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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Writing a book that involves an ex husband

I'm new to the writing world (other than writing a lot as a child). I want to write my story to help empower women in similar situations but it involves writing about my ex. How does one tell their...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Deirdre Derby‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Can I use the passive voice to avoid referring to myself in a scientific report?

I'm writing a report for a piece of University coursework, but I understand that I should avoid referring to myself as "me" or "I". I've seen an example piece in which the author occasionally refer...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Ambidextroid‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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I cannot figure out the exact genre (and target audience) of my book

For more than three years, I've been writing and re-writing my novel involving immortal characters. Now I'm finally gathering courage to write a query letter and begin searching for agents. My pro...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by undecided‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What’s a good name for someone who lives up to their name? Like, century lives up to 100 years [closed]

I’m writing a story about people called century and decade (decade is a ghost) and their kind needs a name. Something to do with time and death, or names and time or anything along those lines.

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by user33650‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Class/Course Names in Fiction

sorry if this has already been asked. But how are course or class names written in fiction (both prose and screenplay)? For example, if someone has a second-level algebra course on their schedule, ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by S.J. Gokey-Hartsfield‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Why are outlines so essential?

In my writing class, huge emphasis was placed on outlining the entire plot. Yet as I write it, things change dramatically, and I end up not following the outline. Is it bad to just go with the flow?

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Penelope Smith‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Attributing TV media sources in online, AP style, journalistic articles

I am the editor of a small news blog. I am trying to train my writers to link to their sources. One writer sends me an article without linked sources, so I ask for the sources. They email back res...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Valorie Broderick‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Help with reasons for rebellions against my oligarchic/Philosopher kings inspired empire [closed]

The government of this (fantasy) world is made up of a small group, randomly chosen at birth and representing maybe 0.5% of the population. The group are tutored in their homes with their families ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Blanded Gear‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Introducing characters in a screenplay

In one of my scenes, I introduce "GUEST" at a party. Later, each guest is introduced by name. So if I capitalized GUESTS, do I have to capitalize their name later?

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Sylvie‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does a story require a villain to succeed?

So far in my WIP, which is a “journey” story, the main characters have been struggling against the environment and the fact that they’re displaced and trying to return home. I’ve arrived at a poin...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by J.D. Ray‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What resources are available for amateur writers who need an editor and can’t afford one?

I’ve posted several questions here recently asking for advice on how to write better. The responses I’ve gotten have been invaluable to me, and I’m becoming re-invigorated about the idea of writin...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by J.D. Ray‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Proven psychological or scientific means of scaring people?

I already feel right out of the gate that this is going to be a naive question, but I'm going to ask it anyway. I know that writing horror does not guarantee that you're particularly good at it, a...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by bsideswiped‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What genre my wife is writing?

In advance: I'm sorry for write so badly in English. I am a Spanish writer. My wife is writing a book about the life of 4 women. This morning she asked me about which genre her novel belongs to. ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Hedufigo‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Ways to make money off trash? [closed]

Besides becoming a garbageman, selling dumpster finds and curb furniture on eBay/Craigslist, or selling metal to scrapyards, what are some ways to make under-the-table money off of trash? Legally ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by CS Jones‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do you make sex magic feel like a natural part of a setting?

In this world, witchcraft is practiced openly and is a neccessary function of society. Men cannot use magic directly, but possess much more mana than women. There are some spells that a witch may n...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Incognito‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Deus Ex Machina -- How to identify?

I got a critique today from someone and they told me I was using a "Deus Ex Machina". I did some poking around on here, and I question if it really is one. I found a link -- and it says within th...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Sierra‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Describing a scene from an animal's point of view [closed]

I am writing a short story which includes a farm animal whose legs were not thoroughly tied escaping the farm. The animal should be anthropomorphic, so that it would have its own emotions and thoug...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by user111‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Snowflake Method: Step 3 - What is important to a character story line?

I'm attempting to use the Snowflake method to try and get around issues I tend to have with writing. I can pump out words, tons of words; not a problem. But, at the end of the day it's a relatively...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Kirk‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to simulate someone talking with a full mouth?

If, for example, someone said : "How are you today?", how would you go about "translating" this into sounding like they were talking with a full-mouth? Like, phonetically.

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Dissertation results section - report variables or operationalizations? [closed]

Following APA style - Do I report my results in the dissertation using the variables I'm researching or their operationalizations? For example, which is style is correct: The correlation between...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by user3315563‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Subplots better than the main plot

The main plot follows the MC while travelling through the world trying to rescue his family. While doing this however, he must overcome a lot of difficulties. These are subplots focused on other ch...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by scrp‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Female Detective [closed]

I want to write a female detective murder mystery. I have 15 characters; 14 women and 1 man. I want the male to be the secretary for the, Cavalcade Detective Agency. He is well educated, charming, ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Robanne Bix‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Publication advice on a adult-themed account

I recently penned a 60k word account of the life of a former pet. He was a rather rude and uncouth tough little dog, and so his language, daily habits and adventures were of course likewise. Howev...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Ali‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is permission needed to use a fictitious character from another novel in my story as a point of reference?

I am writing a novel and I would like to introduce characters from other published works as time travelers. Is this a bad idea or even legal? Copyright infringement comes to mind... Is there a le...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Kalee‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Characters' motivation and feelings on defending against an alien invasion [closed]

I got really good answers to my last question, so I decided to post a new one:) In my novel, a few humans suddenly find themselves tasked with defending humanity against an imminent alien invasion...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Sean Robins‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is an "active writing style"? [closed]

The preface of Introduction to Algorithms mentions that In this, the third edition, we have once again updated the entire book. The changes cover a broad spectrum, including new chapters, revis...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Austin Conlon‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Suggesting for my book's Blurb

I am working on my upcoming book's blurb. One of my characters is a leader inspired by Hitler. I have mentioned him as "Hitler like leader". But this seems weak in my blurb. What can I write to c...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Abhishek dot py‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Why an ancient vampire sleeping for centuries under some castle in Europe would come to Brazil? [closed]

A vampire has been sleeping under a castle in Austria for centuries. But now the castle became a tourist attraction. It's really annoying. And the taste of the blood of the people on the region did...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Payuka‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Do multiple potential love interests dilute tension and diminish drama? [closed]

My MC is focused on his profession; barely giving his personal life a thought. His last serious romantic relationship with a woman was when he was 22. Time for that later, he believes. Retire at 45...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Rasdashan‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Could I use obsolete brand name in fiction book

I am currently working on a fiction book and my characters work for a company that in real life has been out of business for 30 years, but in my fiction book there is an alternate scenario and it h...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by adam bojovic‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Difference between a descriptive essay and a narrative essay?

Okay, so here's my problem: I am trying to write an essay from a prompt that uses the word "describe", but what I'm being asked to describe is not a single person or object, rather it's more broadl...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by pandalarry‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Permission to use open source data

I am working on a technical book teaching users how to analyse data using geographic information systems. I would like to use data from an open source data portal such as open source fire departmen...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by David Fort Myers‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are key features and pacing in a satisfying ending to a science fiction novel?

My novel has been through multiple drafts and beta reads, and by and large is in good shape. I've learned how to cure a saggy middle, how to stay in point-of-view, how to keep the protagonist drivi...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by DPT‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What is the structure of a good essay? [closed]

Please help me understand various approaches towards developing an essay about issues of society (like women's empowerment, child education, sanitation, Global Warming, etc.). Specifically, I want...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by abcdmath‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Question regarding SAT essay

I will be appearing for the SAT with essay next month. However I am confused about one thing- are we allowed to use abbreviations like "we're" (we are) and "it's" (it is) in the essay section? Will...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Som V. Tambe‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is focus more important in journalism than truth and facts?

Take the following short story. Let's imagine that it's an important even that should be reported on. One day, Little Red Riding Hood’s mother said to her, “Take this basket of goodies to yo...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by user3280964‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write a corporate character that likes to toy around with his colleagues? [closed]

I want to write a male, corporate working, character who is always cheerful and smiling, no matter whatever the situation he is in. As a result, reading his thoughts or motives is almost impossible...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Mike Chang‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Does a page-turner have to be continually high-octane?

I've experimented with both critique partners and people I know (be they friends, family or colleagues) as unrewarded beta readers. The latter are very slow, sometimes reading slower than I wrote a...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by J.G.‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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I'm producing a play with a character who the audience isn't supposed to know is alive, can I credit the actor in the program?

There isn't a theater SE so this seems like the best place to ask, but feel free to suggest a better place. I'm producing a community play with a character who's believed to be dead, but turns out ...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Misdirection for suspense/plot twists - what's acceptable and what's dishonest?

Note: I'm primarily asking this question because while Surtsey, the original asker of the question didn't actually ask a thing (and instead copy-pasted an excerpt of a novel) I believe it's a worth...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Matthew Dave‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Meaning of 'Adapted by [another person's name]' written on book cover?

Some of the books have written on their covers this: Adapted by [another person's name] Content of such textbooks is more or less same, maybe some new chapters are added. What does 'adapted by'...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by threeA's‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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When is it okay to say the word “now” in a past tense story?

I’ve seen it done in Harry Potter I just don’t understand when its okay to do it, like can I say something like “John walked away from the house and was now walking along the road” or not? When is ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Whats the difference between inference and conclusion?

Two questions regarding inference and conclusion. 1: Is it true that Inference can be made from any paragraph, from any line of the text but conclusion is drawn from the entire text? 2: Why often i...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by user55697‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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First draft Word count. [closed]

Do you find your first draft is longer or shorter than your completed work? I understand that I will be cutting alot of unnessary words, but I also have a list of things I need to add. I haven't g...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Jessum ‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should an academic paper contain all text at the same structuring depth?

I'm not sure whether or not this is standard practice, but I've been taught that between two different-level headings, there shouldn't be any text. For example, the following would not be permitted...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by PixelMaster‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Are there any set rules to creating a story with audience participation?

I have recently grown interested in the idea of writing a litRPG novel where each two days I will publish a chapter describing a single day of the main character and at the end of the day the reade...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Maiko Chikyu‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are some examples of an inciting incident that would force a character to go on a quest or adventure?

I've noticed that my novel is missing a really strong inciting incident and I can't think of anything strong enough to suffice. The only inciting incidents I'm familiar with seeing in nearly every ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Nsim‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to give characters a unique voice

When writing dialogue all the characters sound the same. I'm not sure I even know what giving a character a voice means, but my dialogue sucks so any advice will be greatly appreciated.

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by pandalarry‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Post scriptum in my soft diary

I write what happens to me every day as my diary. I don't write them on paper, but I typeset them in a word-processing system (soft diary), so I can simply edit them and add/remove anything at any ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Roboticist‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to research publishers by subject

I'm trying to find a place that not only lists publishers by subject (I know that publishersglobal.com does that) but where I may also find author reviews of the publishers. I am writing a book on ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Terri Simon‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭