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Posts by Dan Hanly‭

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Q&A Using capital letters for shouting

I respect that with the power of language, we don't necessarily need to capitalise anything, because a description of how a character is speaking is more powerful. Take my example: The hooded ...

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Dan Hanly‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Elmore Leonard said Avoid Prologues... Why?

I've just spent the better half of a month writing and perfecting my prologue. It sets the tone for the rest of the story with an event which kickstarts the main narrative of the book. Why should ...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Dan Hanly‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Conversation with Multiple Characters

I'm writing a dialogue heavy scene. The protagonist has met with a group of mercenaries that he spent a great deal of his younger days with. He doesn't come to them for a catch-up however, he has u...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Dan Hanly‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Writing in a character's voice. How deep should I go with immersion?

I am writing a story that has ten main characters, each chapter is a progression of the story but from the perspective of one of the ten. As you can imagine, this presents it's own unique challeng...

0 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by Dan Hanly‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do I better handle my nameless main character when trying to retain mystery?

I have written a short story, and the main character is referred to as "he" right the way through - the idea being that this character is very guarded and mysterious. My plan was to not reveal the ...

5 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Dan Hanly‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Procrastination on a Crucial Scene in my Book

I'm in the process of writing a book and through my plans I know I have a fairly crucial, game-changing scene coming up. I can't help but put it off! I don't want to force myself to sit and write ...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Dan Hanly‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Normal structure for Dialogue paragraphs

Now I'm not sure whether this is something that's an accepted teaching with regards to structuring paragraphs, or just something that is commonly used... I'm talking about paragraphs that are stru...

2 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by Dan Hanly‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Should you "Show, Don't Tell" when your character is recounting events?

"Show, don't tell" is a popular ethos amongst writers, and one that is very important to writing engaging stories. However, I'm in a situation whereby my protagonist is recounting an event from a p...

1 answer  ·  posted 10y ago by Dan Hanly‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭