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| Edit | Post #5902 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
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A: Is the opening of this story intriguing, "dark" and smooth? I find it interesting and intriguing, I want to know more. However, what stroke me the most is the absence of important details. 1. He enters the strip club, no mention about the presence or absence of a doorman. 2. He sits at the bar, no mention about the presence or absence of a barmaid. 3. Is the... (more) |
— | almost 7 years ago |