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Posts by System‭

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Q&A Narrative arc in erotica?

Usually a story will have a narrative arc of increasing suspense: obstacles become more and more difficult to overcome, setbacks more painful, complications more confusing, the stakes are raised hi...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How much uncertainity will the 'general (Non-YA) fantasy reader' tolerate?

In my current project my goal is to go for the following narrative style within scenes: Show only what the POV-Char can see, hear,... sense. Show their emotional reaction (through body-feelings, ...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Q&A How to clarify between imagined sensations and "real" fantasy events?

I feel like the title is worded really bad, but I seem to be unable to find a better way. I am not a native speaker. Scenario A: A character is in an exceptional state of mind (i.e. drug use etc.)...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Male viewpoint in an erotic novel

Most erotica today is written by and for women, and bestselling erotica is narrated from a female point of view. The "male pornographic gaze" that sexualizes the female body has been considered off...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How much sex can I write if I'm after mainstream success?

I have three variations of the same storyline and cannot decide which one I want to write: erotic story turning dark and dangerous A young adult man and woman fall in love. It is the woman's fir...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to differentiate between two people with the same name in a story?

I am writing a story in which at some point two characters with the same name interact each other. I can't use their last name to differentiate because it's necessary for them to have no last name....

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to portray a character who has mood swings?

The protagonist of my trilogy-in-progress suffers from a serve case of Borderline Personality Disorder. Among his symptoms are continually splitting, unstable self-image, chronic feelings of emptin...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Averting Always Chaotic Evil

Always Chaotic Evil denotes an entire species in a fictional setting as outright evil - no matter how one treats them, they reward kindness with treachery and violence. Frequent recipients of this ...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Q&A Alternatives to second-person POV narration in RPG settings

I am someone with no formal writing background, who has come to love writing for the fantasy adventure role-playing game Dungeons and Dragons (fifth edition) during my free time. I am currently ru...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  edited 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Averting Real Women Don’t Wear Dresses

Real Women Don’t Wear Dresses is when writers portray female characters possessing traditional feminine qualities as being less desirable, competent and reliable instead of their tomboy foils. They...

7 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Quoting Yourself

I am editing a book for a writer who has quotes at the beginning of each chapter. The first chapter has a quote of her own. It's weird, but it's what she wants. Do I just treat it like the other qu...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do I say that someone is black?

Sorry if this is an ancient solved problem to ask in 2019, but I googled about this and Quora isn't really answering me. I searched for the words black and race and politically as key-words on thi...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Conflict and antagonist in a certain subtype of erotic novels

In his answer to my previous question, @Standback distinguishes two types of erotic storyline: stories in which the stakes are romantic or sexual stories in which the stakes are neither romantic ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to create a page turning effect if there is no suspense?

This is my first attempt at writing a novel and I am learning in the process. So my story is about a girl who is having an ordinary life with any standards and then she gets divorced and learns m...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to make a cool unmanly character [closed]

How to make a cool character who is really unmanly? The guy is bad at leadership, lacks endurance and strength while also being kind of a coward and having quite feminine facial features.

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Do readers need to identify with fictional characters?

On the modern day many people complain about how models, actors are damaging to society because people can't identify with them. Males actors or models which are ''too'' muscular are considered ''u...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Avoiding spectacle creep

It's common in stories for spectacle to build over time. Each story arc, the stakes get higher, the drama gets more intense, the villains get more dangerous, and so on. For a story with a fixed e...

7 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Averting Protagonist-Centred Morality

Protagonist-Centred Morality is when a fictional work is eager to point out when an antagonist does something immoral or distasteful but fails to acknowledge when a protagonist does the same or som...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A I'm producing a play with a character who the audience isn't supposed to know is alive, can I credit the actor in the program?

There isn't a theater SE so this seems like the best place to ask, but feel free to suggest a better place. I'm producing a community play with a character who's believed to be dead, but turns out ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to write dialogueless flashbacks?

In my trilogy, the protagonist and deuteragonist share a mental link, allowing them to communicate with each other telepathically. A side effect of this telepathy is that they enable the duo to obs...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Invoking Deliberate Values Dissonance

Deliberate Values Dissonance is when the morals of a character or culture in-story (whether historical or fictional) that modern people don't agree with are presented in-universe. Not because the a...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to Write an Eldritch Abomination?

My trilogy features an otherworldly monstrosity called Fenrisúlfr as it's primary antagonist, whose characterisation takes cues from Nyarlathotep, Sauron, Showa!King Ghidorah, Sutekh, Makuta Terida...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Will an explicit resemblance to an Actor put-off the readers disliking him?

One of the central characters in my novel, at the back of my mind looks like Benedict Cumberbatch. So while writing the story I have explicitly written that he looks like Benedict. It was also help...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to write an introductory dialogue? [closed]

What are different ways I can write a dialogue where a character is introducing himself to a woman in a professional setting? I don't want to write explicitly like this, "Hello Miss Emily, my ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to decide between usage of a paragraph and a dialogue?

While writing a novel which is a story told of what happened in the past, I am facing two different ways to present information. For an e.g., I can write the story in the following two different ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭