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Q&A How to evoke wonder in the reader, when there isn't an incredulous character?

A "fish out of water" character can serve as a reader proxy: whether it is a wondrous view, an unusual custom, or what have you, the character experiences and responds to them, and through him - th...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#4: Attribution notice removed by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-12T21:57:19Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision by (deleted user) · 2019-12-08T08:08:13Z (almost 5 years ago)
A "fish out of water" character can serve as a reader proxy: whether it is a wondrous view, an unusual custom, or what have you, the character experiences and responds to them, and through him - the reader.

But what do I do if there's no "fish out of water character" for whom the situation is novel? How do I evoke wonder at the grandeur of an Alhambra-like palace, for example, if my POV characters have been born there, and all the astounding beauty is their day-to-day? How do I draw attention to a custom that is strange to the reader, but is as common to the characters, as seating on a chair is to us?

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-02-23T22:26:10Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: 6