How to link two sentences properly? [closed]
Closed by System†on May 11, 2018 at 12:36
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I have two sentences:
In general, the better the equipment, the higher quality of production you will end up with.
We choose our equipment very carefully.
To link them together, I have to use the word "hence", but I am not sure if that's the most appropriate. It comes out as:
In general, the better the equipment, the higher quality of production you will end up with. Hence, we choose our equipment very carefully.
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