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Posts by HNL‭

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Q&A Attributives in dialogue

'Asked' is generally not considered a said-bookism by most editors and readers AFAIK. In fact, I always use it when a character is asking a question. Because something like "'But how can that be?' ...

posted 12y ago by HNL‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Does this passage convey an appropriate mix of seriousness and levity?

The following is a standalone passage from a collection meant to deal with topics of psychology, philosophy and self-help. The question is: Is the quirky style helpful in driving home the point, o...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by HNL‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How can I make description more natural to me?

First of all: There is an entire spectrum between telling a disembodied story and painting every little piece of unnecessary detail. Both writers and readers have their preferences with regards to...

posted 12y ago by HNL‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How does one include sign language in a dialogue?

If one character is using sign language and lip reading while the other is speaking normally, how do you represent the lines of the former? Quotations with "he signed" attribution or italics? E.g. ...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by HNL‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How far into a speculative novel should one go before introducing the central conflict?

By speculative, I mean mostly science fiction, fantasy or intrigue. For example Neal Stephenson's Anathem, which is a 900-page book, goes well past the 200-page mark before the central conflict be...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by HNL‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭