Activity for Schiller Rickā
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Edit | Post #19094 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
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A: How can I keep my writing from being perceived as "too complicated" Your order of imagery is not in order. I presumed the window was closed due to bad weather. But you had me thinking a minibus was outside because it was said last. Many times all you have to do is cut and paste your thoughts into better order as if a picture is being painted in a growing understandab... (more) |
— | about 6 years ago |