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Q&A Making similies and metaphors work as intended [closed]

Similies are like the Reddit 50/50 challenge: you either get something very good, or your eyes will melt off. I mean, you can ruin the mood with a bad one and make yourself a laughing stock. Metaph...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Mephistopheles‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T09:14:34Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/37259
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar Mephistopheles‭ · 2019-12-08T09:14:34Z (almost 5 years ago)
Similies are like the Reddit 50/50 challenge: you either get something very good, or your eyes will melt off. I mean, you can ruin the mood with a bad one and make yourself a laughing stock. Metaphors are more, well:

> **Simile:**"Oh come on, his heart is soft like a plush toy, I don't want to make him feel bad."  
> **Metaphor:**"Oh come on, he's such a plushie heart, I don't want to make him feel bad."

In both cases, the key is somewhere in the analogy, if that's shoddy you fail. What I can't figure out is what makes an analogy shoddy when it's (scientifically speaking) accurate.

**How to know if my analogy is as weak as my will to live?**

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Note: I won't commit suicide, that goes against my programming.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2018-06-26T22:15:22Z (over 6 years ago)
Original score: -8