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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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How can I find short-story spinoffs for my fantasy epic?

I write epic fantasy; I've written two trilogies in a joint setting, and am writing further books in the same setting. I would like to start writing short stories for my setting as well - stories ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Are there online research resources that cater to writers?

I tend to run into a bunch of domain-specific questions when I'm writing, such as: What happens to a jet flying at low altitude, at super-sonic speeds, when its cockpit gets breached? What's the ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by So8res‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How could the surprise-villain thread have been less contrived in "Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone"?

Throughout Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, Harry is certain that Snape is serving Voldemort, and bulling Quirrell into helping him. At the climax, we learn that Snape is protecting Harry,...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What methods does Rowling use to establish Dumbledore as being wise and trustworthy?

In the Harry Potter series, Dumbledore seems to represent ultimate wisdom and authority. Harry (and the readers with him) hold him in awe; many times throughout the series Harry willingly accepts a...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Could a different structure for "Feast of Crows" have been a better solution to Martin's five-year-gap?

The latest two volumes of Martin's Song of Ice and Fire have been poorly received compared to the series' earlier books. What's interesting here is that Martin's original plan did not include thes...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I make a collection of essays / arguments more attractive to publishers?

I've written several essays and am still working on some that I would like to eventually get published. The issues I cover are on a wide range of topics ranging from Scientology to Piracy to Demo...

4 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by J.T.‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Why are some words in screenplays set in all caps?

I believe I understand this and I'm looking for confirmation. Examples: It has become a tugging match with the Weird Man shouting, "I'll take you to a taxi... I'll take you." Ahead, a group is...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by temporary_user_name‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Do these starting paragraphs make you want to keep reading? [closed]

OK, first, I'm not a native. So, what you do by instinct and a bit of research, I do by extensive research, including accents and dialog style. I’m dead. ‘But you have a chance,’ I was told, ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Mussri‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Quality examples of 'in medias res' starting sequences in SF literature

You can find my initial trials here, and, based on feedback, version two here. I was trying to create a sort of 'flashforward' opening (please don't cite Sawyer) for a novel. That is: of the 45 ch...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Mussri‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does this FAQ accurately convey the mission of DIY.SE?

The DIY stack exchange is currently trying to make our FAQ more useful to new users, and I wondered if some folks from this community could take a look and help us to define ourselves better. This...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Tester101‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How could my friend publish his Steve Jobs biography?

A friend of mine (no, really!) is well on his way of writing a unofficial/unauthorized biography of Steve Jobs. In my opinion it is a fantastic read and he did a lot of research and has a long list...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Patrick Klug‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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On copyright laws and plots

I was pondering a lot on the issue with copyrights on plots. Is having an identical plot infringing someone else's copyrighted work? I am fully aware that the character names are copyrighted and c...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Pacerier‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to fix awkward "sufficiently... that..." sentence structure?

I have written the following sentence, but I am dissatisfied with its construction. In particular, the that joining the two parts of the sentence reads somewhat awkwardly. Can anyone suggest a bett...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Faheem Mitha‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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I have compiled a poetry book with poems of 4chan users. It has a lot of vulgarisms, is it possible to publish something like that?

It has around 200 poems, a lot of vulgarisms, and many of them seem senseless.

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is a log line, and why are they bad?

The question is as per the title. I read about log lines on Query shark. Now I know what Wikipedia says about them, but I'm still not sure what they are, and why are they bad for writers / queries?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Spaceships - It or She?

I'm writing a Science Fiction novel and describing a space ship. Sea Ships are usually feminine, while space ships don't seem to be either feminine or neutral. Would you stick to one? Or would you...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Michael Stum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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A letter of recommendation

I am a programmer/engineer who has been asked to write a letter of recommendation for a colleague, who wishes it to help him pursue higher education. Since I feel it necessary, to be very professi...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Zasz‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How often do writers develop characters before plot, and why?

As someone who writes a little as a hobby, this is something that I haven't really thought about until just recently, but... Is it common for a writer to develop characters before actually coming ...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by JAB‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How little "fantasy" can be in a story and it still be recognizably fantasy?

How little "fantasy" can be in a story and it still be recognizably fantasy, and not mainstream fiction? The "recognizable fantasy" question is one I struggle with all the time. Fantasy exists on...

5 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I create drama in a story that is mostly political and procedural?

I'm writing a fantasy story about whether a teacher should be fired or not over teaching competency; most of the story revolves around the politics and the procedural process of the decision. So m...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Anybody know anything about examiner.com?

Apparently it's some sort of "pro-am" site. I applied to be a travel writer and they, uh, picked me. I'm curious if anybody knows where examiner.com is on a 1 to 10 scale where "1" is "Applicatio...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Malvolio‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Referring to oneself in first vs. third person in online profiles

Suppose I am writing a post/blog, how should I mention myself? For example, Ray Wenderlich (Site Admin) Ray is an indie software developer currently focusing on iPhone and iPad developmen...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is there anything wrong with saying "Thanks" several times in the same email? If not, how could I correct it?

E.g. here is an email I just sent: Hello X, Okay I see - thanks very much for all the code! I'll definitely have to take some time to study it before I can ask any questions. :) Als...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by InquilineKea‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does this paragraph make you want to keep reading?

Can you remember the last toy you ever bought? We do. Here at the St. Abattoir, London's largest toy store, your childhood is our business. We think of ourselves not as merely customer ser...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by user2325‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of digital rights management for self-published authors?

DRM (digital rights management) is being used in just about every electronic format, including files used in electronic readers. My question is whether this is a good thing or a bad thing for write...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Publishing a Children's Picture book -- Question about an App and a Printed version

I've written and had illustrated a children's picture book. I'm thinking of making this into an App for download from the Apple Apps store. I'm also considering looking for a publisher to publish...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Richard‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Sending a children's book manuscript to an agent or publisher with illustrations

I've written a children's story and had it illustrated. It's a picture book. I've heard that publishers prefer to receive manuscript only — not illustrated, unless the author is the illustrator. ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Richard‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Querying for a setting-heavy speculative fiction novel

I'm an attentive follower of Janet Reid's Query Shark, and I've learned a lot. But Reid doesn't represent speculative fiction, which seems to present wrinkles of its own. Particularly, Query Shark...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are examples of fiction books picked up by publishers after being self-published?

I've seen some references to commercial publishers picking up a self-published novel if it's been selling well. Can you point me to a few specific examples of this happening? Fiction only, pleas...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do you develop a strong female character?

Are there specific characteristics that one should strive for when trying to develop a strong female character? Is it truly dependent on the genre of the book, or are there certain elements that ca...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Magazines taking submissions for short stories?

Does anyone have or know of a list of magazines (print or online) accepting submissions for short stories? It would be nice if it could be broken out by genre and payment rates (if applicable).

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Pros and Cons of different styles of publishing

I was reading on the meta site that someone thinks we're hostile to self-publishing, and I read over some old questions looking for evidence. I didn't really find signs of hostility, but I certain...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Kate S.‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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"All of a sudden..." ?

I am writing a manuscript for a novel. It's my first attempt, and often I find myself wanting to write "suddenly" or "all of a sudden". I do this when I want the scene to change in an instant, or...

5 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Tim Chaves‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What's the distinction between "vanity publishing" and "self publishing"?

This question came up on the pros and cons of publishing avenues question; when I tried to look it up, I found the results confusing. For example, SFWA's explanation of publishing types gives the ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Finding words through meanings

Is there a place or a type of dictionary or even a good method, that instead of searching for a word, I can search for a meaning and get more words that have similar idea or meaning? For example, ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by xenon‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What breaks suspension of disbelief?

So much of Sci-Fi and Fantasy requires the viewer (or reader) to suspend their disbelief: The speed of light can be circumvented, magic works, vampires are real (and may or may not sparkle), etc. ...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Jeff‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Preventing genre-savvy second-guessing in murder mysteries

In a murder mystery, most of the story is generally focused on figuring out who the murderer is; in "Fair-Play" mysteries, it's assumed the murderer is a significant character in the book, and the ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Complimenting on solid structure with no major flaws

When reviewing fiction, there's a certain quality that's very important to me, which I can best describe as being "solid." By which I mean: the story is well thought-out, well constructed; it flows...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does this convey that I recommend the anthology I'm reviewing?

Here's a snipped-up version of a review of an anthology I wrote a while back (full original review here). Most of the stories were pretty good, a few were superb, and there were a few poor ones. Fo...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Example of a fictional story without any characters (the story being 1000+ words)

Guessing that there is no such example, but if there is, I'm very interested in knowing about it. Just as a short example, just to make it clear it's possible; the example is not intended to be a ...

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by blunders‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I check if an ISSN is properly registered at issn.org?

How do I check if an ISSN is properly registered with issn.org? I found a tip on wikipedia to try link like "http://www.worldcat.org/ISSN/1021-9749" to see if an ISSN is registered, but for the ISS...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by al_b‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Do all main characters require equal development?

I have been doing some work on character development for my novel. I found that though I can write pages about the main character, other characters, who have an important role and will be there for...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it safe to create a wiki for a book (or something featured in it) before the book is published?

I'm working on a sci-fi novel, and it contains a lot of fictional creatures, which are in some ways separate from the novel because I came up with them a while before I actually got the idea to wri...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I strike a balance between setting and plot?

I'm not a fan of Tolkien's work, but it's relevant to my question, so take it as a reference point. I love linguistics, culture, and worldbuilding, but sometimes have difficulty focusing on specif...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Jon Purdy‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Why do writers use pseudonyms?

It's common enough -- recently I was looking for Seanan McGuire's newer book only to find it was published as "Mira Grant". Why would an author do this?

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Billy ONeal‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Will the word "seek" be associated with the word "sick" if it is present in the title of my book?

I'm planning to title a book "Taiwan Seek." The book is about starting a classified ads website in Taiwan. So I thought about short words that are related to classified ads: want, seek, looking fo...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it wise to publish a novel as an e-book, and how would I do it?

I'm considering publishing my novel as an e-book (since I'm very techy) before I take the usual "paperback" route. Is this a wise choice? Also what would I need to do? (steps).

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Where can I publicize a website I have developed for writers?

I am not a writer, but I have developed a website for them. Where can I advertise and publicize it?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by morpheus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How should this ‘be going to’ be revised?

I don't know if I can ask about this in this site. But anyway I'll give it a shot. (This question is a spin-off from EL&U.) Here is a skit from a radio English conversation program, dealing wi...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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In what order should I describe a setting?

For instance I'm describing the park of an art museum in a foggy day. I'm not sure if I should start with the fog, wind, grass, threes, walking paths, buildings, stairs or something else. Is there ...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭