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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Is it advisable to write a teaser for your blog posts?

I have seen many blog post authors who tend to write a short teaser to present to the reader and keep them keen on reading more about the topic. Some bloggers tend to write a teaser with respect to...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Prasad_Joshi‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Averting Always Chaotic Evil

Always Chaotic Evil denotes an entire species in a fictional setting as outright evil - no matter how one treats them, they reward kindness with treachery and violence. Frequent recipients of this ...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Mark Baker‭

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How to describe skin colour, if "white" is not the point of reference?

A character looks at another character, skin colour creates certain associations. A character looks at himself, and associations would be shaped by society, and by what is "normal" in that society....

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Crossing the line from Middle-Grade to Young-Adult

I would like to followup on this excellent question which outlined differences among works for children, middle-grade, and young-adult. What are some clear differences in theme/story between child...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Cyn‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is straight-up writing someone's opinions telling?

When I first learned about the "show don't tell" guideline, I believe it applied to everything. I have now learned there are many grey areas, like for example exposition, and that the most importan...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by A. Kvåle‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's wrong with impersonal and lifeless descriptions in a novel? [closed]

It feels like there is something wrong with using impersonal descriptions in fiction. But what is it? As an example, I'm unhappy with the following passage I wrote, because the descriptions are...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by blackbird‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Protagonist's race is hidden - should I reveal it?

I'm currently on the fourth draft of a novel I'm writing, which features two protagonists. One of them, is, in my mind, black. I say, "in my mind" because at no point in the story do I ever explici...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Hyperion‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Avoiding episodic writing

I'm working on a novel that will have at least three distinct sections in three distinct locations (the two main characters start in the first location, travel through the second location, and one ...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Chris Sunami‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a way to make editing enjoyable?

I have my first draft more-or-less complete, and I've been working on editing it now. There is one big problem: I hate editing I find editing to be so draining. I'll open up a chapter to edit and ...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can I turn my anal-retentiveness into a career?

When I'm reading something, I immediately pick up on typos, grammatical errors, misuse of punctuation, and the like, as well as better ways to phrase things. I have no formal education in any sort ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by John Doe‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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About sound effects

I'm writing a script that shows a speaker interacting with their audience. The speaker finishes speaking and the audience reacts. I wrote it like this. Loud CHEERS from the audience. I'm wonderin...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Karen Kelly‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I introduce a large cast in an interesting way

I am currently writing a story about eleven college friends and a child. I don't want to just introduce them as "The Jock" or "The Delinquent," and I don't want to do a dry listing of "this is who...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Mai Green‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Amadeus‭

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Approach to pop culture quotes in fiction writing

I am contemplating writing a fictional character [nerd] who speaks in a pop culture references. I appreciate this question somewhat overlaps Referencing modern pop culture in science fiction The ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by user3473715‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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I'm looking for advice on character development

I'm currently working on a team based story with a lot of characters and am looking for ways to really make their personalities stand out from one another. When I'm writing out their character pro...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by pandalarry‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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In this day and age should the definition / categorisation of erotica be revised?

My experience tells me that a disproportionate number of wannabe writers are prudes. I recently wrote a scene where a female character is watching TV. The build up is complicated so I'll have to ex...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Surtsey‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Difference between DITA and S1000D

I'm trying to understand the technical difference between DITA and S1000D. Yes, I know, the common wisdom is that if you need documentation for helicopter or submarine, you should use S1000D, and ...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by john c. j.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What if a dark protagonist doesn't want to change?

Dark protagonists. Heroes who are evil, pure flaws, or exhibiting only weakness or darkness, rather than strength or light. There is one basic assumption I would like to make about such characters:...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to create a likable and sympathetic character, even if they are a pervert?

I want to add a perverted character to my story (don't ask why), a bit like Master Roshi from Dragon Ball or Minoru Mineta from My Hero Academia. However, I want to make them more sympathetic and g...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by noClue‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is Social Media Science Fiction?

I am writing a science fiction story (actually a screenplay for a film, but I imagine that for the purposes of this question the same rules apply) and I have been told that it isn't really science ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by user124‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How large should photos on my blog be?

I sometimes post photos on my blog, like when I'm blogging about food. I've been shrinking the huge pictures my phone takes down to a size that fits more reasonably in a browser window -- my brows...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Monica Cellio‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Preferred word for "preferred", "target", "chosen" in end user support documentation

I'm having trouble finding and sticking to one word to indicate whatever value the user intends to use with my instructions. For example: Select your preferred printer. I'm wondering what s...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Pierce Devol‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I avoid the "chosen hero" feeling?

In many works of genre-fiction (I'm talking mainly about fantasy and sci-fi, but others genres can apply), and across many forms of media, the main characters ends up being special in some ways. M...

10 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to indicate that the source language is gender-neutral?

The source language in question is Standard Chinese. It is a gender-neutral language. One big thing that English speakers complain about English is the gendered pronoun, namely the third person sin...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Double U‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should an author include user-interactive sections in his website?

Related questions: Should an author have one website or two? As an new author, how important is to have a personal website? Pros and Cons: A blog to get feedback A possible duplicate of, even i...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Liquid‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Correct use of "Call for Proposals" in plural context

I'm trying to correctly refer to several calls. Meaning, in a singular call, we invite several proposals. Therefore, it's a call for proposals. In the case I need assistance with, my gut tells me ...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Ahmed Sagarwala‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Using too much dialogue?

I'm working on a novel of my own and, looking back at the bits of it I have so far brought into light, that almost everything in it is dialogue. Is this a bad thing? How could I fix this if it is?

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Hunter Grabowski‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to balance a blog post that is neither too detailed nor too surface level?

While writing blog post mostly on technical articles, I often come to dilema that does my post is too detailed for reader eventually they will skip further reading due to complexity or is it too s...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Prasad_Joshi‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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At what point does an interesting analogy become a distraction?

I've written a book. My question is if it is in bad {taste, karma, policy} to use an analogy that is disrupting to the reader's stream of consciousness. The quote in question is this: Like a b...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Chowzen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to incorporate a silent protagonist into a chatty world?

You see this a lot in video games: a silent protagonist who can somehow communicate with the rest of the world with seemingly no or few words. Usually, it's hand-waved away by simply assuming from ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by noClue‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a formula for creating stakes?

I thrive off of formulas. I don't do well with brainstorming or figuring out how things in my stories should happen, but I can make a lot of progress if there's a one-size-fits-all formula which ca...

6 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Kevin‭

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Is there an official license type applied by copyright holder that allows a written work to be continued upon/derived by third-party writers?

Say I create a copyrighted written work, is there a license I can apply to that same work that will allow a third party to create and copyright a derivative work? Is there an existing license or co...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Peter Stine‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Misdirection for suspense/plot twists - what's acceptable and what's dishonest?

Note: I'm primarily asking this question because while Surtsey, the original asker of the question didn't actually ask a thing (and instead copy-pasted an excerpt of a novel) I believe it's a worth...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Matthew Dave‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Can you pitch an outline?

Here's my question: can you pitch an outline of a novel to an agent? I.e. you have two to three chapters complete to a high standard and at full outline of the rest. Would any agents agree to re...

3 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by peanut‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is there a term for this?

I'll explain my question by citing what was done on the TV show Dexter. Halfway through an episode (Season 4, episode 4, 'All in the Family') two established characters (one of them being Deborah)...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Bob516‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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If I wouldn't want to read the story, is writing it still a good idea?

I struggle with forming full-fledged ideas. I'll come up with a snippet of an idea, have a hard time fleshing the idea out, and then lose interest before the idea becomes an actual story concept. ...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Alexis Strain‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do I present a future free of gender stereotypes without being jarring or overpowering the narrative?

My story takes place in a relatively near future setting where gender stereotypes have become a thing of the past. Unlike a recent question on another site, physiological sex-specific traits are st...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Columbia says Reinstate Monica‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do you keep track of projects/ideas until you have time to write them down?

I've read the answers to this question but they focus on getting ideas written down pretty much as they occur, that's not my issue, I have both digital and analog methods for doing so with me at al...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Ash‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What should I call a short book about my life? [closed]

I want to write a very short book of 100 pages. I want to put into it what I've suffered throughout my life: Hardships, failures, disappointments.... as an inspiration that, despite hardships, I su...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Peer Fezzan ‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it a common practice to provide a chapter/section reference from the next volume in a series to the previous?

When writing a series of fiction books in which characters, universe, and events are closely related, is it a common practice in English publications to provide a footnote kind of reference, for ex...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by user42094‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Using a prominent phrase from the title of a film in the body of an article, essay or paper, without referencing the title

I'll start with a clear example. You are writing an essay about the film The Wizard of Oz. Following the rules of titles, you put the film title in italics whenever you use it. But then you use t...

0 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Kat‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Two footnote numbering sequences

Inspired by this question, a more complex question: how can I have two simultaneous sequences of footnotes? For example, suppose I am translating a book. The book contains footnotes, numbered in s...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Difference between Abstract, Introduction and Conclusion in a research paper

I have found some similar questions here but they were about the difference between Abstract and Introduction without the Conclusion. So, what difference between Abstract, Introduction from one s...

1 answer  ·  posted 4y ago by Leox‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Future battlegrounds

What makes a battle scene tense and visceral is the immediate danger and the fast-paced action and reaction. For that, the human soldier needs to be on the battlefield, in the action. Here's the p...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Galastel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to convey the anatomy of a humanoid race?

I am writing a extra-terrestrial high fantasy novel. The story is completely set in an alien world. No visits from Earth and no visits to Earth. My characters are humanoids, who look like elves...

4 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by Sangeetha‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by DPT‭

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How do I make a "contract" with my reader? [closed]

(EDITED TO MAKE IT LESS BROAD AND MORE CLEAR). I recently asked a question about if I really need to include scientific proof for my mostly-non-scientific post-apocalyptic novel, and the best answ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by weakdna says reinstate monica‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How does someone write a moving Declaration of Independence?

Context: I'm among a growing number of people who are becoming dissatisfied with Stack Exchange. In some ways (not all, but some), Stack Exchange's behaviour is analogous to "curation without rep...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by becky82‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by DPT‭

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Third Person POV: What level of telling is acceptable for character motivation?

The novel I'm writing is third-person limited POV in style. This means that the narration's coverage is limited to what the POV character can observe, think, feel, while others' thoughts, feelings,...

2 answers  ·  posted 6y ago by Matthew Dave‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to clarify between imagined sensations and "real" fantasy events?

I feel like the title is worded really bad, but I seem to be unable to find a better way. I am not a native speaker. Scenario A: A character is in an exceptional state of mind (i.e. drug use etc.)...

2 answers  ·  posted 4y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Song quote for an 'in memoriam'

I would like to quote a few lines of a lyric from St. Vincent's song "New York", for an 'in memoriam' I want to put in a newspaper on the anniversary day of my friend's death. Do I need to get perm...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by matt tanen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to collect scattered ideas on various topics in to a blog post/ writing article?

I try to write on various Q&A sites, but now I am thinking about having my own blog website. The main thing is that I don't know exactly what my niche topics would be for blogs. I write on vari...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Prasad_Joshi‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭