Activity for Krystalâ€
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
|---|---|---|---|---|
| Edit | Post #9812 | Initial revision | — | almost 5 years ago |
| Question | — |
Is my writing 'disjointed', and if so how can I fix it? First page of my fantasy novel. I'm told my writing is disjointed and jerky, but have no idea in what way! And it's driving me crazy that I don't know where the holes in my boat are so I can't really patch them. > This was a stupid idea. Heh, like all his others. His foes could have tailed and moreo... (more) |
— | almost 11 years ago |