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Posts by hszmv‭

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Q&A Should I defend my character's appearance?

There is a story that in the early days of Fonzi from Happy Days, a network exec said he wanted The Fonz to lose his leather jacket cause it made him look like a punk. The head writer agreed, but ...

posted 7y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to start a story after the inciting incident?

I highly recomend reading the novel "Holes" (the 2003 film is probably the only film to break the "book was better" rule, being 99% faithful, but I still recommend a read through). Long story shor...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A What style should I write a torture scene in?

I would advise a dream like haze of blending reality. Dreams can be influenced by real world stimuli (I once had a dream that I was with Scooby-Doo and the gang and we were trying to solve a myste...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Can a normal person investigate a murder?

Yes. Many cold cases (cases that remain unsolved and all leads provided by evidence have dried up) are kept alive by interested members of the public who want to find some closure to the victims,...

posted 5y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to implement a fictional language in my novel?

So, there are several ways to do this: First, translate into English everything except proper nouns (specific names of people, places, or things) or culturally unique concepts, and insulting words...

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Q&A How can I have a character introduce themselves as humble without making them seem arrogant?

I would say that the humble person should down play a thing they should be proud of, only to be admonished after the down play. The animated film "Superman: Doomsday (2008)" has a great example......

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Q&A In which sections of a research report is it appropriate to include citations?

It largely depends on the style you're writing your paper in, but typically you would include a separate page called works Cited that will give the full citation of all works used and is arranged a...

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Q&A Intentionally misspelling words in dialogue

I would also suggest the spelling change so that the first line is "Lookin' and lookin'..." as that is closer to how the word would be pronounced in a sing-song quality. If the speaker is the vill...

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Q&A How to write intercut scenes in a novel?

I do this all the time, and I tend to use short chapters that will contain one scene and break to the next chapter when done OR I will use a line break (either a center justified triple asterisk (*...

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Q&A Writing a novel that is set (semi-)inside an established universe

Another example that I'm fond of is acknowledging a work of fiction as a work of fiction within your own universe. This is frequent in the humor of "The Orville" where characters not owned by the...

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Q&A Dangers of being sympathetic to the killer

We tend to think of fictional characters in terms of "Hero" and "Villain" when this should not be a case. The character of focus in your story is the "Protagonist" and the element directly in his ...

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Q&A What are the top most important key elements for a computer game story?

As a life long player of the best known 4X game, Civilization, the "story" of the series is the rise to power of your "empire" and much of the play is about becoming the strongest world power on th...

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Q&A Is it OK to introduce a character to leave it simmering to a later date?

Perfectly doable. Consider the upcoming Marvel Movie "Black Panther." The hero and at least two of the other lead characters were introduced in 2016, two years (and five years) before his movie's...

posted 7y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A There's an actor with my lead character's name - how big a problem is this going to be?

I wouldn't put too much stock in it, especially if they're a Voice-Over Actor who only appeared in a decade or so. I would take a look at his acting credits i.e. which shows he's been on and look ...

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Q&A When my story has a powerful phrase but that loses its power when I read it again in the next day, should I keep it or remove it?

I'm going to echo the leave it for now finish your story crowd. It might actually work later if you can work it into some payoff in the future. I always like to point out things like "Hot Fuzz" ...

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Q&A Writing accented dialog guides?

I was wondering if anyone was aware of a quality guide or text translator that would allow for realistic accented dialog speech? Say I wanted to write a character with a Texan Drawl or a heavy Bro...

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Q&A Use of real organization in fiction

So, I would categorize three possible real life organizations: Government Agency i.e. a Government of a country controls this agency as part of it's administration. Political Organization i.e. An...

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Q&A Could I be overdoing it on my first story?

This stuff is called "The Bible" and is mostly exclusive to the right... it's essentially a way the writer can keep track of ideas, rules for the universe, characters, possible themes, how all this...

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Q&A Are the following examples violations of first-person limited?

The Animorphs fanchise used this exclusively through all 54 main title books (told the main story through a fixed rotation of one core cast per book), five "Megamorphs" books (told from a rotating ...

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Q&A Is it good to add 'I believe' at the beginning of the sentence?

If your working on a piece for publishing that will attack a figure or orgainzation, "I believe" could be useful to denote that the accusation is not based in anything provable. For example "Spide...

posted 7y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Creating a fictional place within an actual city?

I'd say who cares beyond the University students and staff. Most fictions fudge it somehow. I would say it matters if and only if the building in question is instantly recognizable to a general a...

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Q&A How to write from the male point of view?

I'm going to go out on a limb and say just write the character and let the chips fall where they may. There's a lot going on in the brain and we don't understand this. Although I appreciate some ...

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Q&A What are some conventions for creating a sense of urgency?

I do have to comment that your first example is getting kinda laughable in it's ability to cause a sense of Urgency... we all know it will be the last possible second that the bomb will be defused,...

posted 6y ago by hszmv‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Q&A Capitalization after interrupted dialogue

As a general rule, I tend to use dashes where the character is dramatically interrupted where as ellipses are used when it's a subtler interruption. I.E. Tony:"But at least Thanos doesn't kno...

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Q&A Just how Different are Male and Female Readers?

I wouldn't put too much stock into this. In the 2000s, the best selling children's book series were (in order from best to worst) Harry Potter, Animorphs, and Goosebumps. All three are book seri...

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