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Is it bad to divert from the topic in a paragraph and continue in the next? Here's an example from my own writing (this is a first draft so there might be errors): > Turn for Kazuo's eyeballs. I take them to the table, but I don't eat them immediately. I look at them looking back at me. Like they always did. When I ate, when I slept, right the second I woke up. A rare sight... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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Is alliteration distracting and not very valuable/interesting for the reader? I tend to use alliteration a lot. This is an example from a story I'm writing: > "Let me get this straight," Aru said, sliding on her dress. She always felt frosty after failed fornication. "You're giving me two thousand yen because you couldn't get it up?" > > "It wasn't suddenly." Aru sipped her ... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |
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Should I use "could be" or "could have been" in past-tense narration? Examples: Using "could": > I looked at the flyer again, and then back at Mark. Very strange---meeting someone who didn't see me as a weirdo. But could it be true? Could there be a club dedicated to black magic? using "could have": > I looked down at the glass table, an onset of tears stinging my ... (more) |
— | over 8 years ago |