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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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How to represent dependencies in outlines

The bulk of my writing consists of technical papers, reports, notes, and memos. Because of the mathematical nature of my work I spend a lot of time writing definitions, and it is very important tha...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Carl Morris‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is the first draft of a novel usually shorter than the finished work?

I finished the first draft of a novel I'm writing. Right now, it has 17000 words. I've heard that novels these days range from 60,000 to 150,000 words, so I'm a little bit worried (I'm hoping to ha...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Problems with past tenses in formal paper on a novel with MLA Format

I have been writing high school English paper on a novel in MLA format. Is there any rule about using past participle or past imperfect? Throughout the essay there have been many places that can ...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Email to request copy of paper [closed]

I want to email the author to get the complete paper. He's published a version with proof sketches, but I need the whole proofs. My draft: Subject : Paper Request Dr. ..... I've read your paper ...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by saadtaame‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Getting a Manuscript Reviewed

I've had a few friends review my unpublished manuscript, and they were in my target market and quite knowledgeable in English. What are some good ways to get some more reviews, of a decent level in...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by liquidblueocean‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it okay to call the reader's target audience stupid?

I'm a tech genre author, and have already published one book on Android development. However, this book was focused more on the developer of the apps, than the user. Now I'm working on my second b...

7 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Raghav Sood‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should this sentence be included in the Executive Summary?

I found some examples of good and poor example of executive summaries here. Everything seems fine but in one of them, they included this sentence - "All calculations can be found in the appendi...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Sajib Mahmood‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are there any metrical (scansion) dictionaries?

There are plenty of rhyming dictionaries; is there such a thing as a metrical dictionary? Sometimes in fixed-form poetry, I need a word to fit a specific position in a line, and it would be really ...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Aaron Davies‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Avoiding unintended rudeness or accusatory tones in reminder emails

I am in one of the newsletter teams of my company. Last week, I had mailed the Vice-President of our company to write an article for our newsletter, to which he replied in affirmative and mailed me...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by bengaluriga‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is "head popping" and why is it bad?

Most of my writing experience has been with first person, nonfiction stories. Now I want to try some fiction. I'm working in third person, but I'm a little bit confused about how to pull something ...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Tim Elhajj‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When to use the em dash (—) in fiction writing?

I always see the em dash (—) in fiction writing. Here are some example from Haruki Murakami's After Dark: Komugi comes in and takes something from one of the cartons piled against the wall—a...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Adding dementia to writing

I am wondering if it is a good idea to include a sense of dementia in my writing. For example, it's a personal narrative where the character is traumatized for a paragraph. I feel like a good way t...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by LanguagesNamedAfterCofee‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Spiritual elements in a science-fiction novel

Does using unexplained spiritual elements (soul, "spiritual"/non-physical beings, afterlife, God, etc.) in a story with a futuristic setting make it science fantasy rather than science fiction?

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Jonas Arcangel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Faith, Hope and Love as the keys to victory in an action-adventure novel?

I'm at the outline stage of my novel writing. It is pretty straightforward to think of an action-adventure novel's victory as attained by physical attributes and/or courage. I'm looking for alter...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Jonas Arcangel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What permissions do I need to write a non-fiction book based on personal interviews?

I am writing a non-fiction book based on recorded interviews with several people. I have recorded verbal consent to be interviewed for the book from each person. One of the interviewees has since ...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Lois‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I reconcile the exposition of the three act scheme vs. starting out with a bang?

I am a few thousand words into my newest draft and starting to question if I picked the right beginning. As usual, when I get back into the habit of writing regularly, I have also gotten back into ...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by StrixVaria‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Knowing When To Cite?

In my essay (specifically a recount essay of a moment in the past), my objective is to end with the discussion of Death as a being (because my recounted moment will be related to death). I'd like t...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by jeremy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I improve the effectiveness of my examples to grab the recruiters attention?

I am in the process of answering the question please indicate any leadership roles you have held for a particular job application but still feel as if my replies lack a certain crispness and flow. ...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by methuselah‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I start a business-presentation?

How do you welcome a business audience to your presentation? I've thought of: Hello, my name is [prename] [surname] and I am going to talk about [...] but it sounds rather like a school present...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by Martin Thoma‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is the following piece of text comprehensible and written in good style?

I am a PhD candidate and I am having difficulty in communicating effectively in writing. Specifically, this post is a piece of text submitted for critique and, in addition, explains what I am tryin...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by mfrank.23‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Which language to use when writing a multinational story

I'm Brazilian and I'm writing a book in portuguese. However the story takes place first in Europe, i.e. Italy, Portugal, and London. Of course this requires of me some research about the culture of...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by ClayKaboom‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it really necessary to add things like "I thought, I wondered, etc," in first-person narrative?

Example: The whole thing sounded a bit strange. How had she gotten my number? I wondered. I didn't know anyone called Maria. The whole thing sounded a bit strange. How had she gotten my...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Cutting down on paragraph size

As a novice writer of fourteen, I've tried a few attempts at science fiction (military science fiction, to be specific), and of course my writing's got HUGE mistakes and shortcomings. But the most ...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by JasonV‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I escape my own experience?

When writing academic text, you're often in the position of having to write introductory or explanatory material for your audience. Usually you write this kind of material after you've explored the...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by naught101‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Translation of my book "Babymoves" into Japanese

I have written and self published the book 'babymoves' in 2002. It is now in its third edition. I sell it through my website. I have been approached by a Japanese woman, wanting to translate the bo...

1 answer  ·  posted 11y ago by marianne hermsen-van wanrooy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is the word for this effect - things are not normally noticed until those things come in to the news and people fear/are looking for them [closed]

For instance. I've never really paid attention to white vans, but when the DC sniper was at large and they stated that he's probably shooting from a white van, white vans seemed to appear out of no...

0 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Jared‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Deciding whether to use a dialogue tag or an action tag in a dialogue

Example: "I'm not saying you don't know what you are talking about," he said, then looked at her and shrugged his shoulders. "But I don't know what you are talking about." "I'm not say...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I learn how to outline, so I can write like an architect?

I've just watched one part of Brandon Sanderson's lecture on writing, the section entitled Gardeners & Architects and I realised I'm a Gardener, almost exclusively. This often ends up with me w...

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Pureferret‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is the word for the action of selecting an item by a mouse?

I am writing a tutorial on how to use a specific web application and I don't know which verbs to use. Shall I use "click" for buttons? But what if the user doesn't use a mouse? Contrary to "normal"...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Konrad Höffner‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's the significance of ancient mythology in literature?

Whenever I see a movie critic praise Ridley Scott's Prometheus, they seem to be drooling over all the mythological references, although most don't necessarily complement gaps in the story or enrich...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Sedat Kapanoglu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Writing a novel which has the same structure and a particular theme in each chapter

I'm writing a novel that will have 9 chapters. Most of the chapters have the same structure: The main character goes down a hole she found in her room. She finds herself in a strange part of the...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Synopsis - multiple POVs and time periods

I'm looking for advice on writing a synopsis for my novel. I've found quite a few examples online, but none for multiple POVs and time periods. My novel is written from the point of view of three m...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by PhilG‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Where to find comparative information about publishers?

Is there any reference for comparing publishers (or at least major ones)? Writers choose a publisher based on fame or by chance, but is there any system for rank of publishers? Or providing statist...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Googlebot‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it appropriate to credit someone with a quote if I am not absolutely sure they are the source?

I read a quote a long time ago, but did not know the origin. I want to use it in a paper I am writing, so I tried researching to find out who is the source of the quote. The quote is "We are the ...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Michael‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should you specify camera action in a film script?

Some scripts I read specify the exact camera angle of every shot-- where the camera starts, what we see, how it will move during the scene. And some scripts are a little less specific. Is this on...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by temporary_user_name‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Are there any specific rules to write Prequels and Sequels so that we don't end up with conflicting situations?

Whenever I watch 'Smallville', I wonder how the writers take us back and forth the timeline without getting into a conflicting situation. Another example would be 'Back to the Future' trilogy. Al...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Ramnath‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do flashbacks break up short stories too much?

Recently, I wrote a short story that contains a flashback in the middle that was used to explain a major plot point in the story. Does a significant scene set as a flashback break up the flow of a ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by kuwaly‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Need a resource for creative writing

I'm already quite good at writing and putting together words and sentences. However, I would like to improve myself to the level that I can write a nice entertaining novel or several short stories ...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Legolas Greenleaf‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I approach writing an autobiography?

I have never kept a diary, and some time back I thought it would be fun to work on some sort of autobiography to note down any memorable events etc. I am not famous, and even if completed the 'audi...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Alok‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What permissions do I need for nonfiction travelogue?

I am writing (and self publishing) a non-fiction travelogue about a cross country roadtrip. I have already obtained permission from the person I traveled with, and there are no other main character...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by James‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Book cover conventions

I'm looking for an authoritative convention for attributing a book to both an author and editor. It is necessary in this instance to have the editor's name on the cover as well as the author's. N...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Alec Wenzowski‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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IF i want to write an episode to a TV sitcom, how can i send it to the TV network?

what are the steps to such thing, i want to write an episode to beavis and butthead and send it to MTV ,i don't live in the USA,i don't know if that a problem , please provide me with all the detai...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by XNA‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Copyright of screens/movie posters

I am writing a (commercial) book about cinema and reviews of movies. My question is about the pictures to illustrate the text. For example I suppose that I can't use the promotional poster of a mo...

0 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Fel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Tools for exploring and analysing document structure?

I'm currently writing a thesis. Just the introduction is 25 pages/8000 words. The whole document will probably be 70 pages or so. With a document this large, and on such a complex topic, it can be ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by naught101‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I publish a translation of a book?

I'm in the process of translating a book (scientific publication) for private use. If I ever decide to publish it: what is the procedure? Who is the right person to ask for publishing rights and tr...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Lost in Translation‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Which tense to use when writing a diary?

For writing diary content every day, which English tense is appropriate to use? Things have all happened already. I usually write late at night (end of the day) or the next day. Should I use si...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by gilzero‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is going 'off-topic' a sign of bad dialogue?

I always wondered if going off-topic in a dialogue is a bad or a normal thing. For example, let's say I'm writing a novel where the main theme is love and loss. Is it bad if the characters start t...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Am I correctly referencing chapters which belong to the same book?

Looking for some help on how to reference chapters in a book inside of a booking I'm helping with. Should I be capitalizing Chapters 3 and 4 and would referring to chapters simply by capitalized t...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by al3xnull‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it a bad idea to turn a short story into a full-length novel?

I've written a couple of short stories. I'm really satisfied with some of them, and I would like to turn them into full-length novels. They were meant to be short stories from the beginning, but I ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What are the 'header' lines/meta information in a formal letter called?

When writing a letter there is often meta information about the correspondence before the actual content of the letter. For example, in bold below:- Address,Town,City,Postcode 23rd July 20...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by rgvcorley‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭