Activity for H. Alley
| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #21140 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #18421 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
| Edit | Post #18223 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
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How can I describe nervousness? Becoming nervous in the heat of a situation. Perhaps you witnessed something not for the faint of heart. Like, how would I describe shaky legs without being so boring about it. (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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How to describe an angry voice in dialogue? I've been looking for a word to describe this tone of voice for a long time but never came across it. Now let me just spread a pinch of context. It's a first person novel, and our protagonist is very emotionally conflicted within. Dead parents, dead friends, blames himself etc. The only thing he has ... (more) |
— | over 8 years ago |
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How do I portray a particular moment as climactic? It's a first person novel, and the main character has just overcome some emotional and mental barriers in order to unlock his telekinetic potential, under the training of his mentor. > “Do it, Aiyzaya. I believe in you!” > “Let it motivate me.” I whispered, channeling my energy towards everything ... (more) |
— | over 8 years ago |