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Posts by Galastel‭

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Q&A Convincing argument about something I don't agree with

The world isn't all black and white - it's grey and gray. There are arguments to be made for dictatorship. Consider, at the very least, the famous joke "a camel is a horse designed by a committee."...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A 20 Minutes into the Future - problem with setting the period

I have just finished a short story, set in what is known as 20 Minutes into the Future - a time frame that's only a little into the future from our own. There is a change from modern times, but it ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A The unknown and unexplained in science fiction

Your question makes me think first and foremost of Asimov's robots. We know how they work, right? There are the Three Laws. And they have a positronic brain. Wait, what? What on earth is a "positr...

posted 4y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Famous mistranslations - correct them?

Often enough works of literature, particularly old classics, receive renewed translations. Sometimes, the older translation might contain mistakes. And sometimes, the work being an old classic, the...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Turning away from the 3-act structure - what guides my pacing now?

Not all stories follow a 3-act structure. As an example, Les Misérables is rather episodic in its nature: first there's the story of Bishop Myriel and how he meets Jean Valjean, then there's Fantin...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Introducing a character in the third act?

If a character appears in the third act and helps solve a major problem the main characters have carried for the two previous acts, that character is sort of deus ex machina - something previously ...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Writing in a Christian voice

Growing up in Israel, I am surrounded by Jews. Interacting with Christian acquaintances, and reading literature written by religious Christians, there are a few things I noticed - things that stood...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A The English language, if England had a dictatorship

There are multiple hints of dictatorial times within the English language. For example, have you noticed how farm animals have Anglo-Saxon names (calf, cow, lamb, pig), whereas meat derived from th...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to write painful torture scenes without being over-the-top

You might find it helpful to look at the Torture Porn trope, to have a clearer idea of what to avoid. A work would be called "torture porn" when it appears to seek to disgust the reader/viewer whil...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A What are the things to consider when writing a sequel to a novel from another author?

First thing you would need to decide is what you actually want to do with that sequel. Do you intend to write something that is basically "more of the same"? "More of the same", but more modern? Or...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How can I portray body horror and still be sensitive to people with disabilities?

To the best of my understanding, the main problem with the zombie genre is that it positions decay-disease-disability as non-human evil to be eradicated, and as a threat to humankind. (I don't nece...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to present an alien culture with different morals, without it coming across as savage?

@Amadeus mentions duels. A crucial fact to the understanding of duelling, mostly ignored in the modern media: it was the seconds' task to attempt reconciliation. So, in fact, asking someone to a du...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Could the cast of my book be more unique?

You're looking at "uniqueness" the wrong way, I think. Look, for example, at The Lord of the Rings: Frodo, Sam, Merry and Pippin are all hobbits. They come from the same place, they share the same ...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Proper handling of "sophisticated" English usage

@MatthewDave is quite right in saying that a sophisticated person's language would be distinguished by lack of 'lower-class' colloquialisms. Add to that impeccable grammar, and a rich vocabulary. ...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Is my story "too diverse"?

Is it alienating to readers who are white and straight to be put into the shoes of someone who is drastically dissimilar to them? Is it alienating for a modern American to read a story about m...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Not projecting myself onto my characters

Surely there's more to you than "mental illness guy"? Consider what other parts of yourself you could project onto a character. A hobby of yours can be your character's main occupation. A childhood...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Should the name of a mythological creature be capitalized?

Mythological creatures, or creatures you've invented, don't need to be capitalised, just like real-life animals. There's no grammatical difference between "a dog", "an orc", "a dragon" and "a manan...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Averting Protagonist-Centred Morality

I think you misunderstand what Protagonist-Centred Morality is. It's not just that the narrative "encourages the audience to root for the protagonist despite the immoral and unethical actions". You...

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Q&A Will my one sentence prologue work?

It is not uncommon for fictional works to start with quotes from real or fictional personages. Dune, in particular, makes heavy use of this tool, starting every chapter with excerpts from fictional...

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Q&A How do you escalate a story's plot after killing the Big Bad?

There are many ways you can go with a series after the Big Bad is defeated. Was that in fact the Big Bad? Or were they in fact a servant of an Even Bigger Bad? Perhaps they were, in some way, a v...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A What kind of protagonist or writing style is Jack Sparrow?

Sir Terry Pratchett had several characters who, like Jack Sparrow, were used sparingly in the stories of others, but had a strong presence both in terms of their impact on the story, and in terms o...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Can the prologue's POV be different from the POV of main story?

As others have mentioned, writing a prologue from a different POV than the rest of the story is common enough. The part I'm not sure about is writing the prologue in first person, while the rest of...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Interviewing a person for a character

In terms of building a character, what should guide you is what the story requires. If you need a mad scientist to make Frankenstein's monster, but the person you meet is nice and well-spoken, do y...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do I design characters for an open-ended series?

There are two cardinally different ways you can treat your characters in a series. In some series, the characters remain the same, facing the "challenge of the week". They do not undergo any signi...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How far apart can the dots be?

When you're writing a story, you know all the clues and all the connections. Since you know them already, they might well seem obvious to you. Are they as obvious to the reader? A good way to fin...

posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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