Activity for John
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| Edit | Post #28216 | Initial revision | — | over 4 years ago |
| Edit | Post #27541 | Initial revision | — | over 4 years ago |
| Edit | Post #27535 | Initial revision | — | over 4 years ago |
| Edit | Post #25563 | Initial revision | — | over 4 years ago |
| Edit | Post #25404 | Initial revision | — | over 4 years ago |
| Edit | Post #19228 | Initial revision | — | over 4 years ago |
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How to link two sentences properly? I have two sentences: 1. In general, the better the equipment, the higher quality of production you will end up with. 2. We choose our equipment very carefully. To link them together, I have to use the word "hence", but I am not sure if that's the most appropriate. It comes out as: > In general, ... (more) |
— | almost 6 years ago |
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How to confidently attract the other party to your side? I have the following sentence: > Once they realize they have no chance of defeating you, they'll end up joining you. I feel this sentence may come across as a bit "cocky" because I would want the opposing party to join my side, but at the same time, I feel that if they feel insulted, they could dec... (more) |
— | about 6 years ago |
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How to link two sentences? I have the following sentences: > Anyone can use stock footage. and > Only you know how to use it correctly. I am wondering if it makes sense to combine them as such > Anyone can use stock footage, only you know how to use it correctly. I am implying that even though these stock footage may be ... (more) |
— | about 6 years ago |
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How to simplify a sentence so that a younger audience can understand it? I have the following sentence: > Pocket squares are a standout amongst the most vital apparatuses for a man of style. It's important to have the correct pocket square for the correct event. I feel the first sentence is a bit too advanced for the average reader. I am trying to see how to scale it do... (more) |
— | over 6 years ago |
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How to remove generalizations from a sentence? I’m writing a paper and I have these sentences that are a bit problematic. I feel they generalize a bit and could be rewritten in less words. I’m kindly seeking suggestions on how to improve the below sentences. > The biggest mistake that women can make in their lives is to have a baby with the wron... (more) |
— | over 6 years ago |
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How to write a short, and persuasive headline? I have the following sentence that I am thinking of using as headline ` > Shop online. Locally. ` However, I am not sure if this headline connects well with it sub-headline. > Pick up the goods you can't get anywhere else in the places you go everyday. Hence, my question is, is the headline clea... (more) |
— | over 7 years ago |