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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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What is a good way to foreshadow that magic is actually very advanced technology?

In a story I'm working on, humanity had sometime in the past reached a very advanced technological level (far higher than ours), but then had a devastating global war, and afterwards technology had...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by celtschk‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to cue in our readers that we are using an uncommon symbolism?

We all know some common symbolism: For instance, red stands for anger, blood, and violence. The cross stands for martyrdom and sacrifice. Common symbols are easy to notice, but what if you decided ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to explain the main plot with science based concepts, without the non-sci-fi fans getting bored?

Let me explain: I'm writing a game where the Earth gets a massive biological attack from an alien race in the close future, and only a small part of the planet's life survived (few dozens of humans...

5 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Guilherme‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Avoiding repetition when there are two unidentified individuals

The tall figure was overwhelmingly tall. It stood in the corner of the room. The skinny figure right beside him sat on a chair. It wasn't moving at all. The tall figure moved to the opposite...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by repomonster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Conflict and antagonist in a certain subtype of erotic novels

In his answer to my previous question, @Standback distinguishes two types of erotic storyline: stories in which the stakes are romantic or sexual stories in which the stakes are neither romantic ...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What should be the ideal length of sentences in a blog post for ease of reading?

I have heard many times that you should always keep the sentence length to the minimum as possible, as it makes reading easy, fast and more important understandable to readers. I'm wondering: What...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Prasad_Joshi‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write a convincing character with a opinion that differs from the author's?

So I wrote a short text recently in which the character has a very strong political opinion (anti-LGBTQ), which in addition is totally different to my own opinion. Now, I wanted to make the charact...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Féileacán‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to make an email less "me" centric?

The CEO of the company just sent out a letter about three people who will be leaving over the next week. I drafted an email to her expressing my interest in one of the positions that is going to be...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Muuski‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to differentiate narration and thoughts in the first person POV?

I am writing a first-person story, and I am having trouble showing the difference between narration and the thoughts of the character. To expand on this: I mean to separate the thought of the chara...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Silver Adventures‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are the Pros and Cons of long names?

Background: I'm developing names for places/characters/races/etc. in my world. One example are a particular political sect. The sect are a group within a different species that are named (the spec...

8 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by FoxElemental‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Do writers write philosophical essays?

I'm son to two philosophers, and maybe this shaped too much my way of understanding the world. I think a lot, or maybe thinking means a lot to me. And, mainly, I think about art questions and art p...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by h4ml3t‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How much indirection is too much?

I'm writing a chapter with a lot of indirection, and I'm wondering if I'm doing too much of it. To be specific, it is the main character remembering an event from his youth when a merchant who sta...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by celtschk‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write references?

I am writing a document for my project, and some information is from another website, I didn't copy the text but use their data, do I need to write that website in references? If so, how to? And t...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Wenqi Guo‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Pronouns when writing from the point of view of a robot

For the writing challenge, I'm currently writing from the point of view of a robot. Also another robot is frequently addressed. However I've hit a problem: Referring to the robots as “it” often giv...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by celtschk‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write a convincing religious myth?

In my story the protagonist hears, in a temple ceremony, the reading of a religious/mythological text. Now in the actual story, I don't need the text itself (the role of the text in context, and th...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by celtschk‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does it make sense to (partially) create a conlang that you don't intend to actually use in the story?

The story that I'm currently working on is in a very far future. Clearly, people will speak a different language then. Now, I wondered if it can make sense to (partially) create a conlang for the ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by celtschk‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are some standards in naming a software/hardware version?

I am wondering if how we name a version of a spacecraft differs from how we name a version of a software. For software, I usually see things like "2.0.32.32" or something like that and sometimes th...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is there a way to make editing enjoyable?

I have my first draft more-or-less complete, and I've been working on editing it now. There is one big problem: I hate editing I find editing to be so draining. I'll open up a chapter to edit and ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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"Dear Stack Exchange, I am very disappointed in you" - How to construct a strong opening line in a letter?

In light of recent events, I intended to write a simple letter of complaint to StackExchange. The obvious thing to do would be to write an opening with the fact such as It came to my knowledge ...

6 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by _X_‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What do you do if you enjoy writing, but have no ideas?

I've done some writing in the past - mostly short descriptive pieces, although I once wrote 9000+ words of a story idea I had. What I enjoy about it are the technical, intellectual, creative chall...

10 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Jack M‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Basing fiction on personal life

I had in mind to use threads from my own life as a foundation for work, keeping much of the incidents, traits and all, but building upon them in a potentially different direction. What are the pitf...

3 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by Kuchiki Byakuya‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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First Chapter for Free?

I am currently working on a novel, and am approximately 45% of the way through (~37,500 words / 100 A5 pages). Working full time, I am unable to finish my story within the next month, and I plan o...

2 answers  ·  posted 11y ago by M.Y. David‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I handle unintentional occurences of politically hot topics?

Suppose an author is writing a novel. The novel has nothing to do with politics, our society, or any of the hot questions of the daily news. It's, say... maybe a fantasy or sci-fi novel, set in a c...

2 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to make the murder's identity less obvious, or make the obviousness not matter?

I'm writing a short story following the first person perspective of the MC, who is a young, male writer of horror stories. He goes on a cruise with his girlfriend and their friends, and, unsurprisi...

5 answers  ·  posted 7y ago by user289661‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to "defy" physics on a sci-fi?

I am an amateur at worldbuilding and I am already building a sci-fi themed world with fantasy elements. In my world there will be different kinds of new elements to the periodic table and some fant...

3 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by Victor Matheus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Alien checking, by making questions [closed]

I'm writing a story with a character from another planet, but also human. At the beginning, people will not believe he comes from another planet, so they will check it out, by asking questions or ...

1 answer  ·  posted 10y ago by greuze‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is there a complete guideline for which tense to use?

There are questions here about specific use of tenses, but I wonder if there is a more complete guide on what tense to use when? For a fictional novel, Past Tense is the accepted choice. But which...

2 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by Michael Stum‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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My Hero is captured, now what?

I'm trying to write an escape scene in a fantasy novel. My problem is that I've spent a fair amount of effort explaining what a dire predicament my hero is in, and now I don't know how to get him o...

6 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by Anthony Willman‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Tension built upon whether the main character will commit suicide or not. Problem: I'm using first person narrative

I'm writing a novel, called Animal Suicide, about a girl who tried to commit suicide but then postponed the plan after a phone call she received. Everything OK. But then I realized...wait a minute....

2 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does the following opening grip you?

Of all the people who wanted to join the trip, Paola was the the last I expected would come. It surprised me. We barely knew each other at school, and I was pretty sure she wasn't interested in ...

1 answer  ·  posted 10y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Beginners can break rules too?

I came across several disciplines of writing which one must know while writing (especially beginners), concerning narrative conventions and the rules of story logic. Some of the sources for this ...

3 answers  ·  posted 10y ago by Saharsh‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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If I'm writing in US English, am I not allowed to use the metric system?

For example, can I say this if my book is written in US English (in non-dialog): The car was going at least 140 kilometers per hour! Or should I convert them to miles or what have you? It's ...

5 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Klara Raškaj‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is the difference between Tension, Suspense and Mystery?

Can you define the differences between Tension, Suspense and Mystery in fiction writing? Some resources says tension is how much you care about a character but I cannot imagine how it is possible...

1 answer  ·  posted 7y ago by pencilCake‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should creativity or eloquence in a technical document be removed during review?

I am working on churning out some technical documents, which are similar to a colleague's. I've copied some sections of his document as appropriate, and there are no concerns of plagiarism. His doc...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by zr00‭  ·  edited 5y ago by System‭

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Alternatives to second-person POV narration in RPG settings

I am someone with no formal writing background, who has come to love writing for the fantasy adventure role-playing game Dungeons and Dragons (fifth edition) during my free time. I am currently ru...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  edited 5y ago by System‭

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If I wouldn't want to read the story, is writing it still a good idea?

I struggle with forming full-fledged ideas. I'll come up with a snippet of an idea, have a hard time fleshing the idea out, and then lose interest before the idea becomes an actual story concept. ...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Alexis Strain‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it bad to describe a character long after their introduction?

I have a tendency to forget to describe character's appearance. But I always describe them, though often a little while after their introduction. So, how long after someone's introduction is "accep...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by A. Kvåle‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Can I bring back Planetary Romance as a genre?

This question is about genre and reader expectations. I'm not trying to change my story to fit a mainstream genre. I have already taken steps to broaden it's appeal, but it's too late to create an ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by wetcircuit‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to invoke interest in readers for second part of story when first part is not so popular + old?

I started a story and published it online in 2016. And then I disappeared due to various unavoidable priorities in life. But now I want to restart. But I am not sure. There are already less views. ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Karan Desai‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is this kind of description not recommended?

I think I read somewhere that when writing, you shouldn't describe characters by their characteristics i.e. The tall man walked across the room Is this true? Maybe I'm misremembering

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Job description for my employment reference

I've canceled my job to move on. Now I was asked how I want my Job description for my employment reference. My first draft was one full page... This is too much. Now I've reduced the long version ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by masterchris_99‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I mix linear and non-linear "choices" in an interactive novel?

In my interactive novel, I'm trying to keep the word count between choice prompts fairly short and consistent, but that means sometimes breaking up longer text into a few sections…. I've been usi...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by wetcircuit‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to collect scattered ideas on various topics in to a blog post/ writing article?

I try to write on various Q&A sites, but now I am thinking about having my own blog website. The main thing is that I don't know exactly what my niche topics would be for blogs. I write on vari...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Prasad_Joshi‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Would a full service PoD company include a literary agent?

I have been communicating with three PoD companies. I was considering the first, it has been in business for years and provides a certain number of copies to the author, the rest are sold from th...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Rasdashan‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it advisable to write a teaser for your blog posts?

I have seen many blog post authors who tend to write a short teaser to present to the reader and keep them keen on reading more about the topic. Some bloggers tend to write a teaser with respect to...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Prasad_Joshi‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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When two POV characters meet

I have two POV (3rd person limited) characters and they start the story as complete strangers and far apart. They don't meet for some time and they have very different experiences. Now I want them...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Miroslav Zadravec‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How many blank lines before scene headings (and secondary scene headings) using Amazon Storywriter

Question : How many blank lines should be before scene headings and secondary scene headings in a screenplay? Note that I am using Amazon Storywriter. Detail : I am writing a screenplay with Amazo...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Andy A‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I introduce the names of fantasy creatures to the reader?

In the story, these fantasy creatures are everyday animals that most people in the story already know. How can I introduce them in an natural way that instantly makes readers remember their names? ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by M Arif Rahman Winandar‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write a Stack Exchange Question?

There are a couple questions out there on How to ask a smart question and the FAQ has its own tips, but lets assume you know how to ask what you want. From a purely writing perspective, most of the...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by AGirlHasNoName‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write a puzzle without being too descriptive or vague?

I have recently joined the Puzzling.SE site and I am excited to ask few puzzles there. However, I am stuck, rather confused as to how a puzzle qualifies as good and precise. I want to ensure its cl...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Karan Desai‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭