Activity for methuselahâ€
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #9614 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #6333 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
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How would I improve the language and structure of this farewell email? I will shortly be moving to another a role within the same organisation and was wondering if you could advise on how I could improve the language and structure of this farewell email. It seems a bit drawn out at the moment and I'd like it to retain the sincerity yet exude a sharpness that will create... (more) |
— | almost 11 years ago |
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How can I improve the effectiveness of my examples to grab the recruiters attention? I am in the process of answering the question please indicate any leadership roles you have held for a particular job application but still feel as if my replies lack a certain crispness and flow. So far I have shown a friend who has provided some minute changes but I'm not entirely convinced. Any i... (more) |
— | over 12 years ago |