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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Does this beginning hook the reader? [closed]

Guide lines Q no. 4: This is supposed to be the opening part, but certainly not the whole of the first chapter or page for that matter... I'm not exactly sure anyone would take 30 seconds to read t...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Mussri‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Why do hardcover books retail for more than three times the cost of softcover books?

One thing I've noticed while browsing bookstores is that hardcover books tend to cost more than softcover ones. Oftentimes a hardcover book that's five times the price of a paperback doesn't have ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Kalamane‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Citing in a paper: one citation for two paragraphs?

I'm writing a short paper on macroeconomics; the professor gave us two tries, I submitted the first try, and now got my feedback. The feedback is: "The first paragraph could also deserve a referen...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Marie. P.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to determine rates to charge as a freelance writer

While I have a few articles published, they were easy fixed rates. Today, however, I've received this email (identifying details removed): We need a writer to put together descriptions of ----...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Mark Mayo‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Coming up with names for species in fiction?

When you are writing a story that is set in a fantasy world (maybe our world with just one made-up element, or a completely different world), what is a good way to come up with names for species th...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Canina‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Press Kit proof-read in exchange for an app license?

I would like to find someone who would proof-read a Press Kit of an Mac OS X app in exchange for a license. Do you know any website / service where I could find some English native speaker, ideally...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by piobyz‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does my story structure for an ensemble zombie story sound effective?

I'm working on a novel about the psychological struggle of 7 characters. It's got an ensemble cast, where every character has the same importance. I've got a structure for this that sounds good to ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by robizeratul‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are some examples of modern original plots?

In a comment on this answer, a valuable community contributor suggested that it is possible to be totally original in writing, despite the fact that other valuable community members have stated tha...

5 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by justkt‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I learn how to outline, so I can write like an architect?

I've just watched one part of Brandon Sanderson's lecture on writing, the section entitled Gardeners & Architects and I realised I'm a Gardener, almost exclusively. This often ends up with me w...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Pureferret‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I check if an ISSN is properly registered at issn.org?

How do I check if an ISSN is properly registered with issn.org? I found a tip on wikipedia to try link like "http://www.worldcat.org/ISSN/1021-9749" to see if an ISSN is registered, but for the ISS...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by al_b‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is the following piece of text comprehensible and written in good style?

I am a PhD candidate and I am having difficulty in communicating effectively in writing. Specifically, this post is a piece of text submitted for critique and, in addition, explains what I am tryin...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by mfrank.23‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it acceptable to mix how you address the reader in an instructional Wiki?

I'm working on a Wiki article that explains to new developers how our product life-cycle works. Originally, my goal was to completely avoid the word "you" and use a more general description like "...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by ray023‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Text referencing protected, trademarked™ and copyrighted© names, what is the correct procedure?

When writing an academic essay, if I was to reference Microsoft or Facebook, should I write Microsoft™, Microsoft® or just Microsoft? What is the difference?

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by IEnumerable‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I accurately represent young adult dialogue?

There was a recent question that caused quite a stir around here, not so much for the question itself, but more the purpose of the question. That aside, there was a valid question being asked, and ...

5 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it safe to create a wiki for a book (or something featured in it) before the book is published?

I'm working on a sci-fi novel, and it contains a lot of fictional creatures, which are in some ways separate from the novel because I came up with them a while before I actually got the idea to wri...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What marketing techniques are effective for short story eBook collections?

I have a collection of short stories that I'm currently selling in the Amazon Kindle marketplace, and one of the biggest hurdles to actually getting my works read is lack of exposure. My passive p...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Strozykowski‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is the process for publishing academic papers?

While studying in my first term as EPIR student I had to prepare several papers. I gave those to my family and friends, to read and comment upon. I was surprised when they advised me to publish the...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Gajus‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How does the 10,000 hour rule apply to writing?

The 10,000 hour rule, popularised by Malcolm Gladwell, says that: the key to success in any field is, to a large extent, a matter of practicing a specific task for a total of around 10,000 hour...

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Vision/dream as an effective opening?

I'm looking for opinions on the effectiveness of this opening scene. It's a vision, not that he knows that at first. He thinks it a dream and won't quite act on it straight away. The vision was giv...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Nick Bedford‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Different kinds of editors

I've noticed references to different kinds of editors such as copy editor, line editor and development editor. I'd like to know the different categories of editors and their job descriptions.

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Sky Red‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What style suggestions are common for which words are used in hyperlinks?

With a purpose of avoiding "More details here" style links that do not provide any information in the link itself, what styles are common/popular/suggested? A good example case (with bold as the p...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by MrHen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How To Avoid Using Cliches In Storylines?

How is it possible to avoid cliches in storylines that you are writing? Obviously, there are external sources of influences as you read more and more. It would be possible that we are subconsciousl...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by JFW‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Writing a very complex relationship

I am writing a webcomic, and have come upon a snag, I need two characters to like each other very much, but one is the slave of the other. In the comic, there are characters who find and use power...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Tucker Morgan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should a flashback be in past tense or past perfect?

Assuming the story itself is in past tense, normally when I go further into the past I'd use past perfect: He had first met her at the grocery store, six months prior. However, which is more...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Yamikuronue‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to make a letter interesting?

I have a question regarding the art of letter writing. I believe in the old-fashioned way of maintaining pen friendships (not necessarily a relationship, but could be) through hand-written letters...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Victor123‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Punctuation and capitalisation in poetry [closed]

I'm writing a poem entirely without commas, periods, colons, dashes, emdashes, etc. However, near the end of the poem I name a city and I want to capitalise it. On one hand, I think it would be j...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by JAM‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can I use my own previously published magazine article in my own book

I had an article published for 1st rights in a magazine. Can I use an excerpt or all of the article in my own ebook? I now own the copyright and am unsure about the rules of fair use pertaining to ...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Gardener‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's a good program for tracking submissions?

What's a good program or technique for tracking submissions? I need something that'll keep track of who I've submitted to, when, if they've replied, and preferably tell me how long it's been out. A...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Writing a programming book: how to present directory structures

What is good/preferred way of presenting directory trees in programming books? My main criteria are following: It should be readable and intuitive It shouldn't take too much page space It shou...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Piotr Sobczyk‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Dialogue writing practices?

First time novelist, long time writer here. I'm looking for creative writing exercises to help with my dialogue. Any ideas?

4 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by TheIrishGuy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How many errors per page volume is typically "okay" in a book?

Suppose I'm in charge of getting a three hundred page book published. I'll do all reasonable things to get it proofread, but still there is a chance that some errors will persist. Now the book goe...

4 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by sharptooth‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When to use the character's name and when to use she/he?

This is the first short story where I'm using actual names for the characters. Here is a sample: "Sorry for the question," Jun said. "But why don' you have friends?" Ling glanced at him, t...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should this sentence be included in the Executive Summary?

I found some examples of good and poor example of executive summaries here. Everything seems fine but in one of them, they included this sentence - "All calculations can be found in the appendi...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Sajib Mahmood‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to write great movie review?

What should we write in a movie review?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by pramodc84‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Attributives in dialogue

I normally stick with "he said" and "she said" to keep things simple and transparent to the reader but wondering about questions. Is "she asked" and "he asked" appropriate when a character asks a q...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Slick23‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is being paid by the word/page making American books longer?

I buy quite a lot of literature, mostly of academic nature. One thing I have noticed is that books by American authors always tend to be more explicit and contain more examples, regarding whatever ...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Anders‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How does one go about publishing erotica, and how far is too far?

I write erotica, it started out as an amusement to see how far I could go, but it became a real passion after three or four stories. I have even published a few online and those stories have become...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Evil Spork‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Copywriting Course

This is my first post, so apologies if I'm posting this in the wrong place. I've been working as a freelance SEO blog/article writer for almost a year and a half. While I enjoy the job, I am gett...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Tracie Sherlock‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should the transition sentence be placed in the end of the current section, or at the beginning of next section?

When in the same chapter, I finish a section and want to connect it with the next section I am not sure what is better. Let's see an example: Section: "Bus" A bus was very popular and chea...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by gpierris‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How Important are essay writing conventions in the university level and above?

I go to a CEGEP, which is basically pre-university in Montreal. In my Introduction to English class, I had a teacher who allowed us to go around the typical essay writing conventions. Conventions l...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Zolani13‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Help! I've got Writer's Block

I really want to write, but as soon as I sit down and set pen to paper, my mind goes blank. I can't think of anything to write. Sometimes I stare at my screen for hours; doesn't help. If I do th...

7 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by newyellowshoes‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do flashbacks break up short stories too much?

Recently, I wrote a short story that contains a flashback in the middle that was used to explain a major plot point in the story. Does a significant scene set as a flashback break up the flow of a ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by kuwaly‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is writing a light read or "chick lit" a good option for an aspiring literary fiction author?

I live in India and here light reads and "chick lit" have made a great impression. The youth are picking up such books like petrol on fire. Even non-readers are giving reading these genres a try. T...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by J A Tagala‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to separate scenes in a chapter?

I have multiple scenes in a chapter, sometimes from different POVs, or different locations/times. Now I would like to make it clear to the reader that they have left a scene and are entering a new ...

5 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should my readers be able to identify with the bad guy?

I'm in the process of defining the characters for a novel. It is a crime fiction, with a really strong focus on the characters. I hope to construct really rich, complex and clearly defined characte...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Carl Seleborg‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are these fictional musings convincing or overwrought?

I've been working for some time on a story about a detective who finds himself alienated, delusional and hopeless while trapped inside a dystopic, postmodern dream. This segment voices some of the ...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Edward Rose‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is calling this process a "convergence" accurate and clear?

I planning to write about the convergence of our real world and the computer reality world. My plan to develop on this idea is to describe this convergence as a "merger" between our real world and ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by xenon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does this convey that I recommend the anthology I'm reviewing?

Here's a snipped-up version of a review of an anthology I wrote a while back (full original review here). Most of the stories were pretty good, a few were superb, and there were a few poor ones. Fo...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is a discovery writer?

From an answer to this question: How do I successfully structure a long fiction piece? I think I can infer the meaning from the usage but some elaboration would be helpful.

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by One Monkey‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What revisions for this draft would be more readable and/or more humorous?

Notes: My audience knows that adrenaline and epinephrine are synonyms. I'm new! I'm sorry if I abuse the site by posting this! Please critique ruthlessly. I would send by Facebook message to a...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by user1372‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭