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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Parentheses in scientific writing

I occasionally use parentheses in scientific writing when a piece of information is related to a previous statement but not to the central story. Is it bad style in scientific writing to use pare...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Bananach‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it appropriate to use an emoticon in reminder email to a potential employer?

A potential employer promised me a response but hasn't sent one yet, and I'd like to follow up by email. It's a potential job opportunity, and it'd be detrimental to sound too hasty or pushy. I w...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by legoMyEgo‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How overcome the budget constraint while building a fiction writing career?

Recently I was exposed to several sources that suggest that writing one novel a month is possible: The book 2K to 10K by Rachel Aaron, "Write. Publish. Repeat", and my old statistics file that sh...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Franz Drollig‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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I'm looking for advice on character development

I'm currently working on a team based story with a lot of characters and am looking for ways to really make their personalities stand out from one another. When I'm writing out their character pro...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by pandalarry‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What if my published short story is made a movie or a novel, without my permission?

I am writing a short story and thinking of publishing it in the next month. But then, I had a doubt. What if somebody takes it, expands it and changes it a bit and makes a movie or a novel out of ...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Raj‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I mention errors in the data that I received in my thesis? Where to mention it?

I received data for data analysis for my Bachelor-Thesis. I still got 4 weeks left to finish the 40 pages and after having gotten all my results, my supervisor and I realized that the data that I r...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Sinzi Thurm‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Colours of ultraviolet

I need to write something from the perspective of a character who sees colours differently from humans, and in particular can see multiple shades of ultraviolet. This isn't unique, their entire spe...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Marcus Downing‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Druid girl learns necromancy [closed]

I have an interesting plot ready, although there are a few missing blocks which I cannot develop. Story: A girl is a daughter of a druid. Druids are humans who live in the forest protecting anima...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by SovereignSun‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Writing part word

If I'm writing a dialog and my character get interrupted and cut off in the middle of a sentence can I write half a word and put three dots? I thought it was okay to do this, but I realized that I ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Lymaba‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it bad if I sidetrack to a backstory that’s not really necessary but is interesting?

My story is about two children and one of them dies in the first chapter. I give a four page backstory of how his parents came to the town they are in now, it is unnecessary but very interesting....

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should I end my story with a happy or sad ending? [closed]

I am writing a romantic short story and I don't know which type of ending suits my story better. Currently my characters fall in love but one ends up "cheating" (they were never dating or anything)...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by user32795‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Writing a song as the hook

I am at the free-writing stages of writing my high fantasy novel. I am looking at or experimenting with different methods for hooking the reader and driving their attention towards the rest of my s...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Alexander‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Punctuation when using inline dialogue

I am a bit crazy about punctuation and I have a question that I'm struggling to find a consensus on. For dialogue (especially in fiction), I always use the standard format: "I told you I wante...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by valoukh‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Providing context without getting lost in Description

I think one of the challenges I have faced the most often in writing books has been where to start. I tend to do a lot of flash forwards to jump into the action and follow it up with a chapter or t...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Rhettmartens‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is there anything like Patreon for German authors?

I spent quite some time on the website of Patreon and wasn’t able to find but two authors of German language novels (both in the fantasy genre). It seems that Patreon hasn’t got any German speaking...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Ludi‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Given how much self-promotion modern writers need to do, are Query Letters still worth writing?

I have struggled with this for a while because of how much the market has changed over the past decade. Are Query Letters still worth writing if all you have is your manuscript (no "platform"), or ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Rhettmartens‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What would a FtM transman's, who was born in 1990, life be like? [closed]

I am writing a story with a trans character (female to male) set in the 1990's. My main character's parents are supportive from the beginning, but did transpeople have access to hormone injections ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by CA Pichowsky‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Ordinary writing or Prose: how to make it immersive?

As a beginner, I have a frequent problem when writing: I know what I want to write, but I fail to put it in good sentences that reflect my thoughts. Often, this appears in dialogues when I try to ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Sasugasm‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it possible to use the word "it" too much?

I'm describing a creature in my story, and I'm worried I'm using the word "it" too much. Is there a substitute I can use for the word? Can I keep using it? Beady eyes look back at him, inky and...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by honey bee‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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First example of story told via dual timelines?

A few novels I read recently were told via dual timelines, with chapters alternating between a "current" plot and a "background" story. It felt to me as a "modern" story-telling technique, since...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by wip‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What, exactly, is a character study?

Critics and writers use the term "character study" a lot, usually to describe works that are especially 'literary' such as The Remains of the Day. Despite its usage, it appears that no one really h...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by William Oliver‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How should I move the story forward with the support cast while hiding a plot twist regarding the MC from the reader?

I am finishing an arc of my novel, and right at the end some sudden development happens with MC, that is partially obscured from the reader. They can guess at what it is, but it is a sudden change ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Mindwin‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do I add tension to a story, when the reader knows the MC survives?

To clarify: There are two parts to the book (or I might split them into separate books), one with my main protagonist, and the second is a prequel, showing the protagonist's father's story. Bot...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Ajnatorix Zersolar‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Characterisation: What lines can an antihero cross while retaining reader sympathy?

Now, to clarify ahead of time; I'm quite aware that compelling doesn't necessary equal sympathetic and vice versa. That being said, here is the dilemma. There's a character that I intend to write ...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Matthew Dave‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What are various sites to publish erotica?

Where could I look, or what could I search for, in order to find sites that allow user based publishing of erotic stories online? The only site I currently know of is literotica.com. I am not try...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Varun‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Third Person POV: What level of telling is acceptable for character motivation?

The novel I'm writing is third-person limited POV in style. This means that the narration's coverage is limited to what the POV character can observe, think, feel, while others' thoughts, feelings,...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Matthew Dave‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Characterisation: How to make it evident that a character's flawed perspective is intentional?

I'm writing a novel which has alternating point of views; odd chapters are from an angsty, neglected twelve/thirteen-year-old girl who's struggling with belongingness, puberty, and parental confusi...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Matthew Dave‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Will an explicit resemblance to an Actor put-off the readers disliking him?

One of the central characters in my novel, at the back of my mind looks like Benedict Cumberbatch. So while writing the story I have explicitly written that he looks like Benedict. It was also help...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to write an introductory dialogue? [closed]

What are different ways I can write a dialogue where a character is introducing himself to a woman in a professional setting? I don't want to write explicitly like this, "Hello Miss Emily, my ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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The stages of writing - what are they?

So, I'm likely finished with my idea in form of a novel, but now comes the difficult part with the rewriting. That's when I thought: What are the general Stages of writing? Of course I know the O...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Pawana‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Reporting Satterthwaite approximated degrees of freedom (APA 6ed)

Is there any established way of reporting approximated degrees of freedom (be it Satterthwaite or Kenward–Roger) for mixed-effects model in psychology (APA 6 ed.)? Specifically, is rounding to who...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by blazej‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Publication: What to do about a high wordcount debut novel?

I'm a strong believer in books/novels being as long as they need to be; if it turns out short, don't try to pad it out, and if it's long... unless there's chaff to cut out, it's long for a reason. ...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Matthew Dave‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How to decide between usage of a paragraph and a dialogue?

While writing a novel which is a story told of what happened in the past, I am facing two different ways to present information. For an e.g., I can write the story in the following two different ...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do you tell the reader that the setting is normal modern day?

I am getting some feedback on my writing but one of the questions that come back is that the readers are not sure about the setting. White the story was marked as fantasy, nothing fantastic had hap...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Andrey‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How can I make an in-universe random event feel like it was really random instead of just RNJesus' will?

Some stories feature random events that bring about drastic change either to the characters or to the setting. A lottery draw, some gotcha that grants a special skill. Most of the times I find on...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Mindwin‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Should I be able to 'feel' my outline?

If I am writing a book, and my primary goal is creating a strong emotion in the reader, should I be able to 'feel' that emotion in the outline phase? My goal as an author is creating a strong emot...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by William Oliver‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Overcoming "Possibility Paralysis"?

I don't often experience writer's block these days. Instead I struggle with a different sort of impediment in my writing: I call it Possibility Paralysis. I have to quickly acknowledge that this i...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Brian Lacy‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Character motivations facing death?

Would it be boring/unrealistic/silly/cliché if most characters only had this main motivation for most of a story: saving humanity/their country/their familly/themselves. The setting is medieval fa...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Dreamk33‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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How do you generally share your novels with the masses?

I'm currently writing my first novel and as a particularly young person, I have no clue on how to send my book to a publisher or how I can self promote it online. I know that Wattpad is one option,...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Clarkey‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Of plottwists and endings

While writing my story this has come up in my mind a lot. I have been planning and foreshadowing this major plottwist near the end of my story. But the effects of it might change my world utterly ...

3 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Totumus Maximus‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Is it true that "Any story can be great in the hands of the right storyteller"?

Presumably, like all trite sayings, it's a bit of an exaggeration since a story has to be at least interesting. (I mean, it would take amazing talent to write simply about someone sleeping and make...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by user394536‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Where can I find resources to look up Native American names?

I am currently working on writing a fantasy novel centered around pre-Columbian America, but I am at the moment unsure as to where in America to focus my story. I am considering either the Lakotans...

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Alexander‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Alternatives to starting a sentence with well [closed]

I'm new to narrative writing and especially have trouble with dialogue. I too often am using the word well to start a character's sentence after receiving some information to then ask a question ab...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Seth Painter‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Academic Writing: Paraphrasing few words when quoting

The following is from Japanese philosopher and thinker Toshihiko Izutsu's book The Concept of Belief in Islamic Theology (1965, page 146): But what he wants to emphasize is that shar‘a can be a...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by blackened‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Mentioning famous person in autobiography

I've been writing an autobiography about sexual abuse that happened to me throughout my childhood. The abuser was the dad of a famous singer. Once I was old enough (18) to leave home and file charg...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by MsLady‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Difference between DITA and S1000D

I'm trying to understand the technical difference between DITA and S1000D. Yes, I know, the common wisdom is that if you need documentation for helicopter or submarine, you should use S1000D, and ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by john c. j.‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Seeking Comp (Comparison) Titles for my Work-In-Progress [closed]

Seeking comp titles for my WIP. Can you recommend books that meet one or more of these criteria? Soft sci-fi Space setting with fantasy feel Speculative fiction about species that has advanced te...

0 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Moreau‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Can ‘Stupid’ Characters Make Plot Narratives Memorable?

Characters in movies ‘28 Days Later’, ‘Jurassic Park’ and ‘The Day After Tomorrow’ made terrible impulsive choices that cost other characters their lives, but if it weren’t for any of those choices...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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Are the most successful authors like Stephen King and Jk Rowling all trade-published?

I mean are the most famous authors usually trade-published or are there some self-published others that are very well known?

1 answer  ·  posted 6y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭

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What techniques do you use to maintain your writing focus and maximise your productivity?

How do you keep writing no matter what’s going on around you? How do you avoid the distractions of social media, that dishwasher that needs unloading, that wash that needs putting on, that cup of ...

4 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by GGx - Reinstate Monica Cellio‭  ·  last activity 5y ago by System‭