems a bit drawn out at the moment and I'd like it to retain the sincerity yet exude a sharpness that will create future opportunities by extending bridges.
Dear all,
As many of you know, today is my last day with compliance. Through this farewell email, I wanted to thank you for your continued support and guidance. During the last six months, I have had the privilege to work with genuinely talented people like yourself, who have helped me grow both personally and professionally.
With my first rotation drawing to a close, I look back with pleasure on everything that we have accomplished together. I only hope that I find in my new role a fraction of the encouragement, gratitude and opportunities that I have found here.
I have really enjoyed my time and will miss working with you all. I owe you an enormous debt of gratitude and I wish each one of you, the very best in all your future endeavours, both professional and personal. Thanks again for everything.
Regards
This post was sourced from https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/10054. It is licensed under CC BY-SA 3.0.
0 answers
0 comment threads