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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Will my readers feel like they are reading a children's storybook if there are illustrations in my novel?

I'm writing a novel. I also have good drawing skills. I would like to add illustrations of the setting, locations, and characters. I may include 8 or 10 illustrations (the novel is approximately 20...

5 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are the ingredients for a good book review?

I've recently started writing book reviews. I am doing this for numerous reasons, most importantly perhaps is to be able to express in a clear and concise manner. English is not my first language a...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by iwillreadbooks‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do you avoid the problem of all the characters in your story sounding the same?

There's a common flaw that I can easily detect in amateur writing, (and of course my own) which essentially boils down to all the characters "sounding the same", dialogue-wise anyway. Trying to ove...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Gabriel Goh‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Signs of Bad Character Development

When creating a character, what red flags would show me that I'm creating an unbelievable or unsympathetic character? I know that to be believable and sympathetic a character must not lean too muc...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by justkt‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to describe the point-of-view character without using mirrors

In fiction, the main character is often the first person we meet in the story. Given that the story is written from his/her point of view, how would you describe what they look like? The classica...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Koen Van Damme‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to make easy and fast money selling a short book (which is available for download)?

This is my first short book, it wrote it to give social awareness. But I would also like to make some money (to avoid dying of hunger). Any suggestions?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What exactly do I do to get published?

I'm interested to know what the publishing process exactly entails for future reference. I'm in my last year of school and I recently finished my first substantial piece of creative writing (a subj...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Edward Rose‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Sample Metaphor for Cycling [closed]

Can you please give me a sample metaphor for cycling, specially when pedalling uphill and sweating. Also, I'd like an example of a metaphor to describe the opposite situation: riding downhill, wit...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by xscape‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to improve this introductory paragraph (to fit writing standards and grab the reader's attention)?

A clock is striking 4:00am at a psychiatric clinic. The darkness, the silence, and absence of people makes it look like a morgue. A young mental health professional is sitting in a cha...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Why is "It was a dark and stormy night.." not a good opening?

Also, why has it spawned an award for bad writing?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by theTuxRacer‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Guideline on turning points in a novel?

What are some popular guides regarding structuring a novel, specifically what turning points the story should hit and approximately at what point in the manuscript? I'm looking for something more ...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Cliff Hangerson Page‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should you read your own genre?

In terms of novel writing, I tend to avoid my own genre, at least for the most part. Some of the reasons why: Genre Blindness / Genre Trap: Too much reading of your own genre blinds you to the tr...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Panda‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to obtain a thoughtful critique of a job application cover letter?

Sometimes, not always, when searching for my next position or project, I make an effort to write an interesting cover letter, one intended to convey images and passion, a story. I want it to be a ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by DarenW‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Where can I find paying markets for flash fiction?

I've written a great deal of flash fiction, < 1000 word stories. I know I can send them out to literary journals and online literary journals, but are there paying markets for this sort of thing?

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Lynn Beighley‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are tips / techniques to manage the consistency of a plot encompassing several subplots ?

When I lay out a plot consisting of interwoven threads, one of the most annoying things is to manage effectively the factual, logical consistency of the whole. In order to be more effective and di...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Max Bolondi‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Potential confusion: referring to home planet as "Earth"

I'm writing a science fiction story and it's based in another galaxy, colonised by humans originally on a geographically equivalent "Earth". My current usage refers to it as "Earth" and provides a...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Nick Bedford‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is Literary Fiction?

I keep hearing about literary fiction, and how it is so much better than genre fiction. What exactly is literary fiction?

6 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Elizabeth Schechter‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Resources for character development

I'm weak at building characters. What resources are there to create rich characters? I'm thinking beyond name generators: Quirks, biography, diseases like allergies, hobbies and jobs, wealth, omen...

4 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Aaron Digulla‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to figure out if an agent is "on the straight" or "shady"?

Are there any specific signs (singular or groups of) that I should pay attention to when it comes to agents? I have read about agents who work for less reputable publishing houses, charging fees f...

3 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Vatine‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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When to accept an editor's rewrite request?

So there's an editor who has accepted a story of mine for publication... but he wants me to change the ending. Normally I'm pretty open to editorial changes, but in this case the proposed changes a...

1 answer  ·  posted 14y ago by JSBձոգչ‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What genre is a book in an imaginary world but no other fantasy element?

I'm trying to figure out what genre the following is, if any. (I asked a similar question, but this is different now, and more detailed.) The story takes place in an imaginary world. It's more or...

2 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Ethan‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Where is a good place to find writing prompts?

I love using writing prompts to come up with story ideas. I'm looking for good sites that have a lot of good writing prompts. One that updates fairly often would be best. :)

3 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by user563‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Do online writing classes really help?

Almost all online writing workshops/classes/programs websites have scores of testimonials from students. It is very difficult to understand whether these really are students or paid testimonials. S...

3 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by RKhan‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Resources on plotting mystery stories

I'm looking for books, essays and articles on plotting mystery/detective/investigation stories (and novels). The type of story I'm aiming for is in the vein of Sherlock Holmes, Agatha Christie, or ...

6 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Are there good tips on being a better *creative* writer?

I'm a student at Case, and while we of course have an English department, it seems the only kind of writing classes/courses available are for learning to be either a "literary" writer, or a "schola...

5 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Billy ONeal‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How difficult is it to break into screenwriting?

Is it difficult to get anyone to buy a screenplay you write? I am thinking about writing a screenplay but am concerned that maybe I shouldn't waste my time; I have no formal training in writing sc...

3 answers  ·  posted 14y ago by Philip White‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Do episodes of the show House follow a constant structural pattern?

I've seen a few episodes of House M.D., and I wonder, are the episodes written according to a fixed structural pattern? If so, what are the details, and why does such a structure make the show pop...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by blueberryfields‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Different kinds of editors

I've noticed references to different kinds of editors such as copy editor, line editor and development editor. I'd like to know the different categories of editors and their job descriptions.

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Sky Red‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Are too many exclamations wrong?

Exclamations, I feel, are a good way to describe tone without actually writing the tone. But most of the time I end up (as per reviewers) with too many of exclamations. Many also say that too man...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Karan Desai‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Music & Focus During Writing [closed]

I hate listening to silence while I write, so I usually end up listening to music, but then I lose my focus. I don't really like classical or lo-fi that much and they don't help me concentrate on ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What makes a strong mental image?

Images, as I call them, are an important part of your prose. Now, let's look at examples of bad images: From Onision's (from now on, Onii-san) book, Reaper's Creek : Maybe that current lead h...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Mephistopheles‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What if a dark protagonist doesn't want to change?

Dark protagonists. Heroes who are evil, pure flaws, or exhibiting only weakness or darkness, rather than strength or light. There is one basic assumption I would like to make about such characters:...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Can you help us read this handwriting from a leather wallet? [closed]

It is very old and we are trying to understand what it says. Here is a link to a big version on wikicommons. Thank you for the help.

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by ndasusers‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Why do readers enjoy reading about "bad" or evil characters?

I've changed a secondary character into a murderer, and it changes everything. This change also opposes my core philosophies, that life and art should strive to reach something higher - not somethi...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by DPT‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is there a term for 'The Secret Garden' and similar works? [closed]

For some time now I've been curious about how to classify a small group of literary works. They include The Secret Garden, Polyanna, and to a lesser extent Anne of Green Gables. I'm sure there are ...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I make sure a major twist is not disappointing? [closed]

I've been having some trouble with the ending of my current story, and I've decided that the best way to deal with those issues is to include a major twist. Due to the nature of this twist, I'm not...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Will the publisher/agent tell me what to write?

I recently read this answer, which suggested that an author's first novel will be rejected, and the publisher will instead get the author to write the novel they want to publish, assuming they feel...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Series: How can I get my reader to not expect any one genre?

Background: I'm planning on writing an extensive series of fantasy books. I plan on writing quite a few of these books, and while they'll all be set on the same planet, I intend them to center on d...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to get readers to care about a dead character?

My story happens as a result of one of the main characters getting murdered. I'm wondering how to get readers to care about someone who's not even in the story (as far as the readers know anyway) o...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Touchebag‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Transitioning from novel writing to screenwriting?

I've been studying writing for several years, and I feel fairly confident in my ability to write a novel. Before I take the plunge and go for it though, I was curious about a slightly different pat...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Do I need to 'formalize' someone as a beta reader?

I've been writing fan fiction for several years. It's been a great platform to build my writing skills, and I feel ready to publish soon. The website I've been posting my fan fiction on is in fact ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What font is this [closed]

I like the font used on the picture above because it's easy on the eyes. Can somebody help me determine the font name used?

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Jam Ville‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to stay excited when writing about the necessary?

I practice my writing skills by writing fan fiction. It's a great medium: no deadlines or word goals, and you get free feedback. The only problem is that as fan fiction, there are certain things yo...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to express martial arts action in fiction?

In the context of an actual as opposed to training fight scene in a fictional narrative, how would one express martial arts action? Generally, martial arts has a distinctive disciplined but power...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Fabjaja‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Fantasy Series - YA or Adult protagonist?

I plan on writing a fantasy series at some point. Based on what I've read, my automatic assumption was that the protagonist of such a series would be a teenager, probably around the 17-18 year rang...

1 answer  ·  posted 7y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should I use the real name or attempt to describe?

I'm writing a story in a fantasy setting, where there are characters who dress with ancient Egyptian type clothing - such as haram pant and usekh collars. Since the story is a fantasy and not set i...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Marshall‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Making the death of background characters sad

The problem with killing off a background character is that their very modus operandi eliminates the most effective advice, because they don't have a long "screentime", and we don't know too much a...

4 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Mephistopheles‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to express sarcasm in non-dialogue text?

You know how sometimes we say something sarcastically, and do the double-finger twitch that's supposed to symbolize quotation marks? How do you write that in non-dialogue text (narration)? Not desc...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Klara Raškaj‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I establish the nature of a person/group without action?

How can one establish the nature of a person/group to the reader without relying on actions to 'show' it? For example, if I have a group which is evil, how could I convey that to the reader without...

8 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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When writing down a huge amounts of detail is inevitable

In hard-SF the writer has to adapt to the world and its limitation. Under normal circumstances, this shouldn't a problem, as you can always make something great, even with the limitations. Howeve...

3 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Mephistopheles‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭