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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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An alternative to saying 'users' when describing features

I'm creating some copy describing new web-app features for a number of different audiences (users, managers of sections of the site, owners of sub-sites which use our platform etc.). I'm finding m...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by robomc‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is the Priority in an Action/Adventure Novel: Dialogues or Conflict?

I am currently working on a novel and I was having some trouble finding the best solution for this question. I understand that both dialogues and conflicts are needed in a good proportion to cook a...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Amin Mohamed Ajani‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Where to look for ESL writers and copyeditors? [closed]

I often work on lessons for ESL students - texts, dialogues, etc. I'm not a native speaker and I don't have any friends abroad. I often need copyeditors for my lessons, but I seem to have trouble f...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by EslTeacher‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When should I use punctuation with bullets?

When writing bulleted items, what are the rules for placing periods? Presumably bulleted items that aren't sentences wouldn't require punctuation: Orange Apple Banana But how about sentence bul...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by el2iot2‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Third person POV

Can writing in the third-person limited omniscient POV include internal monologue and character thoughts?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are tips / techniques to manage the consistency of a plot encompassing several subplots ?

When I lay out a plot consisting of interwoven threads, one of the most annoying things is to manage effectively the factual, logical consistency of the whole. In order to be more effective and di...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Max Bolondi‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How credible is wikipedia? [closed]

I understand that this question relates more to wikipedia than it does writing but... If I was going to use wikipedia for a source for a research project (for example) would the information be cor...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by alexyorke‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Where can I find paying markets for flash fiction?

I've written a great deal of flash fiction, < 1000 word stories. I know I can send them out to literary journals and online literary journals, but are there paying markets for this sort of thing?

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Lynn Beighley‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to obtain a thoughtful critique of a job application cover letter?

Sometimes, not always, when searching for my next position or project, I make an effort to write an interesting cover letter, one intended to convey images and passion, a story. I want it to be a ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by DarenW‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Looking for story that deliberately overused "get" [closed]

It was in Writer's Digest, probably the early 1980s, when I saw this. One of the regular columnists (or was it an irregular columnist?) went on a brief rant about careless writers overusing the wo...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by DarenW‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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"...and the fire from the stove engulfed him" or "jumped on him" or "covered him" or "devoured him" or what?

Which verb should I use here? He opened the stove and the fire from the stove [engulfed/jumped on/covered/devoured] him. "Help! Help!" - he shouted at once. "I'm on fire!"

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by brilliant‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's your favorite keyboard? [closed]

After using a Logitech Internet Pro keyboard for the past several years, as well as an Acer OEM keyboard occasionally, I'm seriously thinking about getting a new keyboard. I write upwards of 7,000 ...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by maguay‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are effective ways of working with a nonfiction editor?

How do you defend the integrity of your work while maintaining a cooperative and friendly rapport? Specifically, how can one work with an editor who is perhaps a bit overzealous?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Kelly C Hess‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What methods can I use to revise my writing?

Background I am finding it challenging to transform an early draft into a finished product. My biggest challenges are putting the prose in the proper order and using topic sentences and transitio...

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by David LeBauer‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Put text between section and subsection headings?

Are there rules about whether or not to put text between section and subsection headings (in scholarly works)? 1 section heading text / no text here? 1.1 subsection heading more ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by type‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Little did he know

In the movie "Stranger Than Fiction" the professor of literature makes quite a big deal about the phrase "little did he know." I've written papers on "Little did he know." I've taught classes o...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Jack B Nimble‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should you read your own genre?

In terms of novel writing, I tend to avoid my own genre, at least for the most part. Some of the reasons why: Genre Blindness / Genre Trap: Too much reading of your own genre blinds you to the tr...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Panda‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Guideline on turning points in a novel?

What are some popular guides regarding structuring a novel, specifically what turning points the story should hit and approximately at what point in the manuscript? I'm looking for something more ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Cliff Hangerson Page‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What exactly is an editor?

I recently read the assertion that many great works of fiction were chiefly down the contribution of a good editor. I must admit I was a little taken aback by this statement. I had never really tho...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by One Monkey‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is a good methodology for researching a historical novel?

I'm having difficulty with the research aspect of my historical novel. This question was originally going to be "how much research should one do to write a historical novel?" to which, answering m...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Panda‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Why is "It was a dark and stormy night.." not a good opening?

Also, why has it spawned an award for bad writing?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by theTuxRacer‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Help! I've got Writer's Block

I really want to write, but as soon as I sit down and set pen to paper, my mind goes blank. I can't think of anything to write. Sometimes I stare at my screen for hours; doesn't help. If I do th...

7 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by newyellowshoes‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Referencing a website in-text using Harvard style

I have the following website page that I need to reference using Harvard style: http://www.ucsusa.org/food_and_agriculture/science_and_impacts/science/what-is-genetic-engineering.html Is this a co...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Simplicity‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Checklist for making sure your writing is Atomic?

Question: Can someone please give me a list of things to check when reviewing a document to make sure that it is atomic. Atomic? Meaning that anyone can start reading at any section in a docume...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by leeand00‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there any good time-line software out there?

I write mostly speculative fiction, and use Scrivener for writing and note-taking. But I'm looking to start crafting timelines to keep track of the exact year and months events in the distant and ...

7 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by oldrobotsneverrust‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are there any techniques to arrange or list ideas from a short text? [closed]

For example I wrote this: !Paying! for exams, and also books to pass them is only a small price / to give poor people the opportunity / ...to contribute for the MANSIONS of the people in ...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Software for analyzing a manuscript?

I would like to get a better picture of a manuscript I've written, especially in regards to word usage patterns and potentially overused terms. I'm curious whether anyone can recommend a document ...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Cliff Hangerson Page‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does a technical writer need a technical background?

Does a technical writer need a technical background?

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are the key skills for a new technical writer?

For those that are just starting out, what are key skills they should have or learn to be a good technical writer?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Know any metaphors about women that...?

... are very skilled in getting men to like them, men really easily fall in love with them, but they (the women) are not interested in anything more than a sexual relationship?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Paul‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Meretricious - A bit too fancy?

I have a character that I want to sound very intelligent, well educated, someone who always uses the correct words with no unnecessary filler. I have found the word 'meretricious' which has the pe...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by RichK‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What to do if I end up confused by my own plot because of 'trying to be original' or 'trying to make the story more deep'?

Sometimes, I find myself in the dilemma that I come out with a plot that tells exactly what I want to say. But then, I try to modify it in order to make it more original (at least, less similar tha...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Critical review of blog post

I wrote a blog post a long time back. For this post I chose a writing style very different from what I'd read or what I'd seen before. Some guys did criticize me and others did acknowledge me for t...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by n0nChun‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it a good idea to write a summary of a plot before writing the full version?

Sometimes when I write a plot I get confused about the motivations of the characters and how events connect as I change elements. Is it a good idea to write a summary first in order to organise th...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Critique of short essay [closed]

Basically I need some critics regarding the following points: Does this description essay archive its goal (a creepy story with a 'sappy' ending)? How is the 'rhythm' of the story (is there some...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's the indent rule of poetry?

I've seen people indent their poems like below: Writing on wall It was just plane writing on wall I must have taken it a serious call She was on and off repeating same thing There wa...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by xzhu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can my paragraph use better adjectives and descriptions?

I feel my punctuation is all over the place, and the adjectives are not as charming as I think they are. If anyone has watched the beginning of the first Lord of the Rings, where the hobbit is lyin...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Snowman‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to improve this introductory paragraph (to fit writing standards and grab the reader's attention)?

A clock is striking 4:00am at a psychiatric clinic. The darkness, the silence, and absence of people makes it look like a morgue. A young mental health professional is sitting in a cha...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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First conversation scenes I've written (looking for errors, conventions, and improvements according to writing standards)

I would like to know if I'm doing something wrong (according to writing standards) in the following conversation and how to improve it to help readability, quality and feeling (making it more inter...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Sample Metaphor for Cycling [closed]

Can you please give me a sample metaphor for cycling, specially when pedalling uphill and sweating. Also, I'd like an example of a metaphor to describe the opposite situation: riding downhill, wit...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by xscape‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What exactly do I do to get published?

I'm interested to know what the publishing process exactly entails for future reference. I'm in my last year of school and I recently finished my first substantial piece of creative writing (a subj...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Edward Rose‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Simple way/techniques of arranging all the ideas and scenes in a plot?

Sometimes, I get confused as I add more and more ideas and scenes in a plot, is there any way of arranging these?

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Please help me improve this sentence...

In a first-person narrative, I’d like to use the following sentence: It took me nearly a decade to write this script, and now I’d pitch it to the top producer in Hollywood. I’m not following ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Cliff Hangerson Page‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to make easy and fast money selling a short book (which is available for download)?

This is my first short book, it wrote it to give social awareness. But I would also like to make some money (to avoid dying of hunger). Any suggestions?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to reword this: repeated back on him?

I don't know how to reword this: Along the way, we see how the faults Jacob made earlier in life are repeated back on him. I know repeated back on him doesn't sound correct, but ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Jon Sandness‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are good dialog writing tips? [closed]

Possible Duplicate: How should dialog be formatted? Writing dialogue has been a challenge. From the punctuations to the tags, it all still very confusing for me. Some stuff I want to kn...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Dian‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How does one go *back* to editing an older piece?

I have a longer work that took me a lot of effort to get through, and the moment I finished it, my life went crazy. That was about 6 months ago, and in the intervening time I haven't been able to ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Turnips‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does giving away free stories boost sales?

Is it worth it for writers to give away free short stories (or entire novels)? I've heard people say that having freebies on your site can boost sales of your books. I'm not talking about giving aw...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Ralph Gallagher‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Feedback on technical blog post

I've recently composed a blog post about World of Warcraft Authenticators and would love for some feedback as per the quality of writing. Obviously no matter how many times I read it there's no su...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by m.edmondson‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Sympathetic portrayal of devout, rule-abiding characters

I'm having trouble portraying religious, devout characters as protagonists or viewpoint characters. When I try, I get the sense that the reader - not sharing the characters' beliefs - will have tro...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭