Kale Slade‭

Well, from what I can see, shy characters are more introspective, meaning they reflect inner emotions more than expressing themselves. This means heavy descriptions and less dialogue. Instead of ha...

posted 6y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Ok, so I currently have a visual novel (For those who do not know, it's a video game that's almost all story. The character may have a few choices in the matter, but most of it is about watching th...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So, for all of you who post your stories online, you may know my pain. For those who don't, I'd like to post some of my writing online on sites such as Deviantart and Wattpad. However, I've been r...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I have two characters, the male being sort of a jerk, but lightening up later in the story, and the female is...very hateful. But a person who read the first chapter asked me if they were going to ...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

I have two female characters, one who is lesbian, and the other bisexual. However, I am male. So not only am I to write the opposite gender, which I actually feel more comfortable doing, for some o...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So, in a WW2-ish story featuring a co-ed military, I have a female soldier who is very kind and caring. I'm setting her up to be a mascot and somewhat of the postergirl. Trouble is, she dies furthe...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So, with the recent craze in waifu games, I've decided to try my hand at making one. I have a semi-intricate plot with twists, and some events planned with their own snippet of story. Problem is, I...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So, I have a novel idea where the lead characters (seven in total), all have to be introduced in the first scene in my novel. I've already started with a basic idea, but I wanted to know if anyone ...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So, I am a person who writes titillating stories. Problem is, I want a way to tell people what I write in a way that doesn't seem like I'm some sort of pornstar or filmmaker. Because "I write porn/...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So, I have a character who starts off a complete ass to everyone. She hates the world, especially the protagonist. Then again, she had no parents to her memory, her people are enslaved and continuo...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So, my story doesn't have a romance subplot until way later in the series, but I think that there are elements of the romance very early on. A little background info: The story is set in a fantas...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So, I have a character who was going to just be an unlikable character at the start of the novel, but now I want to make her more caring towards certain people, like the innocent character. Thing i...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

Disclaimer: Also works for guys, if you have the problem, but genderbent. So, in my plots, I typically have a "tough girl" character in my thing. She's confident and upfront, and is stubborn to th...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So, I have a kinda loudmouthed character who's always the first to fight and first to go on the offensive (This is a fantasy, so she fights a lot.) But, later in the story, she comes across someone...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

So, I have a couple moments in a fantasy story where I want the heroes' actions to actually have consequences (Well, that are really impactful to the story.) One is where the MCs kill a minor lord,...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kale Slade‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭