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I have two sentences: In general, the better the equipment, the higher quality of production you will end up with. We choose our equipment very carefully. To link them together, I have to use t...
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System
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2019-12-08T08:47:59Z (almost 5 years ago)
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#2: Initial revision
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John
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2019-12-08T08:47:59Z (almost 5 years ago)
I have two sentences: 1. In general, the better the equipment, the higher quality of production you will end up with. 2. We choose our equipment very carefully. To link them together, I have to use the word "hence", but I am not sure if that's the most appropriate. It comes out as: > In general, the better the equipment, the higher quality of production you will end up with. Hence, we choose our equipment very carefully.
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System
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2018-05-10T17:18:52Z (over 6 years ago)
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