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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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What is the art of designing names?

If you read names from popular novels you feel like the names define characters. They fit perfectly to the personality of character. For an e.g. Harry Potter, Robert Langdon, Jason Bourne, etc. I ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can my story take place on Earth without referring to our existing cities and countries?

I come from worldbuilding.stackexchange because people suggested I post my question here: My story shall take place on Earth with the human race as the dominant species. I imagine the technologica...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Tom B.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it bad to describe a character long after their introduction?

I have a tendency to forget to describe character's appearance. But I always describe them, though often a little while after their introduction. So, how long after someone's introduction is "accep...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by A. Kvåle‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is using a different voice for protagonist's narration and dialogue ok?

My protagonist uses a lot of extensive vocabulary and is quite verbose. The novel I am writing is a first-person narrative, and my protagonist is the narrator of the novel. An extensive vocabulary...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Abhishek Dey‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to pick a proper pen-name for online writing?

I have an ambitious idea of writing fantasy/erotica and turning it into a web comic (and get crazily rich, of course), for that I need a username/pen-name. I need it to be catchy and memorable fi...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Graphite ‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to positively portray high and mighty characters?

What I mean by "high and mighty" (though I realise this term does not exactly paint anyone in a nice light) are characters who know their worth and know themselves to be better than numerous other ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by FMB‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Averting Real Women Don’t Wear Dresses

Real Women Don’t Wear Dresses is when writers portray female characters possessing traditional feminine qualities as being less desirable, competent and reliable instead of their tomboy foils. They...

7 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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MLA: Source Author has the same name as me

For a paper that I am writing, I have encountered an issue in which one of my sources has the same last name as myself, of which in in-text citations, makes it appear as if I am citing myself. Do I...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Josef Daniels‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How important is payoff?

I'm developing a story with the following basic plot: At the start, my main character's motivating question is "Where is my brother?" As the story progresses, other problems and motivations get i...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by PlutoThePlanet‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Am I allowed to use art (album covers) in my book?

Am I allowed to use art (album covers) in my book? If not what sort of permission would I have to obtain? The album covers are not in the public domain.

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Gus Owen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I convince my reader that I will not use a certain trope?

Imagine a fantasy story in which there once was a very powerful evil divine being, but it was defeated long before the beginning of the story. For the story it is very important that it was defeate...

7 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by PoorYorick‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When is it ok to add filler to a story?

After a couple iterations I came up with the "skeleton" or summary of my story. I have read many places and guides saying "if it's not advancing the story and can be removed without affecting it, ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Exe‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is starting In Media Res compatible with a Three-Act Structure?

I have a story in mind which I am confident will fit a three-act structure very well. However, I am uncertain about the exposition that I have been writing, as it feels a bit stifled, almost as tho...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Arkenstein XII‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Why do authors use variations on a character's name within a single story?

I am having trouble understanding why authors use multiple version of a character's name in the same story. I feel it can make it harder to follow the story. Why do writers sometimes write the sam...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Renae Richards‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Authorship when author leaves the organization that published the article?

A friend wrote an article. She was an employee of a medium-sized national non-profit organization (in the US). The article was published and was sold at a very affordable cost by the organization...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by aparente001‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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how to make enemy of mc to fall in love with him? [closed]

My mc poses some strange shadow powers which he tries to hide and in one quest he met his enemy who also has these powers. They both end up fighting each other and the mc slows her down and escapes...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by touka chan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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In an academic paper, who should be listed as the author of a community-authored document?

I'm currently writing my bachelor thesis, which will involve citing the Angular docs. Angular is a web framework developed by both community developers and employees of Google LLC (Google is the pr...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by PixelMaster‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to help the reader wrestle through historical atrocities which would be considered normal to the POV character

I'm writing historical fiction which is set in ancient China. My MC is a historical figure who really did go into battle as a woman. Women in the ancient world were abused and mistreated. Males sl...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Caspian‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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If I wouldn't want to read the story, is writing it still a good idea?

I struggle with forming full-fledged ideas. I'll come up with a snippet of an idea, have a hard time fleshing the idea out, and then lose interest before the idea becomes an actual story concept. ...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Alexis Strain‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to Write SEO friendly blog posts

How can I write blog posts that are SEO (search engine optimization) friendly? I know there is lots of content available out there, but I want to know how to start writing the post as SEO friendly.

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Prasad_Joshi‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do we write a movie script with a view towards establishing all of the visual symbolisms and how they should be interpreted?

How do we write a movie script with a view towards establishing all of the visual symbolisms and how they should be interpreted? Often, movie scripts often only have dialogues and some very brief ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are the indentation rules for the paragraph introducing a bulleted list?

I'm writing a formal document for my company where it'll be shared and used by a number of teams. Unfortunately, we don't have any official standard style guide to follow, so I've attempted to be a...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Troyen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should I include an appendix for inessential, yet related worldbuilding to my story?

I'm of the opinion that a story should stand on its own; any worldbuilding that is necessary for the plot and story to function should be part of the story. However, at the same time, the world I w...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Matthew Dave‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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The who, when and where of what has been written

Question: Is there a resource that categorizes existing fiction works by themes based on the authors' demographics (e.g. gender, age, historical period, geographical location, etc...)? For instanc...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by _X_‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Using published pictures for a book based on a true story

I'm going to write a book based on a true story. I want to know if for a book cover I could use real photos of the people who were in that story. They are dead but their pictures are published on ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by user39779‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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In a stage play, how should the script refer to minor characters whose names are irrelevant?

Problem I'm writing a play that includes a number of minor characters who only exist for a scene or two. They are defined by their personality traits, not by their professions, and their names are...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Thunderforge‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Starting from future smoothing your way to present

Ok, so the hook for my novel is a quote from the future that my protagonist will eventually say. But I need a way for my novel to go back to present tense. In what way can I smooth my novel back to...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Sarah‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is a sequel allowed to start before the end of the first book?

I'm writing 2 stories simultaneously. The first one spans 17 years. The second picks up where the first left off... but only about 25% of the way in. The sequel seems to work best if I introduce ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Evil Sparrow‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write a nice frame challenge?

When answering questions on Stack Exchange, some of us challenge the assumptions of the author. These frame challenges can often be quite popular answers. This popularity, however, can simply be a ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by AGirlHasNoName‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it a bad idea to have a pen name with only an initial for a surname?

My name is Ana Novkovic and I'm about to start writing and all that. I really really don't like my last name Novkovic. It's so hard to pronounce and I worry it would just distract readers and not l...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Ana‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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...and then she held the gun

In the short passage I am writing, the starting point is that one character is being held at gunpoint, and the end point is that she now holds the gun, having disarmed the opponent. The idea is t...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by _X_‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I radically time-jump for my epilogue well?

I'm working on a branching narrative kind of story, and the entire story focuses on the reader uncovering a mystery in the house that they're in. There's only one ending where they survive. In th...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by tryin‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I become a better writer when I hate reading?

I like telling stories, but I don't care so much for reading them. It's not for me. But the number one advice to become a better author is to read a lot. Is there anything else I can do? EDIT: ...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should we avoid "nonsensical" or "unclear" metaphors?

Should we avoid "nonsensical" or "unclear" metaphors? I am not sure if this is a case of "nonsensical" or "unclear" metaphor, but sometimes you have certain phrases that doesn't seem to be suited f...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Indicating fill pieces in a script

I'm writing a script that involves an interview with a person a la 60 minutes or Behind the Music. I'm a little confused if the "fill pieces" should be formatted as "recorded" or "prerecorded" in i...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Karen Kelly‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Breaking dialogue with actions from another character

This can get... confusing, which is why I tend to avoid it, but sometimes, I really want it there. “What?!” [said Character B.] I laughed, giving her a minute to process my words. “You’re get...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by spoopydumpling‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A flower's head or heart?

I’m currently writing a story and one of my characters is a butterfly. In one of the scenes, she manages to run away from a bunch of hungry lizards and hides into a flower; let’s say a Zinnia. Wh...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by vanity‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Past vs. present tense when referring to a fictional character

What would you write when referring to a fictional character in a non-fiction work? e.g. Tom Sawyer is a boy, he has no parents, he goes on adventures or Tom Sawyer was a boy, he had no parents, he...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by codeo‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Co-branding a book with a website

For the last several months, I've had a a professional assignment writing an ongoing series for a well-known website. It was repurposed from a book I wasn't able to sell to a publisher. It's been ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Chris Sunami‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do you transcribe a dialogue when abbreviations are used?

How do you transcribe a dialogue when abbreviations are used? For example, when people uses acronyms like FBI or abbreviations like a.m., do we just write them as we write them when they're in a d...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does every chapter have to "blow the reader away" so to speak?

I amended some of my chapters so that they're more intriguing and engaging for my readers. But there's one particular chapter in which one of my beta-readers stated, "It's intriguing, but it doesn'...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Dawn Kelli‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Revision secrets for keeping the meter and improving the beat

I sometimes write poetry. The creative process for the first draft can be summarized in these steps: I first choose a global structure (e.g. a ballad, a sonnet, a free-stanza-but-fixed-verse, etc...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by _X_‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should I write in a style that is more conducive to a situation I am describing or write it the way I normally write?

I am writing a short story that describes a dream that I had as a child. I wrote a first rough draft and had my girlfriend read it to give me some feedback. One thing she criticized is my writing s...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by user3661841‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should I explain the reasons for gaslighting?

I have an ambiguous script situation, 2 co-protagonists begin gaslighting the MC. They each have ulterior motives which they don't say. The reader is intended to infer the lies through contradictor...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by wetcircuit‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How much web presence should I have?

I am getting ready to release my first fictional novel. At the moment I have zero web presence (besides E-mail accounts). I am considering using Amazon's Kindle Direct. Before releasing should I ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Igor‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it advisable to add a location heads-up when a scene changes in a novel?

In my novel, I have a scene at home which changes to scene at the office which is completely different. I have written it in a way that in a line or two the reader will understand the scene is chan...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to represent jealousy in a cute way?

The main character (which is a girl) of the first romance I'm writing would feel jealous sometimes of her love interest, but I want it to be a cute trait or even a setup for funny scenes, not a ver...

6 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by KLTKGK‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write a convincing religious myth?

In my story the protagonist hears, in a temple ceremony, the reading of a religious/mythological text. Now in the actual story, I don't need the text itself (the role of the text in context, and th...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by celtschk‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to convert dialogue in to paragraph?

This is my first time writing a novel. In my novel, there is a part of the married life of my protagonist who is a woman. I don't have any experience of married life so I have taken inspiration fro...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Write a story based on characters from an old novel

I am considering writing a "history" of the Morlocks (based on the characters in the H. G. Wells novel). Question: Is this allowed, or do I need permission from his descendants?

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Igor‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭