Activity for user1372
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Edit | Post #2049 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
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What revisions for this draft would be more readable and/or more humorous? Notes: 1. My audience knows that adrenaline and epinephrine are synonyms. 2. I'm new! I'm sorry if I abuse the site by posting this! 3. Please critique ruthlessly. 4. I would send by Facebook message to a girl I know, who's having a bad year. Draft: Excerpt from The Mechanic In the roles of coo... (more) |
— | almost 14 years ago |