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General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

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Resources for character development

I'm weak at building characters. What resources are there to create rich characters? I'm thinking beyond name generators: Quirks, biography, diseases like allergies, hobbies and jobs, wealth, omen...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Aaron Digulla‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Why do ebooks often mimic the layout of the printed page?

I was recently editing a novel destined to be published primarily in e-book form, and made a list of pre-press instructions, to be followed when the final text is agreed upon. Some of these instruc...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Neil‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Least possible editing effort if a text is for multiple media?

I want to write a text with some basic styles and images. I plan to use it on a blog, maybe later in a wiki. And there should be a pdf version. I am writing about a software. So there will be scre...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by David Bopp‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A friendlier way to write charges or fees to clients?

What is a better way to write in an email to tell my client that I will charge him a fee of say $100? Often, I feel very reluctant to write these ways: I will quote the hosting and development ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by xenon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Anybody know anything about examiner.com?

Apparently it's some sort of "pro-am" site. I applied to be a travel writer and they, uh, picked me. I'm curious if anybody knows where examiner.com is on a 1 to 10 scale where "1" is "Applicatio...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Malvolio‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Book recommendations for writing better technical papers

My employer has presented me with two books to read to help me write better technical papers and emails. Essentials of English Grammar and Handbook of English Grammar and Usage. I have read throu...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Adam Lewis‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do you connect a non sequitur hook to a novel?

A pineapple is walking down a street, but here’s the kicker: he’s completely naked. That was a non sequitur hook I thought of. I figured that it would raise a bunch of really interesting ques...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by m4tt‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Avoiding legal issues with plot similarities between my book and a movie in production

I am writing a novel whose plot that I just learned is going to be made into a movie---how can I protect myself if similar plot points are used so that I don't get sued and vice versa?

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Greg‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do you track dependencies for your co-authors?

I and one or more co-authors, sometimes geographically distributed, are working on a set of related documents. Sometimes I will make a change in my part that affects someone else's part; this coul...

4 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Monica Cellio‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by Monica Cellio‭

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I'm not a great pantser; what kind of preparation do I need for NaNoWriMo?

I'm very appreciative of NaNoWriMo's "your first step is writing a crappy first draft" credo, and I like the motivation that NaNoWriMo encourages. I'm precisely at the point where what I feel I nee...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Standback‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What's your favorite keyboard? [closed]

After using a Logitech Internet Pro keyboard for the past several years, as well as an Acer OEM keyboard occasionally, I'm seriously thinking about getting a new keyboard. I write upwards of 7,000 ...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by maguay‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Good Outlining Solutions For OSX?

I write technical non-fiction and find that I cannot write well without first constructing a detailed (10-20 page) outline. Are there any good outlining solutions for OSX? Apps? Templates in Micros...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Wolf's Dilemma‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is the proper way to write a date containing two days in a row?

I have a presentation that will go from August 4th to the 5th. On my title slide I'd like to list the dates in the most concise and simple way possible. What's the best style? I currently have: A...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Mark‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Know any metaphors about women that...?

... are very skilled in getting men to like them, men really easily fall in love with them, but they (the women) are not interested in anything more than a sexual relationship?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Paul‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is translation work likely to help me develop my own writing abilities?

I've been offered work translating some creative works into English. Is this kind of work likely to push my creative boundaries, and teach me how to be a better write of my own original creative wr...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by blueberryfields‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When should one use a section sign (§)?

When I asked this on English.SE, the question was closed; it was suggested that I ask on Writers.SE instead. To be clear, I mean the section sign § (utf-8: 0xC2 0xA7), which is available via \S in ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Warrick‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What elements should be included in a story's setting?

I know this will vary depending on the type of the story and the characters involved, not to mention the location itself. What I am looking for is some kind of guideline for identifying different a...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to make easy and fast money selling a short book (which is available for download)?

This is my first short book, it wrote it to give social awareness. But I would also like to make some money (to avoid dying of hunger). Any suggestions?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How do evil protagonists win the reader over in dark fantasy stories? [closed]

I thought about writing fantasy story from the perspective of the evil antagonist (think from Sauron's perspective). So my bad guy will be the protagonist and my good guys will be the antagonist. I...

7 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Attributives in dialogue

I normally stick with "he said" and "she said" to keep things simple and transparent to the reader but wondering about questions. Is "she asked" and "he asked" appropriate when a character asks a q...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Slick23‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Verb tense for technical document titles

I'm writing a technical manual about creating database systems, and wondered what is the best verb tense for title names. My ideas are: Continuous (-ing) form: (e.g. "Creating a Cluster", "Creat...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Adam Matan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should I start work on a sequel before I have sold my book?

I finished the 1st draft of my book, and have put it in the freezer(as I asked about in this question). I was planning to start work on a sequel of the book in the meantime. But I was told by some...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Tips for humor writing

Are there any techniques you can use while brainstorming to find humor to include in an article?

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Gary‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Quality examples of 'in medias res' starting sequences in SF literature

You can find my initial trials here, and, based on feedback, version two here. I was trying to create a sort of 'flashforward' opening (please don't cite Sawyer) for a novel. That is: of the 45 ch...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Mussri‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Referring to oneself in first vs. third person in online profiles

Suppose I am writing a post/blog, how should I mention myself? For example, Ray Wenderlich (Site Admin) Ray is an indie software developer currently focusing on iPhone and iPad developmen...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by System‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Technical Writing Software

I'm interested in newer software/software stack to use in writing technical papers. For the longest time I have been use LaTeX to handle this but in looking at getting longer pieces published, such...

6 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Travis‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How can I express this more clearly or concisely?

I'm documenting a block of computer code and would like to make it clear and concise. I'm describing a function that populates a field on a user input screen. Here's my best shot but it still seems...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by zundarz‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do episodes of the show House follow a constant structural pattern?

I've seen a few episodes of House M.D., and I wonder, are the episodes written according to a fixed structural pattern? If so, what are the details, and why does such a structure make the show pop...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by blueberryfields‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it OK to refer to some characters by first name and to others by last name?

I'm writing the outline for my first novel, which has three main characters. I'm very happy with their names, however I recently noticed that I was naturally referring to the first two by first nam...

3 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Carl Seleborg‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Will my readers feel like they are reading a children's storybook if there are illustrations in my novel?

I'm writing a novel. I also have good drawing skills. I would like to add illustrations of the setting, locations, and characters. I may include 8 or 10 illustrations (the novel is approximately 20...

5 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Which words should not be capitalized in Title Case?

I would need a list of all words that are not capitalized in English titles. I would also like to make sure if it's true, that all first and last words of a title are capitalized no matter what. ...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by gligoran‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Should a flashback be in past tense or past perfect?

Assuming the story itself is in past tense, normally when I go further into the past I'd use past perfect: He had first met her at the grocery store, six months prior. However, which is more...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Yamikuronue‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to fix awkward "sufficiently... that..." sentence structure?

I have written the following sentence, but I am dissatisfied with its construction. In particular, the that joining the two parts of the sentence reads somewhat awkwardly. Can anyone suggest a bett...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Faheem Mitha‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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A letter of recommendation

I am a programmer/engineer who has been asked to write a letter of recommendation for a colleague, who wishes it to help him pursue higher education. Since I feel it necessary, to be very professi...

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Zasz‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is the effect on the young reader when there is no "Happy Ending" in a story for children?

It is a common practice for a story for children to have a happy ending. Would it be considered inappropriate and disappointing for the young reader if his hero/heroine will suffer a horrible trage...

4 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Axarydax‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Journal subscription secrecy

Robert Darnton, an accomplished scholar and important name in the open access movement, has a piece in the current New York Review of Books, The Library: Three Jeremiads, where he mentions that ...

0 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Charles Stewart‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What is a log line, and why are they bad?

The question is as per the title. I read about log lines on Query shark. Now I know what Wikipedia says about them, but I'm still not sure what they are, and why are they bad for writers / queries?

1 answer  ·  posted 12y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Little did he know

In the movie "Stranger Than Fiction" the professor of literature makes quite a big deal about the phrase "little did he know." I've written papers on "Little did he know." I've taught classes o...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Jack B Nimble‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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What can I do to improve my concentration when reading? [closed]

(I hope this is sufficiently on-topic - couldn't find anywhere else in Stack Exchange more suitable...) Currently I am having to do a lot of reading of academic papers - some dry stuff but not exc...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Mark Gibaud‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Do books have to be written in sequence?

So can we write the interesting action bits first, then add in the in between stuff, that maybe needed to understand the story or characters, but isnt so exciting by itself? For example the intere...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Shantnu Tiwari‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Is it acceptable for a book to not have a dominant lead character?

I saw this question posted in another forum, and it didn't have any responses, so naturally I decided to bring it over here. :) I realized, 80% of the way through my first draft, that I don't h...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Steven Drennon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Why is "It was a dark and stormy night.." not a good opening?

Also, why has it spawned an award for bad writing?

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by theTuxRacer‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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When should I use punctuation with bullets?

When writing bulleted items, what are the rules for placing periods? Presumably bulleted items that aren't sentences wouldn't require punctuation: Orange Apple Banana But how about sentence bul...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by el2iot2‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to share the work, if writing fiction in a team?

How should one split up the work between two people? Should one write the even-numbered chapters and the other the odd-numbered? Does each person tell the story from the point of view of a differen...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Mnementh‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How to attract the average reader to an "intellectual" novel?

For instance, If I write a novel which has the following: “The universe goes through a gradual transition from one condition, to a different condition, without any abrupt changes.” ...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by Alexandro Chen‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Advice on interface text in a videogame

[This fits somewhere between technical writing and user experience, so perhaps this is the wrong board] I'm developing a modification to a popular videogame (a Playstation One RPG), with the expre...

3 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by Jimmy Breck-McKye‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does this beginning hook the reader? [closed]

Guide lines Q no. 4: This is supposed to be the opening part, but certainly not the whole of the first chapter or page for that matter... I'm not exactly sure anyone would take 30 seconds to read t...

2 answers  ·  posted 12y ago by Mussri‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Does this paragraph make you want to keep reading?

Can you remember the last toy you ever bought? We do. Here at the St. Abattoir, London's largest toy store, your childhood is our business. We think of ourselves not as merely customer ser...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by user2325‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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How credible is wikipedia? [closed]

I understand that this question relates more to wikipedia than it does writing but... If I was going to use wikipedia for a source for a research project (for example) would the information be cor...

2 answers  ·  posted 13y ago by alexyorke‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

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Checklist for making sure your writing is Atomic?

Question: Can someone please give me a list of things to check when reviewing a document to make sure that it is atomic. Atomic? Meaning that anyone can start reading at any section in a docume...

1 answer  ·  posted 13y ago by leeand00‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭