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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Emotional arc types

Assuming this vocabulary: the narrative arc is the arc which makes the plot go forward, while the emotional arc is the arc which engage the character on a deeper, not always logical level. While t...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by laancelot‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Handwriting speed

Currently I am 22 years old. I have a very bad handwriting. Also, I kinda feel I write slow when compared to other students of my age. Back in 10th grade, I was so slow that I was unable to finis...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Beyond.Multiverse‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Secespitus‭

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Averting Bathos

Bathos is a storytelling technique that consists in the rapid succession of 2 “moments” with conflicting tones. This trope occurs when a serious moment gets followed by a gag. One of the many, many...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Thesis writing: consistency of symbols

I'm writing a thesis about Basel Accords. In a section, I use the letter w to indicate the weights of the assets used to calculate the capital requirement. In another section, can I use again the...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by CarLaTeX‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a convention about the use of Old English in Hymns? Is it wrong to modernise the words?

Although most hymns were written in earlier centuries, I notice that modern-day collections of them tend to keep the use of old English in them. For example: Use of Begger instead of the more mo...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by fluffykittycute‭  ·  edited 4y ago by Monica Cellio‭

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Can I use Stephen Hawking's name in my Science fiction book? [closed]

I wrote a science fiction book in which, Alien species comes on earth and they meet with Dr. Stephen Hawking. Is it legal to use his name for the book?

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Niranjan Mahajan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Secondary characters in character-study fiction

How would a story flow if I made the secondary characters solely for the purpose of showing the reader how the main character has grown though the years? I'm thinking a 10 year span right now. They...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Big Sky‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Alternatives to develop relationships without dialogue

I have to come up with an idea (this is an assignment) for a story between 1 or 2 characters without dialogue and with a length of 90 seconds, so I know it's totally possible, however, when it come...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Santi Tinjacá Rivera‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Simplistic word editor suggestions needed

I am looking for a minimalistic word editor for my creative writing. Basically I would like something like the “notes” app on OSX just with the option to save your writing as a separate file. Does ...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by user5227744‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Where's the balance between realism and story? [closed]

Mark mentioned in his answer that plotholes aren't usually the end of the world, and that I shouldn't sacrifice too much of the story and the characters for the sake of logic. But there's a breaki...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Mephistopheles‭  ·  edited 4y ago by Canina‭

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How much should I pay the copyright holder for the right to translate a book and sell copies?

Suppose I'm a local publisher. If I want to translate a book, print it and sell translated copies, how much should I propose to pay to the copyright holder? Is there some acceptable percentage of b...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Yola‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a good reference book on allegories used in literature?

Is there a good reference book on allegories used in literature? I am looking for a reference book that gives references to use of allegories in the creative literature. For example: If a novel use...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a "right" way to interpret a novel? If so, how do we make sure our novel is interpreted correctly?

Is there a "right" way to interpret a novel? If so, how do we make sure our novel is interpreted correctly? I have been told that there's no way of interpreting the true meaning of a book written b...

6 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Secespitus‭

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How do I cite previously published print school newspapers on now online school newspaper?

I'm the adviser of a school newspaper that publishes exclusively online now. We have a page dedicated to revisiting the archives of our paper (60 years worth!). I cannot piece together how to prope...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by TheChant‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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'This one' as a pronoun

I'm writing a story in English but I'm not a native. I’m a Brazilian Portuguese speaker. It bothers me how repetitive and ambiguous pronouns can be. In my language we can use the equivalent to ‘th...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Louisr‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Getting an editor after the second draft

Losely related with my latest question: Should one invest in a professional editor before querying? I've finished - not without sweat - my second draft. While I'm satisfied with the overall result...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to eliminate standoff between "Lengthy" vs "Concision"?

Often while writing a software requirement/change-request documentation, I need to include the quoted requirements descriptively, the impacted modules, the changes provided both in UI and in logic....

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Karan Desai‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do writers need a business bank account?

My question is simple: do writers need a business bank account? Or can they use a regular account for saving and declaring tax on their earnings? Further, do writers need to declares themselves a...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by peanut‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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In ancient writings, was it usual to address the reader?

I am writing a textbook, in where, just for fun, I would like to present the concepts as if I were telling a story. Again, just for fun, I would like for the writing to sort of emulate an ancient w...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Eduardo‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is another word for "character-building"? [closed]

I want to say that the author uses Character A's "character development" to explore Character B. In other words, the author builds on the personality of A to exemplify the nature of B. What is an...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Aniket‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Using font to highlight a god's speech in dialogue

At one point in my story, the characters are addressed by a god. In the ensuing dialogue, this god has a more archaic way of speaking, but even so, I'm wondering if it might be a good idea to visua...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Llewellyn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I portray a character with no fear of death, without them sounding utterly bored?

Imagine a fantasy hero with a 'time reset' ability like the protagonists of Groundhog Day or Edge of Tomorrow: they can 'rewind time' up to a few hours, resetting their own physical state and the r...

5 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Stephen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Rapid change in character

A story I am currently working on contains a scene where a figure with a certain character quite unexpectedly has a change of heart, and I am having difficulty finding a way of smoothing the transi...

7 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by A Lambent Eye‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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Should I use the words "pyromancy" and "necromancy" even if they don't mean what people think they do?

If you look up the exact definition for "pyromancy" or "necromancy" they refer to divination using fire and the dead, respectively. However, if you were to ask a layperson what those words mean, t...

9 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should I stick with American terminology in my English set young adult book?

I am writing a book that is set in England, but because I would get the book published in America I don't know what terminology to use. My main character is in the equivalent of 7th grade but in En...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by McInnis ‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it confusing to name a chapter after a non-POV character?

I've got another chapter title question. In the first chapter of my story, a significant secondary character is introduced, and I think it makes sense to use the character's name as the chapter ti...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Llewellyn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How could the disregard for both plot and dialogue tell the story?

I want people to understand what I write, but I do not want to use conventions such as plot or dialogue to tell a story. Without a plot I have been criticized of not having written a story, but s...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by cælvm‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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How do we distinguish how a character pronounces a word and how it is spelled in a dialogue?

How do we distinguish how a character pronounces a word and how it is spelled in a dialogue? For example, some people pronounce words in a different way than they should, how do you show that in a ...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is this kind of description not recommended?

I think I read somewhere that when writing, you shouldn't describe characters by their characteristics i.e. The tall man walked across the room Is this true? Maybe I'm misremembering

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Technical specification for webservice (developers-oriented) - examples, methods & instruments

Good time of the day, community! Hope, that my post won't irritate too much, but rather will be helpful for someone in future. I already made some progress myself (I mean some raw unfinished vers...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Anton FromButovo‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Where should question marks be put in fragmented lines of poems?

For example, in the lines: Say what good really is a life, When so thoroughly deprived of joy Is my restless mind, Hurting constantly, in a dreadful strife? When it needs so many lies, ...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by PsyPhi‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What kind of name should a fantasy author go by?

I'm currently in the middle of writing several fantasy books and, even though I'm not done with any of them, I can't stop thinking about how my name will appear on my books once they are finished. ...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Sage Piche‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Avoiding episodic writing

I'm working on a novel that will have at least three distinct sections in three distinct locations (the two main characters start in the first location, travel through the second location, and one ...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Chris Sunami‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does writing regular diary entries count as writing practice?

One of the most common pieces of writing advice I hear is that you should write frequently and often. Writing regular entries in a diary should fit this criteria, but I'm hesistant to call my years...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by ObsoleteUsername‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to tell if my writing is nonsense? [closed]

So I am writing a book, the start of the book sounds interesting even to the my "board" of readers. After a while I had 586 words in total SO FAR,I am not sure if my writing is nonsense. This is my...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by FluxedScript‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a name for the technique in songs/poems, where the rhyming pattern primes the listener for a certain line, which never comes?

Usually used for comedic purposes, for example in Shrek: Welcome to Duloc, such a perfect town Here we have some rules, let us lay them down Don't make waves, stay in line and w...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Sean‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Use of punctuation in song lyrics?

https://fireemblem.fandom.com/wiki/The_Edge_of_Dawn_(Seasons_of_Warfare) The following is the short version of "The Edge of Dawn". Reach for my hand, I'll soar away Into the dawn ...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Formatting a conversation

In a novel, how would one best represent a recorded conversation between two people played back to a larger audience? The normal rules apply regarding quotation marks and beginning a new paragraph ...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Richie Hayes‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Reusing story title as chapter title

I've come up with a good title for my story, but it would also work really well as the title for the first chapter. However, I wonder whether it's at all advisable to do that. Do other stories do t...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Llewellyn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A pulse, a throb, and a beat

I wrote a passage where one of my characters heard beats, (i.e., the sound) then he found the beating object and, when he held it in his hand, it started throbbing like a heart, (i.e., the feeling)...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by vanity‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to display a duet in lyrics?

I wonder if someone can tell me whether there is a convention when laying out a lyric to show different parts (or even a chorus). In my novel, there are a number of poems and lyrics. They are set i...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Miriam‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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English - Acceptable use of parentheses in an author's name

My legal name is Barbara but I have gone by Babs since I was in the 4th grade. I have written a children's book and wanted to list my name as Barbara (Babs) but my editor said that it might not ap...

5 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should I self-publish my novella on Amazon or try my luck getting publishers?

I have completed my novellas first draft which is 32k words long. For all the reasons, I was doing research as to whether self-publish or try my luck getting a publisher. I should tell you that ...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to make philosophical ideas more relatable?

The consequence of some ideas can be so distant in the future or so foreign to most people that creating a relatable setting or character to exploit them can be hard, I'm being told. In particular...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by davcha‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a good resource on all different formatting and writing styles throughout history?

I noticed writers in the past used a different format, in terms of punctuation, indentation, quotations, spacing, and paragraph length, and the format can be different from author to author and fro...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's the proper way of indicating that a car has reached its destination during a dialogue?

What's the proper way of indicating that a car has reached its destination during a dialogue? For example, two persons have a conversation, and they reach a destination, is there a standard way to ...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Would I be able to have my characters play "Dungeons and Dragons" in my book?

A big part of my book is that the characters play the tabletop RPG "Dungeons and Dragons". There is no content actually showing them playing it, but they do mention it. Would that be allowed?

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by unikai‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Monica Cellio‭

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Should I include details relevant to a "close reading" in my thesis statement?

I am writing a five-page essay about a novel my literature class has read. I do not want to post my thesis or any snippets of my essay for fear that a plagiarism checker will flag my paper. My pa...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by mperic‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I Include a verbatim passage in my fiction without plagiarizing it?

In my novel, the MC goes to a resort and at the resort, they offer two types of Buddhist meditations. Those meditations are from another book and I cannot fiddle with the meditation steps without t...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by codeNewbie‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to foreshadow to avoid a 'deus ex machina'-construction

The plot in my story revolves around a certain ability of the MC that is normally not available, unless the circumstances are just right. Therefore, it is not mentioned in the story as a solution t...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Century‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭