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I have the following sentence that I am thinking of using as headline ` Shop online. Locally. ` However, I am not sure if this headline connects well with it sub-headline. Pick up the g...
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System
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2019-12-08T05:46:33Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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John
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2019-12-08T05:46:33Z (almost 5 years ago)
I have the following sentence that I am thinking of using as headline ` > Shop online. Locally. ` However, I am not sure if this headline connects well with it sub-headline. > Pick up the goods you can't get anywhere else in the places you go everyday. Hence, my question is, is the headline clear, grammar-free, persuasive, and does it connect well with its follow-up sentence, the subheadline. Thanks in advance, and for any clarification, let me know.
#1: Imported from external source
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System
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2016-12-03T18:11:42Z (almost 8 years ago)
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