Activity for Schiller Rick‭

Type	On...	Excerpt	Status	Date
Edit	Post #19094	Initial revision	—	almost 5 years ago
Answer	—	A: How can I keep my writing from being perceived as "too complicated" Your order of imagery is not in order. I presumed the window was closed due to bad weather. But you had me thinking a minibus was outside because it was said last. Many times all you have to do is cut and paste your thoughts into better order as if a picture is being painted in a growing understandab... (more)	—	about 6 years ago