Communities

Writing
Writing
Codidact Meta
Codidact Meta
The Great Outdoors
The Great Outdoors
Photography & Video
Photography & Video
Scientific Speculation
Scientific Speculation
Cooking
Cooking
Electrical Engineering
Electrical Engineering
Judaism
Judaism
Languages & Linguistics
Languages & Linguistics
Software Development
Software Development
Mathematics
Mathematics
Christianity
Christianity
Code Golf
Code Golf
Music
Music
Physics
Physics
Linux Systems
Linux Systems
Power Users
Power Users
Tabletop RPGs
Tabletop RPGs
Community Proposals
Community Proposals
tag:snake search within a tag
answers:0 unanswered questions
user:xxxx search by author id
score:0.5 posts with 0.5+ score
"snake oil" exact phrase
votes:4 posts with 4+ votes
created:<1w created < 1 week ago
post_type:xxxx type of post
Search help
Notifications
Mark all as read See all your notifications »
Q&A

General Q&A about the craft of professional writing, editing, and publishing. Questions about all types of writing are welcome -- fiction, technical documentation, scholarly articles, poetry, scriptwriting, blogs, and more.

Filters (None)
60%
+1 −0
Git plugins for MS Word?

Is anyone aware of a plugin for MS Word that allows me to keep my documents in a git repository (gitlab compatibility would be even better)? I'm aware that git diffs won't be very meaningful, merge...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Kurt Weber‭  ·  edited 3y ago by Monica Cellio‭

60%
+1 −0
How to describe a feeding hand motion in the following context

In context, a guy and a girl have a date, and in restaurant, they are having this moment, where girl feeds guy with "Say 'Ah!'". What is the best way to describe this motion from the guy's perspec...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Vadzim Savenok‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Changing perspectives

For the most part, my story is told from the main character's perspective. However, there are a few scenes that I would like to write that really don't require the main character to be there. I cou...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
When should the protagonist have a self-revelation?

So far, I've been learning rules and guidelines for plotting a good story from John Truby's excellent "The Anatomy of Story". Truby structures plot using 22 steps (a summary here). Among them, th...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Moonwhisper‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How long should I mention an injured character’s pain?

My main character gets shot and survives. One thing that bothers me is a character who is injured and keeps going like the energizer bunny. I try to set up for a rapid recovery, mentioning traini...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Rasdashan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Generalize or specialize?

If you are starting a freelance product description writing business, do you generalize or specialize? In other words, do you offer writing in an area like "product descriptions for tech companies"...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by japclass15‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Authorship implications of presenting one’s manuscript as an older one in the prologue

Umberto Eco, E. T. A. Hoffmann and others have pretended (in the introduction to the story) to have found and edited obscure old manuscripts. In my view this added to the charm of their writings. ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Ludi‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How to make literature review for a software implementation project?

I don't know if this is out of the scope of this website. I'm a student in software engineering deparment and I am supposed to make a project for a course during the semester. The first step of it ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by VOLKAN BAKIR‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Help with reasons for rebellions against my oligarchic/Philosopher kings inspired empire [closed]

The government of this (fantasy) world is made up of a small group, randomly chosen at birth and representing maybe 0.5% of the population. The group are tutored in their homes with their families ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Blanded Gear‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Can there be written narratives (not movies or films, but books) without any narrator?

Would it be possible? It strikes me as impossible but I am still curious to know what you think.

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Vaishu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How to write female characters as a male writer?

Yesterday I asked a question about writing a female character who has agency. Much to my surprise, it was well-received and generated a lot of great discussion. In reading that discussion, howeve...

5 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by J.D. Ray‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How to write female characters with agency?

I'm attempting to write a novel, an historical fiction with a small fantasy component (time travel through a portal). The travelers (main characters) are a young couple from the late 23rd Century ...

6 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by J.D. Ray‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How to simulate someone talking with a full mouth?

If, for example, someone said : "How are you today?", how would you go about "translating" this into sounding like they were talking with a full-mouth? Like, phonetically.

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by klippy‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Dissertation results section - report variables or operationalizations? [closed]

Following APA style - Do I report my results in the dissertation using the variables I'm researching or their operationalizations? For example, which is style is correct: The correlation between...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by user3315563‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Subplots better than the main plot

The main plot follows the MC while travelling through the world trying to rescue his family. While doing this however, he must overcome a lot of difficulties. These are subplots focused on other ch...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by scrp‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
What is an "active writing style"? [closed]

The preface of Introduction to Algorithms mentions that In this, the third edition, we have once again updated the entire book. The changes cover a broad spectrum, including new chapters, revis...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Austin Conlon‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Suggesting for my book's Blurb

I am working on my upcoming book's blurb. One of my characters is a leader inspired by Hitler. I have mentioned him as "Hitler like leader". But this seems weak in my blurb. What can I write to c...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Abhishek dot py‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Why an ancient vampire sleeping for centuries under some castle in Europe would come to Brazil? [closed]

A vampire has been sleeping under a castle in Austria for centuries. But now the castle became a tourist attraction. It's really annoying. And the taste of the blood of the people on the region did...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Payuka‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Do multiple potential love interests dilute tension and diminish drama? [closed]

My MC is focused on his profession; barely giving his personal life a thought. His last serious romantic relationship with a woman was when he was 22. Time for that later, he believes. Retire at 45...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Rasdashan‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Could I use obsolete brand name in fiction book

I am currently working on a fiction book and my characters work for a company that in real life has been out of business for 30 years, but in my fiction book there is an alternate scenario and it h...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by adam bojovic‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Will my one sentence prologue work?

I know most readers don't like prologues, so I've tried to make it as simple as possible. I write the following knowing fully well how weird it’ll make me look. — A.B.G. A.B.G. Is the fi...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Jade‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Permission to use open source data

I am working on a technical book teaching users how to analyse data using geographic information systems. I would like to use data from an open source data portal such as open source fire departmen...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by David Fort Myers‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
What is the structure of a good essay? [closed]

Please help me understand various approaches towards developing an essay about issues of society (like women's empowerment, child education, sanitation, Global Warming, etc.). Specifically, I want...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by abcdmath‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Question regarding SAT essay

I will be appearing for the SAT with essay next month. However I am confused about one thing- are we allowed to use abbreviations like "we're" (we are) and "it's" (it is) in the essay section? Will...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Som V. Tambe‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How to write a convincing character with a opinion that differs from the author's?

So I wrote a short text recently in which the character has a very strong political opinion (anti-LGBTQ), which in addition is totally different to my own opinion. Now, I wanted to make the charact...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Féileacán‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Is focus more important in journalism than truth and facts?

Take the following short story. Let's imagine that it's an important even that should be reported on. One day, Little Red Riding Hood’s mother said to her, “Take this basket of goodies to yo...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by user3280964‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Interviewing a person for a character

So I'm building a character who works in a particular field of science and I found an e-mail for a scientist on the internet and emailed him. I described how I'm writing a sci-fi story and gave him...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Harshfi6‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Will the publisher/agent tell me what to write?

I recently read this answer, which suggested that an author's first novel will be rejected, and the publisher will instead get the author to write the novel they want to publish, assuming they feel...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Thomas Myron‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How to write a corporate character that likes to toy around with his colleagues? [closed]

I want to write a male, corporate working, character who is always cheerful and smiling, no matter whatever the situation he is in. As a result, reading his thoughts or motives is almost impossible...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Mike Chang‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Repetition of information in my multi-path / multi-play-through game - how to deal with it?

I'm working on a story-heavy game with lots of different paths the player can choose from. Many times, players might also have to replay parts of the game in certain ways to see the true ending. As...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by noClue‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How can I get a technical writing job for software apps without a degree? [closed]

I have no degree and I cannot afford to have one, however, I would really love to get into technical writing because I love writing and I am interested in web and software development. Right now, I...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Camilla S.‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
When is it okay to say the word “now” in a past tense story?

I’ve seen it done in Harry Potter I just don’t understand when its okay to do it, like can I say something like “John walked away from the house and was now walking along the road” or not? When is ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Angel‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How do I design characters for an open-ended series?

There is plenty of information on how to draft characters for a single story, or characters that follow an important arc throughout a (small) number of stories. Are there any techniques for design...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by F-H‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Whats the difference between inference and conclusion?

Two questions regarding inference and conclusion. 1: Is it true that Inference can be made from any paragraph, from any line of the text but conclusion is drawn from the entire text? 2: Why often i...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by user55697‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How to indicate that the source language is gender-neutral?

The source language in question is Standard Chinese. It is a gender-neutral language. One big thing that English speakers complain about English is the gendered pronoun, namely the third person sin...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Double U‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How to convert a roleplay into a book?

My partner and I usually enjoy role-playing together in free-form. I was thinking perhaps we could convert one of our role-plays into a book and publish it online. I wanted to ask if there are any ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Maiko Chikyu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Exposition: Talking Animals - How do I Reveal This to the Reader?

I'm writing a book series where most of the cast are highly anthropomorphized animals (or in some cases mythological creatures). Humans still exist in this universe, but are rare (only being found ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by The Weasel Sagas‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Are there any set rules to creating a story with audience participation?

I have recently grown interested in the idea of writing a litRPG novel where each two days I will publish a chapter describing a single day of the main character and at the end of the day the reade...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Maiko Chikyu‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
What are some examples of an inciting incident that would force a character to go on a quest or adventure?

I've noticed that my novel is missing a really strong inciting incident and I can't think of anything strong enough to suffice. The only inciting incidents I'm familiar with seeing in nearly every ...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Nsim‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How to describe a mythological creature that English has no vocabulary for?

The term is 妖精, which can be translated into English as "fairy", "elf", "goblin". As noted, the Japanese literature uses 妖精 to describe the European fairy. The English translation of 白骨精 in 西游记 (Jo...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Double U‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How to give characters a unique voice

When writing dialogue all the characters sound the same. I'm not sure I even know what giving a character a voice means, but my dialogue sucks so any advice will be greatly appreciated.

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by pandalarry‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Can dream reveals make good climaxes for a POV’s internal struggle?

Dream twists just spoil our senses of disbelief. I can see how that can be excetuted carelessly, but if done for the need of showing what the main character wants or fears most then maybe it would ...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Edmund Frost‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Can i have two low points in a story?

It's a TV episode. the heroes reach a low point where they think they're defeated, one of the characters has an idea to make things work, they follow him and it eventually leads to a combat scene, ...

3 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Ahmad Khattab‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
How do I indicate that my character is speaking a different language than the one used for narration?

The main character I have in mind for a story in a fantasy setting will be in foreign lands for the entirety of the book. She will have a basic grasp of the spoken language, so her dialogue will us...

2 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Pasqueflower‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
"Stealing" jokes

In one of my stories, I have a character who is a bit of a smart ass, always cracking jokes at the expense of others and sometimes even himself. I often get inspired by things I find on the interne...

4 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by noClue‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Parentheses in scientific writing

I occasionally use parentheses in scientific writing when a piece of information is related to a previous statement but not to the central story. Is it bad style in scientific writing to use pare...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Bananach‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Is it appropriate to use an emoticon in reminder email to a potential employer?

A potential employer promised me a response but hasn't sent one yet, and I'd like to follow up by email. It's a potential job opportunity, and it'd be detrimental to sound too hasty or pushy. I w...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by legoMyEgo‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
What if my published short story is made a movie or a novel, without my permission?

I am writing a short story and thinking of publishing it in the next month. But then, I had a doubt. What if somebody takes it, expands it and changes it a bit and makes a movie or a novel out of ...

0 answers  ·  posted 5y ago by Raj‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Druid girl learns necromancy [closed]

I have an interesting plot ready, although there are a few missing blocks which I cannot develop. Story: A girl is a daughter of a druid. Druids are humans who live in the forest protecting anima...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by SovereignSun‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭

60%
+1 −0
Writing part word

If I'm writing a dialog and my character get interrupted and cut off in the middle of a sentence can I write half a word and put three dots? I thought it was okay to do this, but I realized that I ...

1 answer  ·  posted 5y ago by Lymaba‭  ·  last activity 4y ago by System‭