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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Citing lecture notes

I am writing my thesis and using notes from different lectures on the topic as a source of sources. These notes cite other papers and present briefly the ideas, and I do use the lecture notes to fi...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by ATN‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Good idea to describe the heist place before the heist begins?

I'm working on a heist scene where five thieves are supposed to enter a corporate building and steal a few documents. It's supposed to be a major scene so it won't be short. I need the readers to v...

7 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by Amin Mohamed Ajani‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is the word for this effect - things are not normally noticed until those things come in to the news and people fear/are looking for them [closed]

For instance. I've never really paid attention to white vans, but when the DC sniper was at large and they stated that he's probably shooting from a white van, white vans seemed to appear out of no...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Jared‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I reconcile the exposition of the three act scheme vs. starting out with a bang?

I am a few thousand words into my newest draft and starting to question if I picked the right beginning. As usual, when I get back into the habit of writing regularly, I have also gotten back into ...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by StrixVaria‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are online critique groups a good substitute for editors?

I'm thinking of self publishing. Now what all the blogs tell me I have to do is hire a professional editor, who will see any plot / character holes, other story problems etc. (For the moment, I'm n...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by aaa‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What methods does Rowling use to establish Dumbledore as being wise and trustworthy?

In the Harry Potter series, Dumbledore seems to represent ultimate wisdom and authority. Harry (and the readers with him) hold him in awe; many times throughout the series Harry willingly accepts a...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does this passage convey an appropriate mix of seriousness and levity?

The following is a standalone passage from a collection meant to deal with topics of psychology, philosophy and self-help. The question is: Is the quirky style helpful in driving home the point, o...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by HNL‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Sluglines for same location but different periods, real and imagined

I'm writing a short film that has the vast majority scenes set in a pub, with the main male character about to approach a woman, and he imagines/projects some of the possibilities of this - it goes...

1 answer  ·  posted 10y ago by Spiffeah‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Examples of Successful Rule-Breaking in Novels [closed]

I just finished "The House of the Seven Gables" by Hawthorne. I was struck by how often he switched tenses. Mostly the narration was in past tense, but then he would switch to present or even fut...

1 answer  ·  posted 10y ago by dmm‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A short story, any comments? [closed]

I am new to this forum and would like to share one of my short novel here. I would love to hear any comments and thoughts (e.g., how the story flows, any better way to describe the atmosphere? and ...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Yuandong‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can you write less to say more?

Sometimes you can write a lot without saying anything, sometimes you can say a lot but get little through the reader. In technical writing the later is very typical (at least for me), one can ten...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by dukeofgaming‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do you visualize plot structure?

I want to visualize the internal structure of my plot. I noticed several contradictions, and want to better understand what's going on in my tale. I'm not talking about different characters doing ...

2 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Habits and routines for my first tech writing job

A Japanese company has offered me a gig helping translate an Android1 business application + documentation into English. Their staff will do a rough translation, and I will polish it into something...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Pitarou‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to introduce a world that's alien to the reader

I'm writing sort of a space-opera and I was wondering what would the best way to explain everything about the world to my readers. The story is kind of a political intrigue, and it would be very ea...

2 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by Burnlan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to get a programming book published

So I feel I'm a pretty good programmer in my area of expertise. Whats the process for writing a book about my niche and getting it published?

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by DiverseAndRemote.com‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I find good venues for publishing my work? [closed]

Possible Duplicate: Where to publish poems I used to write poems and stories. They were published in local newspapers many times, but I did not get any benefit besides this limited publi...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Tofeeq‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a way to ask online booksellers to pull pirated editions of my books?

Eight of my books are available on Google Books as 100% online, downloadable, but no Creative Commons licensing. Now I am starting to see them show up in bookstores, in versions I didn't have print...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Christos Hayward‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Citing in a Magazine Article

I write a ton of magazine articles online. My editor tells me you do not need a works cited as you do in academic work. I am wondering what kind of citing you do need and what I should be doing for...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Confused‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Present tense in user manuals

I am writing a user manual for an IT system. And inside the user manual I have sentences such as: Users can delete Servers that do not have Customers assigned to them. Is the use of present...

1 answer  ·  posted 10y ago by John John‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to handle screenplay revisions in Final Draft?

I need to revise a screenplay in Final Draft, and I'm finding that the revision features in the program are poor. Are there any ways to introduce revision features in to Final Draft, similar to Tra...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Neil‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do parentheses inhibit clarity?

I find it easier to write many things with parentheses, but I don't know if this is considered good practice. I would expect some might say that parentheses are indicative of excessive digression a...

4 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by T. Webster‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Cutting down the length of a short story

I'm writing a short story for an assignment at school - but I'm having trouble keep it short. I have a habit to go off on a tangent quite a bit, and this ends up making it a lot longer than it shou...

0 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by reallytallmidget‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How does one avoid incomplete changes to documentation?

Having encountered errors in technical documentation that almost certainly came from incomplete editing after copying from earlier documentation, I am curious about what techniques can be used to a...

1 answer  ·  posted 10y ago by Paul A. Clayton‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Why are some words in screenplays set in all caps?

I believe I understand this and I'm looking for confirmation. Examples: It has become a tugging match with the Weird Man shouting, "I'll take you to a taxi... I'll take you." Ahead, a group is...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by temporary_user_name‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I convey that my viewpoint character is lying?

When writing in the first person, what is a good way to convey that the viewpoint character is lying, without saying so explicitly? My idea is this: "I am writing this as a record of what's be...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Nathan C. Tresch‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Tips for writing sentences like a native speaker

English isn't my native tongue, but I've been writing novels in English for a while. Most of the time, I can be aware of what's grammatically correct and what's not. But making sure that a sentence...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to style a film or book title?

Let's say I had a character which was looking at a book shelf and I wanted to mention a particular book that they were looking at, let's say it's Lord of the Rings, should I put the title in quotes...

2 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by Phil‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Resources: Dictionaries of Australian English

I know that Australian English has many spellings in common with British English, but (as with Canadian English) the two are not identical. Are there standard, authoritative dictionaries for Austra...

0 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by Neil‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should my readers be able to identify with the bad guy?

I'm in the process of defining the characters for a novel. It is a crime fiction, with a really strong focus on the characters. I hope to construct really rich, complex and clearly defined characte...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Carl Seleborg‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is this form of poetry called?

I am poet and a blogger, and was writing a poem today for my blog. It went something like: So, are you missing me? Missing me so much that you crave, crave to meet me right now... Does anybody k...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by c0da‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Knowing When To Cite?

In my essay (specifically a recount essay of a moment in the past), my objective is to end with the discussion of Death as a being (because my recounted moment will be related to death). I'd like t...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by jeremy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Story-Telling on the Internet [closed]

Possible Duplicate: Internet communities where I can read/rate/review short fiction, and post my own? I am a user of Cowbird already, and I love it, but I want to branch out, and go to o...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by fr00ty_l00ps‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Name of writing style or structure of novel that is in non-chronological order

What is the name of the structure of a novel that is not in chronological order but moves between characters (viewing the same or different topic)?

2 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by user8282‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When to use semicolons and when to use em dashes?

Sometimes I can't decide whether to use a semicolon or a em dash. Usually, I start with semicolons and, once I notice there are too many of them, I start replacing a few with em dashes (as I read s...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to improve my skill at writing a question?

I'm a member of some SE sites, like SO and CSTheory. In those sites I'm an active member, I'm reading Q&A and also answering some questions or asking questions, but I think my writing is poor....

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Saeed Amiri‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Demo data in screenshots! What are the best practice?

My question is related to best practices of making screenshots for end-user documentation. Particularly, is there universal information for filling in forms in the software and after that making sc...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Yuliya Drygybka‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Avoiding legal issues with plot similarities between my book and a movie in production

I am writing a novel whose plot that I just learned is going to be made into a movie---how can I protect myself if similar plot points are used so that I don't get sued and vice versa?

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Greg‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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singular or plural for index entries

I am in the final stages of writing a book and currently I am preparing the index. Are there any rules whether index entries should be listed in singular or plural? Currently I have Markov chains...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by jochen‭  ·  last activity 5mo ago by Herem1956‭

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How do you call the non-writing parts of creating a text?

When I sit down and put words on paper or type into my computer, that aspect of creating a text (like a novel or software manual) is called "writing": I store the content of my text in letters. Bu...

2 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is the order of appendices according to their references fixed?

Is it really necessary to place the appendices in a book in the order in which they are referred to, or is it possible to have a "logical" order, i.e. place them in an order which would be chosen w...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Stephen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Best way to write an article professionally

Is there any widely accepted step by step method for writing a creative article in a professional manner. I want to improve my English writing skills in relation to creative article writing. I rea...

1 answer  ·  posted 10y ago by Nitin Gohel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a way to publish an eBook, distribute it and the push updates to the distributed eBooks?

If I publish an eBook, distribute it and later I want to edit or add to the information, is there is a way to push those updates to the already distributed copies of the eBook?

1 answer  ·  posted 10y ago by NivF007‭  ·  last activity 8y ago by NivF007‭

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If I'm going to hire a copyeditor, do I need to do any proofing myself?

For my book I'm planning to self-pub, I aim to hire a copyeditor / proofreader at some point. The question is this: Should I do any proofreading myself, other than using a spell checker? Currently...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How much $ to calculate for an Editor

I plan to self publish a book (non fiction). Currently I have 150.000 characters, but when it's done I will end up with around 250.000. I am not a native english speaker but write the book in engli...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Christian‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Please evaluate the effectiveness of both voices, which better brings the character to life?

I am working on a scene (one of many) and I am having trouble with voice (in all of them). I find first person handy in some situations and third in others. Below are two excerpts from the same s...

1 answer  ·  posted 10y ago by James‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it okay to mention a person's nationality and accent only once or twice in a story?

For example, if you have a guy who is an Indian (from India), and you say something like, Sukant answered in his Northern Bhojpuri accent, "Yes. It is indeed true. Many people come into my ...

2 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by johnny‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do collaborating authors choose an agent?

If two authors collaborate, and each of them already has an agent - then who handles the collaborative work? Do the authors decide to be jointly represented under one of their two agents? If that'...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does writing in a certain mood change how a writer writes?

I'm not sure if this is right for this part of Stackexchange, but since there is no psychology section, here we go: I'm currently writing the same short story several times with the intention of c...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Throsby‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Collaborating with Stephen King, but not the original

My name is Richard Devine and I am currently working on a collaboration with Stephen King, (obviously NOT the original author himself). We currently act under the pseudo name 'KD Novels' (King/Devi...

1 answer  ·  posted 10y ago by KD Novels‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Changing Capitalization in a Quote - MLA

I'm writing an essay (MLA style) for class and I am quoting a whole sentence within my sentence. For example: They published a “manifesto” proclaiming that “[a]ll are welcome to walk through our ...

0 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by Shmuel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭