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Q&A How to write cleanly even if my character uses expletive language?

I'm writing a story that I'd like younger readers to pick up. I and they know and understand that some situations are far better expressed with one f-word than a thousand milder ones. I'm keeping m...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by iamtowrite‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

#3: Attribution notice added by user avatar System‭ · 2019-12-08T11:20:47Z (almost 5 years ago)
Source: https://writers.stackexchange.com/q/43540
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#2: Initial revision by user avatar iamtowrite‭ · 2019-12-08T11:20:47Z (almost 5 years ago)
I'm writing a story that I'd like younger readers to pick up. I and they know and understand that some situations are far better expressed with one f-word than a thousand milder ones. I'm keeping my narrative clean, but when I write the dialogue, I don't know what to do.

Should I:

1. describe, as in:

2. or should I use made-up terms, such as _frak_ from [Battlestar Galactica](https://youtu.be/r7KcpgQKo2I?t=19):

3. also, I could use a milder word like _crap_, _shoot_, and the likes.

4. replace with a place holder, as in:

**Note** I've read answers like [this one](https://writing.stackexchange.com/a/16783/37111) ("you have to eat before you [defecate]".) But that waters down the expression a lot for what I want.

#1: Imported from external source by user avatar System‭ · 2019-03-15T00:59:24Z (over 5 years ago)
Original score: 22