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| Type | On... | Excerpt | Status | Date |
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| Edit | Post #29727 | Initial revision | — | about 5 years ago |
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Dialogue in First Person Fiction (Detective Mystery) Karl is my detective protagonist. His girlfriend, Jenna, is with him. He is hospitalized, and his boss, Rob Tucker, shows up for a visit. Which example of dialogue is correct? In true first person, can Rob and Jenna actually speak, or do I need to just say through Karl's eyes what they said? Version... (more) |
— | over 6 years ago |