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Posts by Galastel‭

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Q&A Can dream reveals make good climaxes for a POV’s internal struggle?

The trope you're referring to is called All Just a Dream (tv tropes warning). While some authors can pull it off, it is usually considered a bad trope to use. The reason for this is that the "it's ...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A What is a good way to come up with original world building ideas?

I will answer this question quoting Neil Gaiman. Here is his complete answer to the question "where do you get your ideas?". A particularly relevant excerpt: You get ideas from daydreaming. You...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A In a script how can I signal who's winning the argument?

I agree with @Ash's answer regarding the fact that you can show a lot with body language. I would disagree with him however regarding what "winning" and "losing" would look like. Being excessively...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A The seven story archetypes. Are they truly all of them?

The archetypes are a descriptive framework created by scholars in order to describe stories. Someone had a theory, says every story fits into one of those archetypes. Any story you give them, they ...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Writing Longer Flashbacks

I am not aware of a "common practice" - writers are fickle beasts who tend to disregard rules. But there's nothing that says the progression of your story needs to be "linear unless marked otherwis...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Do I have to mention my main character's age?

There are a lot of things you don't mention in your story. You don't mention how many times a day your MC uses the toilet. You don't mention how many beauty marks she has on her body. You probably ...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do I write "Show, Don't Tell" as a person with Asperger Syndrome?

You say other's emotions are clear to you when people are giving verbal hints about them - when they're saying "this is fascinating" etc. This is one tool you could use in your writing. You can hi...

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Q&A 20 Minutes into the Future - problem with setting the period

I have just finished a short story, set in what is known as 20 Minutes into the Future - a time frame that's only a little into the future from our own. There is a change from modern times, but it ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A The unknown and unexplained in science fiction

Your question makes me think first and foremost of Asimov's robots. We know how they work, right? There are the Three Laws. And they have a positronic brain. Wait, what? What on earth is a "positr...

posted 4y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Famous mistranslations - correct them?

Often enough works of literature, particularly old classics, receive renewed translations. Sometimes, the older translation might contain mistakes. And sometimes, the work being an old classic, the...

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Q&A Proper handling of "sophisticated" English usage

@MatthewDave is quite right in saying that a sophisticated person's language would be distinguished by lack of 'lower-class' colloquialisms. Add to that impeccable grammar, and a rich vocabulary. ...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Describing a strong sexual attraction (on first sight)

You are telling that the human is attracted to the alien. Why not show instead? A picture is worth a thousand words, they say, so why not create that picture? Consider what attraction feels like -...

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Q&A How to describe a mythological creature that English has no vocabulary for?

The differences between 'fairy', 'elf' 'goblin' and 'demon' are not negligible. The fact that a dictionary offers you all of them, or that all have been used in different setting in the past, does ...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to make characters more than the words on the page?

In my mind's eye, the characters I write about are "real people": I do not ask myself what I want them to do. I ask myself what they would do in the given situation. I know their fears and their de...

posted 6y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Invoking Deliberate Values Dissonance

The values of the Middle Ages existed for more reasons than church dogma. For example, sleeping with a girl before marrying her meant a fair chance of her getting pregnant. Which was also why men w...

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Q&A "Stealing" jokes

If a joke is a century old and you've heard it told a hundred times, you can reuse it. You can modify it, you can build on it - by this point it's not "owned" by anyone. Trouble is, by this point y...

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Q&A How many characters are too many?

Consider, for example, The Lord of the Rings: you've got the Fellowship (nine characters), you've got Bilbo, Elrond, Galadriel, Theoden, Eomer, Eowyn, Denethor, Faramir, Sauron, Saruman, and severa...

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Q&A Is it important to describe every character of the storyline?

Remember your own days at school? Some people you knew well - they were your friends. Some you didn't know so well - classmates you weren't close with. Perhaps there were the people you didn't get ...

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Q&A Researching Future Technology for a Science Fiction Novel

The search term you're looking for is "Emerging technology". Focus on the field(s) that are of interest to you, since there are too many technologies to keep track of everything. Read up on the tec...

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Q&A Is it a flaw if a book is readable, flows well, and gets the point across, BUT you can tell that the author is a non-native?

I sometimes notice that a work of literature has been written by an immigrant. It's not just the sentences - it's something in the underlying world-view, the imagery, the way different things are g...

posted 6y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A "Too modern" words

In a story set in a fantasy version of 5th century Persia, I've been told by a beta reader that a boy wouldn't call his father "dad", (would use "father" instead), wouldn't say "no spoilers", etc. ...

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Q&A Occupational Hazards to being a Full-Time Writer

If I were a rich man, all day long I'd sit and write. To elaborate: What do you eat while you're writing your first novel? Did you manage to get your first novel published? What do you eat until...

posted 6y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Is my book too similar to Harry Potter?

"I am writing a story about a boy and a girl who are in love, but can't be together. Is my story too similar to Romeo and Juliet?" See what I mean? Many stories share similarities. If one story is...

posted 6y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to write dialogue for someone who is intelligent but barely speaks the language?

Two years ago I took a course with a new professor in our university - a fresh immigrant from the US, who had to teach in Hebrew. Said professor is one of the most brilliant researchers at our facu...

posted 6y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Dead as a point-of-view, how can you write first person narrative if that person is dead?

There should be a jolt when the main character dies, in fact when any character the readers sympathise with dies. Now, what to do with the first-person narration and the death? One option, is to ...

posted 6y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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