How to write a short, and persuasive headline? [closed]
Closed by System†on Dec 6, 2016 at 11:34
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I have the following sentence that I am thinking of using as headline `
Shop online. Locally.
`
However, I am not sure if this headline connects well with it sub-headline.
Pick up the goods you can't get anywhere else in the places you go everyday.
Hence, my question is, is the headline clear, grammar-free, persuasive, and does it connect well with its follow-up sentence, the subheadline.
Thanks in advance, and for any clarification, let me know.
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