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Posts by hszmv‭

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Q&A How to make the reader think that the *character's* logic is flawed instead of the author's?

So this would be where we would want to use dramatic Irony. Set up a scene where the hero is presented with a similar yet distinct logic question and takes the opposite answer. One of the best ex...

posted 6y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to write a memorial plaque?

Generally, I would start with "On this spot on/in [full date or year of deed] [event occured i.e. 500 people gave their lives for the Union][reson it matters in a big picture i.e. and the belief th...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Is it bad if I don't like the "best" books in my chosen genre?

I had a similar issue with a standardized story from genre. I'm writing a lot of Superhero-genre stories and one of the stories I hate is when the hero's friend or girlfriend or some other close r...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How best to avoid the appearance of stereotype?

So this recalls a Key & Peele sketch featuring two office workers, one who is an ordinary office worker and the other who is a flamboyant gay stereotype cranked up to 11 who believes that said ...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How much realism do I put into a war simulation story for Young Adults?

Hell, the Animorphs series could get very frank at times with the themes of war and the moral implications of a guerilla war on children... There was a point in my reading where the ploy of having ...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How can I indicate that a particular relationship between two male characters is purely brotherly (Philia) rather than romantic (Eros)?

It's interesting that you identified Kirk and Spock as phillia as a lot of fan fiction terms are traced to Star Trek fandom having a Kirk Spok eros relationship as a core theme of Fan fiction. In ...

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Q&A 'The Chosen One' paradox

This is the beauty of the Oracle scene in the Matrix and the Beauty of Breaking the Vase (Upon entering the Oracle's kitchen, the Oracle tells Neo not to worry about the vase. Neo looks around for...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How does one add puns in another language?

Puns, by there nature, have a weird translation issue. Sometimes they just don't work because, they are play on words, but the pun doesn't work in the new language because those words don't sound ...

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Q&A How many characters are too many?

This isn't unreasonable. To give you an idea of a long cast list in a novel, take a look at the Harry Potter series. There are a ton of characters of various import to the narrative. Jim Dale, w...

posted 6y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Creating a logical framework for the concept of "decisional causality"

So my solution to this problem was the rule that can be boiled down to the following: The Past is set in stone, the future is clay. The present is the kiln. Basically, knowledge of a future even...

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Q&A Writing a Novel Set In The Future

I would say that this setting isn't unheard of and is easy for readers to forgive. The problem will be that technology doesn't always advance at the rate you expect it to.. the common complaint i...

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Q&A Is it possible that my short novel will be boring to my readers because it only has two characters and the location doesn't change?

From a movie/tv perspective the classic "12 Angry Men" has 12 characters (it's a jury) and never leaves the jury deliberation chamber save for the ending. Similarly, the Deep Space 9 episode, whil...

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Q&A Referencing modern pop culture in science fiction

I face the problem myself when I dabble in future SciFi stories and settings, I like to use a "Famous 3" where the third one is an oddball that is either comically modern compared to what we see Or...

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Q&A How are suspected persons referred to in news articles?

@F1Krazy does have a good answer but I'd like to add a few things. The age in U.S. is whether the accused is being tried as an Adult or as a Juvenile. The former is named and the latter is not. ...

posted 6y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Character, plot, and setting conflicts

A good Setting vs. Plot conflict I always like to use to demonstrate this is the Disney Film "Mulan". The Setting is Ancient China and the Plot is "Mulan must defeat the leader of the Huns, Shan ...

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Q&A Is it a bad idea to have multiple bad endings and only one good ending?

The game "Marvel: Ultimate Alliance" had a system where each side quest's outcome (and some choices that were tied to the main plot and couldn't be avoided) were recorded. At the end of a full pla...

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Q&A How do you know when to give up on a writing project?

So speaking as someone who has "abandoned" a 50,000+ word novel and its 50,000+ word sequel that had been written and were in various stages of editing, I think I can help out a little. And the re...

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Q&A Should I, and how should I develop a "filler character"?

Generally, trios work because a trio follows an Id-Ego-Superego dynamic. Two better display it, I'll swap out characters for two famous fictional trios: Repsectively, this can be the McCoy(Bones)...

posted 6y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Term for writing mostly in first-person, but switching to third-person for things the POV doesn't yet know?

I've done this a lot because a lot of my fiction takes queues from Comic Books which do this a lot (My first inspiration were the mid-2000s Superman/Batman comics which had some great mileage out o...

posted 7y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Non-linear style used by *Arrow*

"In Media Res" (literally "In the Middle of Things) would be a term used for any story that starts at some point in the plot that is not "ab ovo" (Trans: The beginning, Lit: From the Egg) and requ...

posted 4y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do you write boy & girl protagonists without turning them into a love story?

As yet another male with a female best friend, this happens frequently (I think I'm more often than not better friends with women than with men.). And I can say that there are some people who will...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A What is the voice called when the narrator is a secondary character?

Typically, this is an Epistolary First Person (on wikipedia it's listed as Epistolary novel) if the narrator is presenting facts after they have happened in such a manner as to be read as a false d...

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