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Posts by sesquipedalias‭

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Meta Notifications for actually *new* questions

I recently subscribed to notifications for new questions posted on the site, but as a result I'm being spammed with a daily list of questions that have any change, including very old questions with...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  edited 4y ago by ArtOfCode‭

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Q&A Detail vs. filler

How can I minimise the "filler" text that I end up writing when fleshing out a scene with detail? An appropriate level of detail seems to me to be a fundamental requirement for good prose. Whateve...

7 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by DPT‭

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Q&A As a discovery writer, how do I complete an unfinished novel (which has highly diverged from the original plot ) after a time-gap?

Especially for a discovery writer, the first draft of a novel is often as much an exercise in planning the final version as it is an attempt to actually produce that final version. It may be best t...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A What's the difference between time-tested and formulaic?

One way to model the role of structure in storytelling is to think of "layers". For example, at some very-high-detail layers (which I would call the lowest layers) a story is made up of a sequence ...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  edited 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭

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Q&A Tools to overcome a block from: "My words are bad"

There are different kinds of progress that you can make as you write. You can produce text that makes it into a specific draft. You obviously need to do this eventually, and perhaps you even do i...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  edited 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭

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Q&A Rapid change in character

Time is an illusion in storytelling--one that you, the author, create. You can skip millenia just by saying that they passed, and you can spend as many pages as you wish to describe a single moment...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A "Dear Stack Exchange, I am very disappointed in you" - How to construct a strong opening line in a letter?

"Dear SE, I don't even know how to express how disappointed I am in you--literally. Because I don't know all the facts. But all the indications I've seen make me fear that the full facts would only...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A What makes a character irredeemable?

I think there are two dimensions to this. The first is: what makes a real-world person irredeemable? A fictional character with the same traits will then, presumably, also be irredeemable. I thin...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Introducing evil characters before the evil deeds take place

I understand your question as asking: is it possible for the reader to know that a certain character is evil, from that character's introduction, and before that character actually commits any evil...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Should I use the words "pyromancy" and "necromancy" even if they don't mean what people think they do?

These terms are very often used to mean magic, and I've never before encountered anybody discussing the ancient greek etymology. You are totally safe using the modern meanings. In general, words ...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Point of View Confusion

When you present the story as a character experiences it, it's third person limited, or third person subjective PoV. When you don't do that (but still use 3rd person), it's third person omniscient...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Help, I cannot decide when to start the story

You should definitely tell the story you want to tell, and not some backstory that leads up to it. You are not starting your story at the point that would make sense if you were writing a comprehen...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to detach yourself from a character you're going to kill?

Don't detach yourself emotionally from the character. Rather, experience the character's death as a major part of their arc. This is not a real person who is gone once dead; this is a fictional ch...

posted 5y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A What are the major weaknesses of Writing Excuses as a resourse for learning the craft? [closed]

I ask as somebody who loves Writing Excuses (https://writingexcuses.com), and relies on the podcast heavily as an educational resource. My writing ambitions are well aligned with their stated scope...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How to write a non-fiction book?

It seems to me you need to answer some more basic questions first. What do you want to write about? Why do you want to write about it? Who is your audience, and why will they read your book? The ...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Spicing up a moment of peace

You seem to suggest that a paragraph that has no other function whatsoever within the narrative, beyond providing an evocative pause, is somehow special, or maybe even "pure". Of course, such a pa...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Can I name a male character Artemis?

I don't know of Artemis in ancient greek being used as a male name, but, for what it's worth, in modern greek Άρτεμις is the female name (same name as the godess) but there exists a male version to...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do we know if a dialogue sounds unnatural without asking for feedback?

Your goal here is to engage your intuition in ways that will help you assess your own, written work. (Everything in this answer applies to your dialogue, but also to all your writing in general). ...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do I start off in web comics?

[This answer addresses the storytelling part of the question, not the webcomics-drawing part.] I've found Brandon Sanderson to be an excellent teacher. He focuses on: 1) "mainstream commercial ...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Secondary characters in character-study fiction

Adding a couple of points to @Mark Baker's answer (please read that one first). It is fine if the secondary characters exist solely for the purpose of supporting the main character, but don't let ...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Is it uncompelling to continue the story with lower stakes?

As Pat Rothfuss said on Writing Excuses, there are things that can happen to characters that are "worse than death". The "existential threats", especially because they are such a cliché, are also j...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How can I make "acts of patience" exciting?

This answer to the question Averting Real Women Don’t Wear Dresses introduces a distinction between acts of patience and acts of daring. [...] when it comes to telling a story [...] acts of d...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A How do I stop my characters falling in love?

You are letting the characters develop naturally, according to what feels right for them, rather than forcing them to conform to an abstract plot point. This is good, of course. Now, if you really ...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A What are good places (online) where a community of writers can get together and share their knowledge about writing?

It would be nice to be a member of an online community of people who are knowledgeable about writing, willing to directly help eachother in a format such as Q&A (like here on SE), but also enga...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Q&A Character is called by their first initial. How do I write it?

The reader only needs to be told how "G" sounds once. You can put the explanation in-story, e.g. the character says or thinks 'I hate it when Bob calls me G, I can just hear him thinking "Gee whiz"...

posted 4y ago by sesquipedalias‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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